Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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ember. mmmmaybe you should not eat things that contain evil incarnate just sayin
Time to edit this broken message:
The best time of way is when one get to read the notification that a update is released
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Maybe after getting her ass whooped she needed some comfort foods, but wasn't familiar with ice cream? Otherwise, I agree with you.
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Wut?
*Clears throat*
First things first
EMBER GOT THAT ASS WHOOPED!
(Also really love the image of Fluttershy summo flexing Ember. Shout to the artist, that looked dope.)
Let it be known that those are not playing games when it comes to their man.
Imagine the scenario in which Ember did challenge Star? She would be incinerated! Don't fuck with Chris!
That kick from Twilight was deserved. Learn to shut it dragon!
Ember's blissful reaction to the crystal, going as far as to compare it to the humans touch, specifically Justin's was something else. She wants that man!
Shining was Naruto in that scene with Zecora & Sunburst.
"I've haven't a clue what's going on here,
but I'll act like I do"
headass!
Poor Granny. Now she's gained a humongous amount of respect from me with how she was completely ok with her grandbabies being with the ones they love. Fuck Pear's father! That's just disgraceful. Love is love!
That's gotta be a Team Four Star reference right? Also RIP to the abridged series. :(
So the Pony Of Shadows is one dead mother fucker?! That's awesome! Now we get more scenes focusing on the ever growing relations between our humans & ponies. For how long? Shit has gotten so crazy in this story that whatever good happens will be short lived.
Cadence's whole thing with Justin continues to intrigue me as much as Shining's whole thing with Becky. Don't know how to really feel about it to be honest. I guess that soon it'll all make sense.
Starlight X Prim & Cream X Cheerilee were.....DESCRIPTIVE.
(I ain't complaining but wholly hell you added quite a lot in there.)
Very glad to see this story return & I enjoyed the chapter.
Solid 10/10. I hope you & your collaborators have a great holiday weekend come Christmas time.
Again, very very great art & if I had the money I'd commission an adorable Lumberman & AJ piece because I love them so!
Zecora x Sunburst? That a potencial romance i never considered... Neat
Wait Kelly is with Becky at the moment?
I think Harmony just lost one of its Puppets. Luna will wreck some ass once she become a leader Equestria needs to stop the darkness to come.
Holy Shiiit! EMBER GET DUNKED ON
Her Dragon pride cost her hide a nice mate. Now it to late. That was just great.
Damn... That magic explaining sounds so awesome, but i can't really make sence of it.
Chris might just rescue the population by bring herds to Equestria
Interessting... So Ponys age well? Granny Smith would be a Indicator that when they really start getting really old it get eatch slowly or rapide. What the Pony lifespan again? 100 or 200? Luna or Celestia could mention it to the humans perhaps? A long lifed race would explain lower population numbers. Or is Equis just a smaller planet?
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No idea broken
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Its edited. No idea why broken in the first place.
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I didn't want to dwell too long on the interaction between Ember and those she confronted with her failed proposal. What was really important was the few bits I did cover, and that Flutters and Rarity were not messing around and far stronger than Ember would have thought.
It might have legit ended in murder.
Funny thing is, all those scientific terms and theories are all accurate and grounded in actual science.
Empty had to brush up on his science.
If you haven't seen the episode that gives the actual backstory of Bright Mac and Pear Butter getting together and how that conflict happened, it's worth the watch.
Well, that was might have been part of it, but also a quote from one my friends years before that clip came out due to a towel snapping fight gone wrong.
For Becky, though, I had to make it cute and fun, so the quote fit.
There will be good and bad for different groups. With so many moving parts, humans, ponies, new creatures, political considerations, and unknowns in play, there's going to be a lot to expect creating a harder path for some to travel.
I take a lot of care in how I want those two to progress with things. They love each other but are struggling with feelings beyond their control.
Just curious, what aspects did I add that you consider to be a lot? Something visual, emotional, physical, or a combination?
And, like everything I do, there's a reason behind these choices.
I was glad to get this back on track, and there will eventually be something done for those two, art wise.
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Oops! LOL. Okay.
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I'm just full of surprises.
Damn it... My bad. Got it fixed, though.
That Shadow Pony is super dead, and Luna is on the rise with her new support system of Kelly, her friends, and the ponies that share her company.
She wasn't ready.
Pretty much, once The Pony of Shadows was dead, his magic should have evaporated, leaving little to no trace of the construct (the dark sphere form it took) behind. Instead, there was lots of it left behind, and Cadance and the others think that happened because of power it received from taking in some of Benny's fear and/or being destroyed by Benny's anger.
I still find it funny that Chris's low self-esteem made him think he'd be lucky to even get one date, but would never be able to hold onto dating more than one pony at a time. Then, when given the option, chose to call it a harem instead of a herd, like it should have been?
Just as backwards, Twilight rejects the idea of her world being based on a show, but then chooses to take the term "herd" for forming relationships based on a fanfic of her, from the show, doing things she would have never considered?
Even better, ponies around her are rejecting the name!
The only proper age reference given is that Fluttershy is a year older than Pinkie Pie. Otherwise, no actual ages or ranges are given. It's largely a lot of theory and speculation, though some very good guess can be made. Much like I did with the ponies ages, using similar timelines or ranges for events or certain things to take to happen, I think I have to be pretty close.
As for Granny, I think it's likely that she's over 200 years old, but perhaps the reason she's still around could be Harmony's doing.
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Definitely a combination but I'd say the visual is what really stands out for me. With me being someone who has always loved to picture things in my head with a clear vision since I was little, stuff like the things you makd these characters say & do become easy for me to see.
The way you described what Star & Prim did & said left me wide eyed because I was able to 'see' & even crazier 'hear' the scenario. This is not a bad thing, it just means that the story is easy to get very imagitive with.
To be blunt? This story feels real.
One big example was the scene with AJ having the wolf thorns taken out of her. The atmosphere, Spike screaming her name as he's forcefully removed from the scene, etc.
Felt like I was watching an TV-MA episode of MLP tbh. Everything felt natural & believable.
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Ah, I see.
Ha! I had to do like... three rewrites until they ended up no having sex in the cloud. It didn't seem like what would have been real for her, in spite of her flux of urges.
I see what you're saying more clearly now, and I would love to see this made with a TV-MA rating Or even X-rated just to get the full story.
I was worried for a moment there that maybe I was getting too graphic with how descriptive the clop scenes were. I'm not sure who all are read this story but skip over those parts, tolerate those sections because it's still part of the story, and those who go back to re-read those sections because of obvious reasons.
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Either ice cream or a big platter of fish and chips for us who live in the Atlantic
Been meaning to ask.
Now I know the world the humans have landed in is loosely based on the show. Given the cover art for this story, am I to assume that's what they look like in the story?
What I mean is they don't look completely cartoony with outlines & all that. They still look cartoonish but in the more 'polished' way that the artist (AssassinMonkey) drew them in.
An example is to when humans get physical with the MLP characters. With them being completely cartoons, it would look weird, probably give em a paper cut lol.
With them being the way the artist drew them, it makes it easier to be taken more seriously.
Think of them being real but not really real if you know what I mean.
That kiss between James & Jackie wouldn't look right if they looked exactly as they did in the show.
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Hey. I dig me some fish and chips... Though my comfort food is usually Jack Danielle's.
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I've tried to not dwell on it too much, but have given hints here and there. The first example was when the ponies saw the show versions of themselves on Chris's phone:
Later, when talking about the world they're in:
So... yeah. Something more on the lines of AssassinMonkey work like:
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But to give a real sense of depth, form, texture, and life is something I can't really convey
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Or
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Or
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Or to have a better sense of depth, some other examples are like that of:
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Or
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Another good example of shape and form by Imalou:
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I take it some of the booze and the things related to beer in this story you know from experience
They forgot about when Gabby Gums showed she dyes her hair grey, didn't they?
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Yes. I ama very experienced drinker.
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Mayor’s hair was graying naturally before she started dying all of it silver. I forget where I've seen it... I'll reroute layer of I can find it.
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I'm always open to criticism, but I'm not sure what kind of critique you're offering based solely on one line of exposition you've read with no context. It's unfair to give such a harsh reaction based on one line, but if I've honestly made mistake worthy of essentially being insulted over it, I'm willing to hear you out so I can do better.
I don't want to be hypercritical of your comment, so could you provide a little more information on what I could have done better? You can private message me if you'd prefer.
I didn't see it earlier as I was too busy gathering my thoughts together but Peachez will be your artist starting from now on?
That is cool becaúse I took a gander at the artist's work. They're neat as hell. I love the shading & colors.
If the artist creates a chapter cover featuring the one of the humans, (preferably Cerb, Lumberman, Sniff, or Becky) that'd be very cool to see.
I can't unsee get the image of a lustful Ovens staring down at Peter 😂
Yo imagine a lustfully crazed Pinkie staring at us? Would I even sleep at night or be scared that she'll jump at me or the next human she sees. You see how she wants Benny!
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As of right now, Peachez is going to be my story artist. Previously, it was paranoidsiren, however, real-life circumstances have dramatically impacted her ability to work on commissions. Even with a 5 week head start, my last commission from her has been only about 70% completed.
It's unfortunate, but the commissioned art is insignificant when compared to making sure her real-world issues are taken care of first. Peachez has thankfully been very easy to work with, reliable, and within my budget I'm working with to help improve the story. I should be getting an update today on the progress of the next piece commissioned for Wednesday's submission. At minimal, 4 characters interacting for the opening scene.
This next piece will sadly only be flats, given the number of characters and time needed to complete, I had to keep it reasonable.
I've discussed having human characters in future art, and it looks as if, in most cases, this should be doable. There might even be some commissions done that can't be shared here on FimFic. Not directly at least.
Ha! What a way to wake up, and what a sight to see first thing in the morning.
You know... I think lust-crazed Pinkie would likely have a different mane style, much like her Pinkamena appearance different. Darker, creepier, yet sultry in a somewhat nightmarish way.
And at this point, I think she's getting close to being opportunistic, likely going after any human she could get her hooves on.
Before the next chapter hits, let me just say....
• The relationship between 'The Stranded Seven' & 'My Little Pony' characters has blossomed into something so unexpected yet completely accepted & I have to say it was done & continues to do it convincingly.
• The relationships has gotten so far to the point that AppleJack is willing to leave her home behind for Lumberman because she loves him so much & has truly found 'the one' in him. I've already addressed the depressing scenario of her going through with that decision & how their love would be seen in our world regardless of Jackie's sapience & "human" traits. Poor Lumberman knows he'll never meet another girl like AppleJack if he does leave.
* Her plea of wanting to go to Earth with James combined with the confession of love James made to her at the postwar party is just tearjerking now*
• So if I'm correct, Twilight is the only one aside from maybe the other stranded that know about the molestation that Peter suffered as a child?
• Also I've come to the realization that Peter might've essentially ended up "being like his abuser" in some ways while still having his own path.
• I know that Peter's being slow, gentle, & patient with his mares, even with the ones he's gotten very close to ala Twilight & Ovens, but we & he knows that the damn is going to break.
* Cerb's slow progress & convincing journey with Fluttershy & Rarity compared to Peter & his journey is much better & it's not strictly because it was different. The payoff was very satisfying with Justin while the payoff with Peter seems to be nowhere in sight due to Peter trying desperately to avoid playing the game his abuser played that he sadly inevitably would. My only hope is that Peter can fully break away from his abuser's mental hold on him & finally get the great payoff he so deserves & that's not even only about giving what Ovens, Twilight , & whoever else he's wooed wants.
So many thoughts & more when it comes to this story. It gets way more intriguing with each chapter. But hey, that's why I'm loving it.
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It's been difficult to work them all up to where they are where none of it felt (at least) overtly forced. Even when a big jump had been made, I still made sure to put something in to show there was a reason for it, even if that reason wasn't fully understood.
The LumberJack shipping still holds a special place in my story, as well as my heart, because of how these two have grown together. They are committed, and I want to make sure they continue to stay close. Future chapters will help concrete that.
As of right now, only a few of the Stranded Seven know at least some of what happened to Sniff. Twilight and the others he's with only know that he once had a person he fell in love with, but that it ended badly. Every time his history came up in flashbacks have all been in his head or shown as a narrative to explain where he mentally was at the time. He's never verbalized any of it to Ovens or Twilight.
Sniff hasn't said as much, nor has an exposition been presented to show how things might have ended up in his past where he came to fear he would end up like his abuser. Though, it is likely to believe that at some point he took her teachings to heart and did end up taking advantage of someone and hurting them in the aftermath. At the very least, he is very much afraid of taking what he had learned and using it to sexually exploit those he's come to care about, or perhaps even the next pretty face that happens upon his way.
It's all a matter of time and the right set of circumstances and opportunity.
Sniff is slowly coming around on some fronts. He's already admitted that he's gotten closer, faster, than any others he's been with before. On top of that, even despite his concerns, he's been pushing more and more... Although that had also made him mentally pull back, giving him more concern that if he takes things too far, he's not sure if he can control himself.
To be fair, we don't fully understand what that might mean.
This next chapter is going to have some interesting perspectives and discussions. Might even get a good idea of how important some of these new relations being built up are being viewed.
poor shining. it's tough being a geek around a couple of nerds.
also. wow i had never looked a sunburst and zecora together before. it's an interesing match.
Suncora? zecorburst? either way its a ship that needs to set sail.
also,also. doesn't mayor dye her hair grey? i'm sure that was covered in a CMC episode early in the series.
That conversation between Cream and Cheerilee at the end........ my heart goes out to Cream, poor gal
Garbe is Smolders brother, yet a Slug trough the eye would be the best solution for everyone
Rarity used Bondage at Ember, it was super effective
With Harmony suppressing the Memories of Stallions making Mare mothers, for all we know one Stallion was breeding them all in the past..
Even without the villains of mlp, the amount of work they have improving society and growing population as well researching and developing medical science will keep them busy for a lifetime.
Ember sure dropped the ball a few times, but that means she has all the more character development like many others to go through.
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And there is still so much more to cover.
Sure, she made some mistakes, but it's kind of adorable. She's starting from such a different world of experience and so much to learn and grow into.