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A human wakes up as a pony. He has no memory of what happened. No idea why or how he got to where he is. He can't recall his own NAME. Now must find out what this new strange world is. Was coming to this place a gift or a curse?

My first fanfiction. Not doing as well as I hoped, but it was a good start all the same. ¯\_(ツ)_|¯ Maybe I could re write it one day....

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Good story a little fast paced

Started off a bit meh, but it got a little better as it progressed. Nice work for your first.

Hollynight just sighed, “Capidas is a human and we’re trying to find out why he’s here and how we can get him back to his world.” Hollynight said.
“I don’t believe you.” Glaciem responded.
“I can prove it!” Hollynight said with determination and stomped her hoof down. “Look at his flank. See. It’s blank. A regular pony would have a cutie mark by his age.”
Glaciem looked at my flank. It felt increasingly uncomfortable of having this stranger just examine my butt. Perhaps this must be normal for ponies?
“That is strange. Wow, a human, an ACTUAL human,” Glaciem looked me up and down. “But who or what did this to you, what did this thing look like?”

That's a bit weird to be honest. There ARE a bunch of other blank flank adults in the show, at least two for sure. One was a cherry seller in Putting Your Hoof Down, and there's a farming one. Aside from that, being a blank flank doesn't really lead specifically to being human.

1390029 Those blank flank adults are all animation errors.

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