You Can Never Trust Anypony!

Rarity thought that she knew who Fluttershy was. But then one day she found out who Fluttershy really was!

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chapter 1 · 3rd Mar 2012 · 2,471 words
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Chapter 2 · 3rd Mar 2012 · 798 words
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chapter 3 · 3rd Mar 2012 · 562 words
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chapter 4 · 3rd Mar 2012 · 1,189 words
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chapter 5 · 3rd Mar 2012 · 739 words
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chapter 6 · 3rd Mar 2012 · 1,161 words
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Chapter 7 · 3rd Mar 2012 · 1,076 words
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Chapter 8 · 3rd Mar 2012 · 1,122 words
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Chapter 9 · 3rd Mar 2012 · 912 words
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Chapter 10 · 3rd Mar 2012 · 814 words
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Uh-uh

Uh-uh #1 · Mar 4th, 2012 · · · chapter 1 ·

You need to work on the grammar and punctuation,
It also seems as if you are rushing your work and not putting in enough detail.
slow down and see if you can add more description.

thatguyfromkfc

thatguyfromkfc #2 · Mar 4th, 2012 · · · chapter 1 ·

Need to work on grammar and punctuation. I might just report this. Rating a story wrong is one of the worst things you could do.

11Bolts

11Bolts #3 · Mar 4th, 2012 · · · Chapter 10 ·

That picture is a major turn off.
Did you by any chance rape literature?
No offense, just an expression.

IraqLobstah

IraqLobstah #4 · Mar 4th, 2012 · · · Chapter 10 ·

286900
Im pretty sure this is just a troll fic used
to hate on Fluttershy fans.

Cheers
~iraqlobstah

Rainbow Dash the Awesome

Rainbow Dash the Awesome #5 · Mar 4th, 2012 · · · Chapter 10 ·

I've read a fic before with this exact same title and premise (right down to the characters), but I am intrigued by the fact that it wasn't even close to this long and it didn't feature anypony but Fluttershy and Rarity. The fact that you made it much longer and included more characters intrigues me, although if this is ANYTHING like the one I read before, it was most certainly mislabeled when you marked it as "Everyone."