Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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Loving the stead progress and character growth. Plus I bet it is going to be harder and harder detaching themselves from the ponies worming into each of their hearts. Some hoping to be a permanent piece/ long time love.
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Some characters are going to be very attached. Hell, Sniff already made it clear he wants to come back if at all possible. Others... Some might not want to leave at all. And it probably won't take long for some ponies not only want them to come back and visit, they might want them to just straight up live there.
I'm sure the emotional and mental support they provide will play a big role in that, too.
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Understandable as it is difficult allowing yourself to be vulnerable to others. Which is a lot of trust required (from my own experience)
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That certainly was an element to the story that was hard to work with, but also essential to allow the story to progress naturally. The human characters are damaged and want to be better, but I didn't want them to be so emotionally weak that they would start gushing at the first opportunity. When they do open up, they all have their own reasons. Guilt, desperation, tit for tat, an attempt to find some common ground, or a show of trust.
And even when they do, it's personal and with a purpose. They're not proud to admit their faults and issues. The vulnerabilities are a mix of what they personally experienced, how they feel about it, how they dealt with it, and the fear of letting others know about the life they used to live or lifestyles that might have put them in those situations.
Looking back earlier in the story, while it wasn't necessarily intentional, if you stop and think about how Ponies leave their emotions and who they really all out in the open, just as they do their bodies, Becky saying:
It does kind of set the pretext for how these characters all act and naturally set up their personal barriers. We all tend to keep things rather well hidden and only make the excepting for a certain few.
And Lord knows I've had my struggles.
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Yeah which makes these guys seem way more real and deep in character. One of the many reasons I enjoy this story.
53 likes. I wonder why so few comment...
15 Dislikes. I wonder were there constructiv critic is?
How many read the story i wonder. Any idea were i can check it out?
What jobs to they have again?
2 soldiers, 1 building expert aaannnddd?
Pretty sure the girls didn't tell us if they had currently a job...
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You can follow the statistics here: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/stats/418881
Over half of the dislikes happened before most of my chapters had proper editing done for them. So, I have to imagine spelling and grammar errors turned a lot of my earliest viewers away. Also, the first chapter is very OC heavy with human characters, that alone can be enough to turn people away if they come in expecting pony content. Even the second chapter reads exactly like a slice of and lacks the darker more adult themes that are tagged for my story that that could turn them off as well.
Otherwise, my story is long and puts a lot into character and world-building. Some people might want more action or smut. Of which, my action scenes are spaced out and I don't really do "smut" when it comes to the erotic elements. But, this is my story and I'm writing it how I see fit. So, it's whatever. If people don't like it, they don't and I might get a thumbs down.
Otherwise, I think realistically I have about 70 to 90 regular readers, with probably no more than 50 spotty readers that might take long gaps between reading chapters or bing read once every couple of weeks. But, my more regular uploads every week have seemed to increase viewership upvotes. I mean, if you look at the statistics. 22 upvotes to only 2 down votes since November? That's not bad.
I had just a nice idea. Why not let them have a car battery that Starlight copy - paste for Equestria to research? Would improve there tech and help our humans keep there running. Wind and water would be a great way to have clean energy for the house and could keep everything charged?
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I got a handle on how this is going to work out. ^__~
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I put a lot of work into those few chapters. Well... all of my chapters, but those ones with the dance I put a lot of thought into the pairings, the music selections, and even had to look up dancing tutorials/examples.
Glad you enjoyed it, though.
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Drunk ponies are fun ponies.
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Ha-Ha! *Brohoof* 》》》/)(\《《《
How do all this species keep there genetic health up right with so low numbers...
Is there world so empty or is it just small...
The first would be better
Somehow i get after Apocalypse vibes thinking about it...
I think Harmony can't micro manage more than like 100.000-200.000 life forms and keeps them from reproducing beyond control. There for Harmony needs to be destroyed so the populations of all races can grow to save levels
Freewill is dangerous gamble, but a broken system is a failure waiting to happen.
Not at all 'MORTAL COMBAT'
Fight
Cerberus is full of DETERMINATION!
This is going to be awesome for their level of major events. The adventure after that even more so.
But Cerberus could really work more on reasonable motives than just headbutt the opposition
At least the others keep him level headed.
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If anything, you can't say I don't know how to set the stage.