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By Celestias ever flaming tits! A update Great way to end 2020
What you get if you mix chocolate and Apples?
... ... I dont know! But it sounds juicy
Applecider?...
Trademark that! That juicy treat would get em rich
Damn! That one smooth looking lover for AJ!
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If I had more to give, I would.
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AppleForest
AppleWood
Could shorten James and make it AppleJams
... AppleWood?
it's gonna be Apple Sause wants he starts to smash.
Ha! Not a terrible idea.
I choose a good artist for this.
Pinkie Pie will be the biggest carrots & cucumber fans in the near future
Or Gummy start a new hobby... Cave explorer
Lunas dreamwalking near Pinkie Pie might start a contest... Who drips more! Kelly, Pinkie or Luna
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I could see her doing that.
Oh, dear God, no.
Hey-Hey, now... Don't forget about Lyra and Rarity. There is some strong competition to go 'round.
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ABSOLUTLY PRICELESS ♡
Well that was...that was indeed a fucking chapter! 😅
Even when in a sexual environment, Lumberman & AppleJack can't stop being so fucking adorable. Even the corny sex talk was kinda lovable. It served it's purpose!
If AJ thought sucking was good, it's on sight for her insides when it's time to really get it on! Pray for that girl! She'll probably love it though.
What's with these mares & trying to suck the life out of dicks?! First Starlight with Chris, now AJ with Lumberman albeit he was enjoying that shit to the fullest!
Just reading that part made me almost grab myself in fear with the visualization of her doing that to me. Anything like that done to a manhood is bound to make someone squeamish.
CAN. WE. TALK. ABOUT. THAT. PICTURE?!.
Listen, I have never thought I would see a picture of a naked black man lying in bed, spooning with a orange, cowboy hat wearing, sentient talking equine with a southern accent but here we are.
Most Human X Pony shit that I've seen don't have facial features on the human so this is a very welcome change of pace.
And yo?, Lumberman is a good looking dude.
AJ, you take care of my nigga aight?!
Peachez is a godsent for these cover arts!
Pinkie Pie....just Pinkie Pie. What else could I say. 🤣
(Chapter 88.3. Make Love, Not Order.)
No guesses to who will be involved here in this chapter so this should fun.
Also new chapter day uploads coming Friday?! Fuck that's awesome because Friday is one of my favorite days of the week! 🤗
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Ahhhhhhh, I see what you did there.
I try... At least with writing. I suck at dirty talk in real life.
Oh, come on. You already know how much she's going to love that.
Well... there is... a reason... for everything...
I think you're the first person to comment about grabbing themself while reading a sex scene I wrote. By ignoring the actual context, my reply just seems a lot funnier. But yeah, they do tend to go pretty hard on the paint.
Of course!
Oh, come on. That's too specific.
I think the majority of humans in pics with ponies are just Anon types. An everyman/anyman that's easy for most people to imagine themselves in. That's usually a good selling technique, but I didn't want my characters to be hot-swappable, but their lives understandable.
I'm glad that I got her when I did.
Usually just saying her name pretty much sums it up... But I wonder how many picked up on something important to the story I snuck in there?
No guesses, as in you really can't figure it out, or are you saying that because it's that obvious?
Yeah, it had to happen because of my changing work schedule. Although, I might change things up and make the release early in the day... Still trying to work out the schedule for all of it.
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Yes...yes it was 😅. For real tho, this was actually something I've never seen before.
Really can't figure it out. It makes it all the more exciting.
Of course I would grab myself if something fucked happened to someone's manhood. That's a very sensitive area to have anything happen to. I be wincing in cringe when someone gets hit in the balls. You can "feel" that without actually feeling that. AJ & Star doing what they just did to their lovers dicks? 😬
Can't lie, I was scared as fuck that Pinkie was gonna go that far. Thank god she ain't THAT crazy!
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EmptyPlotFiller
True. There isn't really a lot of black people represented in MLP art. Not a lot of quality art at least.
Ah... Well, then. Perhaps a few clues I've sprinkled in throughout the story will start to make sense with another crumb I'll be sharing in the next chapter. As for who it involves... egh... I guess I'll leave you in suspense over it.
Getting sucked off after you cum isn't terrible. It's just overly sensitive for most people. It takes a while for it to be actually painful.
The only trick with these mares is convincing them to stop when it gets to that point... which I don't think Applejack got to that extent like Starlight did. As for Flutters and Rarity, I think they got caught up in the moment with each other and spared Cerb the overindulgence they could have gone after. Probably my favorite scene I've written so far for the visuals alone.
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I wouldn't do that to my readers... and I've written some horrific scenes already. A Gummi-Dildo is just a no-go for me.
Happy new Year ♡
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Happy New Year to you, too, bro.
Pinkie? I'll say this in the calmest way I can.
YOU.
HAVE.
GOT.
TO.
CHILL.
THE.
FUCK.
OUT.
That's gotta be the most nastiest thing I've ever heard!
Jelly & sexual jokes should not ever be used in a sentenced together. Just sounds gross. The Boondocks taught me that.
It sure is funny as hell tho. 🤣
Pinkie's a whole ass mess.
Btw, Happy New Year Empty! 🥳
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She's trying, dude! You know if she wanted to get Benny alone and his pants down she could do it. Yet, here she is... failing to fuck herself with a banana.
I knew someone who said the reversal of that statement, in some regards. I laughed pretty hard when I first heard it, and brought that little jem into this world for you to read.
Also, not only is Pinkie mess as a whole, pretty sure her hole is going to be a mess.
Happy New Year to you, too. So glad to have you still following along with me.
The second case of Phoenix Wright in Equestria is finaly done!
IMPORTANT!!!
DONT - READ - THE - COMMENT- SECTION on youtube.
Enjoy ♡
Part 1:
Part 2:
Part 3:
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Oh, I'm looking forward to this.
So if Fridays are going to be the new schedule for chapter updates, will bonus Saturday releases be a different day as well? That's if you can even have those anymore due to your new job.
Btw, congrats on that! Hope it pays well.
In relation to the story, so these mares just out here becoming professional dick suckers with zero experience?!
Damnit Peter! Go get you some :
Perfect
Pony
Pussy
Yeah, I made that dumbass alliteration & you damn right that I'm ashamed & cringing at the fact that I sat here & typed that out. 😅
This story man, why the hell am I so interested & what is it doing to me?! 😅
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The plan as of right now is Fridays, though I'm considering doing an early morning release just to get it out of the way. That also wouldn't leave most of the readers waiting on the edge of their seats to make sure I put it out on time.
And thanks. I'm still trying to get settled in and only met some of the people I'll be working with. I haven't actually started, and won't until next week... maybe.
I'd argue that it's not so much skill or technique that makes them so proficient, as much as physically they're just better suited for it. Bigger, stronger, longer, softer, and far more dextrous tongues. Their body temp is naturally higher than a humans, coupled with their supernatural thirst for... that which will quench said thirst, has made their efforts that much stronger. Thus, providing more intensity of what is already physically superior from what the humans could have anticpated.
Oh, please. I've already written worse without alliteration.
Also; Perfect purple pony princess pussy would be a bit more alliterated.
Meh, I think an interesting story is enjoyable just because that's how it's viewed by the reader. I've just gone a different route than a lot of other writers (from what I can tell), on what I choose to focus on.
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Luna does know about the Agency’s practices, but Celestia has acted without her sisters knowledge. Given the time frame, Bon Bon had been removed from S.M.I.L.E. before Luna’s return and defeat as Nightmare moon. So, Luna wouldn't even think to suspect they're being spied or that Bon Bon or Lyra are actively spying on the humans.
Given her fondness for Sniff, as well as the rest, Luna would likely blow a gasket.
This ain't a question for the chapter, it's more for the response to the picture featured in the chapter. I took a look on derpibooru & the amount of downvotes (as they called it) was....quite a lot.
Must've been a shocker huh?
Think that there's some closeted racism there (you did say people of color aren't really seen in MLP art) or maybe some people were just expecting....more coming from an image like that?
It could be both. I'm just pondering.
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I commented to a few people under the picture with my thoughts on the matter. I'm prettysure there are those that downvoted it strictly based on the fact that Lumberman's character is black.
I may never know, but that doesn'tchange the down vote count or my intentionsto continuewith the story.
Finally caught up on all the chapters, and damn I am impressed. This is some fine storytelling here. And human on pony smut, which is doubly awesome. Who knew that having good plot with one's porn was so good? And no, pun not intended on 'plot'.
I'm really loving the world building here, and the effect the human's Order magic is having on the world. The last chapter between Benny, Octavia and Vinyl being a perfect point. The ponies don't have the 'zing' between themselves, but once the human's touch starts adding Order magic to their Harmony, it's like all their inner switches are turned to a sexy "ON". The only way that scene could have been clearer in my eyes, is if Octavia went down on Vinyl again and suddenly it felt amazing.
One minor thing I'd bring up about the 'blood-related' injuries. I absolutely get your distinction between the Harmony-allowed injuries being limited to bruises and broken bones, and Order-related spilled blood like Kelly's stab wound and the split lips that the ponies have gotten. You've definitely made a good distinction between the two. But my inner Twilight insists on stating that bruises are technically blood spilled under the skin and thus could also be called 'blood-related' injuries.
Oh, and I am insanely jealous of Cerb and Chris. Rarity and Derpy would have been my top picks.
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Having a good plot makes the story interesting, then having good characters can help get you invested in their relationships. So... when the time arrives, it's all that much better.
Well, Order is a bit more like quantum strings, and not actually magic. Regardless, with everything being presented, it does appear that Order is the deciding factor in our ponies ability to enjoy these more intimate moments.
Oh, without a doubt, bruises are still an injury where blood leaves the veins, arteries, or capillaries. Even with broken bones, the internal damage can be horrific. However, the term "blood-related injury" is strictly meant to imply that there is an open wound where blood leaves the body. The more technical term would be an open wound vs a closed wound, but... it's the term I decided to go with based on the ponies limited experiences and knowledge about these types of injuries.
I honestly have a hard time saying who would be the ones I would pick, and part of me doesn't even like the idea of being able to "claim" one. I suppose that's one of the reasons I never had any of the humans go out of their way to start a relationship with any of the ponies they ended up with. Each time it was them being approached and then eventually either something would naturally developed or became something they were tempted into.
... except for Kelly. She went from a 2 to an 8 after Big Mac saved her. She's the only oddball when you really think about it. Well... her and Becky, who has no interest shown as of yet.
How do they don't dehydrated being horny 12/7
I love the way you write AJ in this. If there's one thing I have a weakness for, it's a pretty country gal, and AJ is exactly that.
Also, that pic. I see Lumberman and all I can think of is that stupid Chad meme haha like damn that's one chiseled jawline lol
Pinkie Pie the Jelly Donat that needs her middle filled
Gummy is truly a genius - 👍
Kinda surprised that Pinkie don't ask Becky or Kelly for advice. From one female to another, they doing to have a girls night with all the benefits of sharing Guidebooks they wrote themself
Poor Pinkie Pie... she is a less successful new 'Drips', maybe Drip 2.0 with Kelly being number 1
Maybe Kelly can become her teacher and Pinkie Pie will rival Cadance for her titel as princess of love
Damn, Lumberman and Applejack got a great time, perhaps becoming the next Chris and Starlight sex marathon runners 👍
With Discord getting unable to interact with the humans because of their order and magic disruption, maybe Harmony will be unable to do so as well.
While Harmony has a Crystal body, it is still mostly magic.
I wonder if the humans effect the world more than just wih their effect on ponies, they produce waste after all.
Sweating, defecation, urination.
Wonder if the magic in their environment will change over time, with the earth absorbing and mixing with it.
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Pinkie didn't have the right mindset or ambitions to get with Benny in time. That, and she was busy with her daily job, so that kept her away to keep her close enough to potentially find either the opening she needed or the attraction she might have not have noticed earlier.
It's not her fault. More like bad timing.
Maybe if Kelly wasn't trying to change her ways. Not unless you mean Kelly was to only inform her, then maybe.
Maybe, but probably not. AJ is only one mare, while Starlight can swap out with her harem when she starts to get worn down.
Harmony and Discord are two sides of the same coin. Sure, they're different in a lot of ways, but they equally operate on different sides of the spectrum.
...or at least that's how they operate here.
The ponies of the world already sweat and produce bodily waste, so that won't change. Unless if you mean if the human's bodily waste will have some environmental impact, then that has yet to be seen.
We're pretty early into the story, so we'll have to wait and see.