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trixie learned under celestia has that been mentioned before or have i just forgotten?
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It's canon, but Trixie fell out of the class early on, apparently. The official IDW comics, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Issue #40, it shows Trixie in attendance to Celestia's school during the back story of Twilight learning to take care of baby/hatchling Spike.
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huh not read the comics in a long time
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Yeah... there's a lot of story in them bad boys.
is......cutter a tsundere cause im getting those vibes from her
CONGRATULATIONS YA FUCKING NERRRRD!
Sorry for my excitement but that bookworm finally fucking did it! Go head Twilight! Sniff is just bagging all these mares.
Nice connection to Trixie's dream version of Twilight confessing to Sniff except without the ya know....fucking lol.
First things first.
"Here for a fun time, not for a long time" I'm rocking with that phrase lately. I like it & it's gonna be used quite frequently huh?
Why in god's name do you make the scenes between Applejack & Lumberman so fucking adorable? Also happy she finally confessed to all the other ponies that she fell for him.
Rainbow being loyal as fuck to Becky. She's crushing on Cerb but no touchy for her with his two mares claiming him. Becky has shown no interest in ponies....at least not yet & if eventually? Maybe Rainbow if they get closer? Who knows? It's a toss up at the moment.
I knew Benny & Pinkie were platonic. She's looking someone WEIRD like her & someone who's probably not an ALcoholic. 😉
I hope Rarity and Fluttershy can confront Cerb about their new problem. I really like their relationship & don't want it to plunder down the drain.
Poor Luna but at least she could be given a shot in this love triangle with Kelly and Mac. Mac gonna get actually some eventually I hope? Also Luna is a virgin it seems? Interesting
If only everyone knew Starlight was nervous during the talk about foal making because she's fucking without the intention of starting a family. I wonder how that'd go if she reveal what has transpired between her & Chris to everypony else. So far she remains the only character to have gone all the way with their human.
Soon little ponies (except Rainbow & Pinkie)...soon
Have a good day RedHeart, it's gonna get better with Chris who btw I'm still scared for regarding Starlight's sexual quest for his d***.
Keep your head up Spike. You'll find someome. Big bro Sniff will help you on the way.
THAT'S OVEN'S MOTHER?! Now I know where she gets her looks & badass attitude from. Shout out to the artist or artists involved in the story. Sniff better not break Oven's heart.
I'm loving these humans & how they're written.
This story Empty? It's really unique & I love that. Next week will be something else I bet.
Mindblowing chapter
Everypony except Celestia should be pretty hyped right about now.
Damn... I really hope we get a herd or two out of this chapter
Trixie will hopefully get help... Celestia i wish don't mess to mutch around
Lovely humor as always
“Chris has really opened up and is making lots of new friends. Plus he's trying all sorts of new things he thought he’d never have the chance to do. And he seems very safe. I’ve made sure of that.” - Starlight Glimmer
Starlight you cheeky ass bitch lol. I'm honestly more surprised Rainbow didn't catch on, ya know with her making sexual innuendos & jokes plus noticing Starlight's scent on Chris & everything in his room.
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More like she's just really aggressive and over protective.
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First time I read this, I thought you were calling me a nerd. But yeah, I could only put that poor nerd through so much before having to give her something. Although... heh... I mean... ugh. You'll see how things get complicated for our little book worm next week.
Yep, I'm a little proud of how I pulled that off. And like I said, there's a lot of similarities between these worlds, but each one is going to be a little bit different.
I'm not sure how often it's going to pop up, but it's a phrase that's far too exploitable not to be used against Sniff.
Why? I dunno. It's like I see this lonely apple pony and her fine, strapping young human stallion, Lumberman, and this compulsion to make the adorable takes control and I start writing words that melt the heart.
As for telling the others, that was nice, but she really needs to tell Lumberman... it's gonna be a long day.
As only she could be. Sure does make her intensity fun to write.
I do feel kind of bad putting RD in that position, but it kind of had to happen to her. She's all about kicking ass and looking cool. Cerb just being Cerb, just happened to catch her eye. Only, since RD seems to have caught on that she'd be stepping on some hooves if she was even confident enough to approach him for anything.
Becky's approach might better phrased as "I'm not here for a fun time, or a long time." I haven't spent a lot of time on her yet. But I will eventually. But, there's been no deception on my part of not showing her expressing any interest in any pony.
Pinkie is Pinkie. Not very logical all the time and tends to be more reactionary then to be the type of plan ahead. Which might come to bite her in the ass.
They're pretty smart when they put their heads together. I'm sure they'll think of something.
This whole thing with Luna just kinda... happened? Seriously, my original plan didn't have these two getting an interest in each other. Which is funny, because originally Kelly wasn't even supposed to hook up with Big Mac. But, that was something I had to tackle a long time ago. As for the love triangle... it's gonna be a long day for these three.
And yeah. It's pretty safe to assume that if you see a pony character without a kid of their own that it's because they're a virgin.
She is the only one, but even she might be wondering if that's true. Otherwise, of course she was nervous. She's been smashing hips with Chris when she wasn't supposed to and is dating him while before it was okay, and is pushing him onto others with the intent of getting him to have more sexual experiences while Twilight is like. "Tee-hee-hee. Dating is fun. I like my special somehuman. Sex is silly, however it's done."
You sound very confident in that.
Lord willing, one of those two are going to get something they want at the nurse's house. And stay scared. Pray for that brave, brave man.
Ah, Spike... the poor young drake. I like to think that if Sniff hadn't mentored him, and Cerb didn't save him from getting mauled, Spike might have taken a completely different path when seeing that he lost Rarity to Cerb. At least now Sniff can maybe help him out.
Oh, yeah... Cutter is one bad bitch, and the kind of intensity you saw her with standing guard is likely the reason Ovens hasn't had many pleasant things to say about her history and the falling out with her parents.
Actually... didn't Ovens start to go into some unfavorable memories, but was cut off by Sniff in their first night together? Hmm... I wonder what he didn't get a chance to hear about her mother because he tried to keep things a little more chipper.
I try. Thanks for saying so. Also, yes. And, oh my god, The next chapter, get ready. Because there was a complaint before about how I skipped over the events of Starlight and Chris's first time going all the way... well... there's a reason not all storytelling is linear. Also, speaking of storytelling. You ever read Xenophilia by AnonponyDASHIE? Asking because... reasons.
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Glad you enjoyed it.
Oh... they got so many feelings going strong right now.
Herding. Ha! Oh... so funny you mention that. No spoilers!
Hopefully Celestia sending one of the most hostile ponies of the guards won't cause a problem. I mean, it's not like Cutter has a temper and Trixie has an ego problem...
That's what I shoot for.
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Egh, maybe she did, maybe she didn't. Then again, she was pretty distracted with the treat of somepony/something coming after Becky. Although I had some fun with Starlight being honest with her assessment of what Chris was going through under her care, but also not admitting to all the attempts of testing the no human x pony breeding theories or that she knows what his dick taste like.
Although in regards to Rainbow Dash not calling out Starlight... you gotta remember that those two are pretty tight with each other ever since they exchanged blows when they were playing favorites with Becky and Chris. This could also be yet another display of loyalty to a friend.
We'll have to wait and see.
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No I have not read that story and tbh I'm feeling a little worrisome on reading it because of how your wording it.
Sounds like there's some crazy shit about to occur for our squad of humans & ponies next week.
So there's gonna be more surrounding Starlight & Chris's first time? 👀 Count me in because these two are definitely among my favorites in the story & seeing how far they could go knowing they've been crossed the line before anyone else were allowed to is always a pleasantry.
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Scary? No... or at least I hope not.
You know it. Lots of stuff is going down next chapter. Lots of progression for some characters and even a new piece of a puzzle will be discovered to help shed some light on these growing human x pony relationships.... or possibly cast even more shadows to complicate things. Either way, it's gonna be a trip.
It was never my intent to leave so much of such a monumental event of the first human on/in pony experience out of the story. it's was more that the timing wasn't right to explore what all went down that night. And no, I don't mean Starlight... she went down the second morning after that. Hay-yo! Zinger!
[ vage prediction of the future meeting ]
Trixie- who are you
Cutter- royal guard, please come with me
Trixie- nope
Cutter- pretty please come with me
Trixie- nooope
Cutter- come with me or you get in trouble
Trixie- hm... nooooope
Cutter- this - means - waaar
Trixie- meh ... .. ... nope...
Cutter- Dead or alive you come with me...
Trixie- *look right, than left*
Fine fineee... ... ... Actualy NoooOoopPeeeE!
*suddenly the desert turns supernova*
Cutter- I tried to be nice
*Trixie now 'persuaded' laying prone over Cutters back*
MISSON ACCOMPLICED ♡
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Ha! Interesting theory. Although, remember one of the last revelations Trixie was given.
So... who knows just how strong Trixie really is?
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I know I’m beating a dead horse but is it just me or is Celestia acting the way she is is because that she isn’t spending time with the humans I mean she slept in the humans home with the other ponies not to mention when she invited one to live or visit the castle in an earlier chapter, the way she invited him seemed like she was flirting with him in some way but a couple chapters later she turns a complete 180 and now pretty much can’t stand them also harmony the darkness or some possible outside force seems to be influencing her in some way I like how this is going with her character so far so please keep up the awesome work you do for this other than I’m hoping that if there’ll be a music or some sort of media chapter once starlight gets that thingamabo of her’s working maybe the readers could send a couple music or media vids from YouTube or something I mean even though it just passed I’d love to see a movie night reaction to Independence Day thinking it was a true story or heck their reaction to mlp G1 and ugh g3 as for music you can’t go wrong with the touch from that bumblebee movie which was in transformers the animated movie but still.....actually I’d love to see the ponies react to Prime on the live action screen I wonder what Celestia would think of him and all he’s been through as for pony media that my little dashie vid on YouTube might be cute for them to see and for them to find out there’s fanfics of them somewhere and reactions to a certain bureau fic and knowing that the multiverse theory is pretty much proven since they are living in Equestria for awhile they’ll have an interesting comment or two knowing that somewhere THAT universe exists
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For Celestia's character, there is meant to be some confusion. First, she was afraid of the over fears of influence from Sunset Shimmer. Then she seemed pretty chill about having them around, even stepping up to the plate of being almost murderously enraged over one of them almost being killed, and diligently worked through the night, and even risked hurting herself to save Kelly. So, after that spending the following day with the humans, it is easy to see the 180 she "appears" to make in regards to them.
For the possible flirt with Sniff, I'm leaving that up for interpretation if she was making an honest flirt with him, was trying to prank him, or trying to prank Twilight. She does have an odd sense of humor at times.
Also, it's not fully clear if she can't stand the humans, is busy trying to run Canterlot practically by herself while working on something else, or is simply trying to keep as much separation between ponies and humans. Again, that didn't really take place until after the morning she woke up in Benny's house.
So, keep in mind that what a character says, does, and how others interpret them, might all be different.
Well, the crystal's used to recreate a smartphone seems to work, so the music will start being more common for them. As for another movie event, it's gonna happen. As for the movies themselves and how ponies will react to them... you'll see.
Eventually, they will be exposed to more styles of music. And while YouTube won't be available for them, that doesn't mean that software used to rip videos off of their site hasn't been used by certain people that enjoy collecting media. So, somethings on YouTube or other sights might end up making an appearance.
For the multiverse theory, most ponies are going to be fighting that for a while. Although, Starlight seems pretty convinced that at least their world must be linked to the show since Chris both knows so much about them and can point out the broken logic that she's just accepted all her life. So... we'll see how that goes.
Then there's Twilight who couldn't be convinced, no matter what examples they threw at her.
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Twilight is like "Tee-hee-hee. Dating is fun. I like my special somehuman. Sex is silly, however it's done."
Good lord Twilight you Innocent, oblivious, bookworm angle lol. If only she knew Starlight was proving that it was possible to be having sex without the intent to start a family. Imagine if Starlight tells Twilight about her & Chris's sexual escapades? That nerd's whole world will be shooketh & she'll realize that Sniff's talk was not ridiculous at all like she thought.
The one night between just Sniff & Twilight will be a moment I'm gonna be waiting for.
I love Applejack being accepting of the fact she wouldn't be able to carry a foal with Lumberman but didn't give damn because he's the one for her, foal or no foal. She really did fall for him & I think it's really sweet that she hopes she's human enough for him which tbh I'd say she's been the most "human" pony out of every other pony in the story.
Lumberman is (Becky & Benny have shown no interest) the only one yet to show some form of interest in their pony companion. He's a tough egg to crack but Apples is coming close to doing it or has already done it & plans on doing more.
Didn't realize this but now Fluttershy & Rarity have yet ANOTHER complication to deal with regarding Twilight's foal revelation with Cerb on their mind. There is no break for this trio I swear.
Btw I do sound confident but I'm lowering my expectations just in case you decide to fuck me over in the end lol. I definitely don't see Rainbow or Pinkie in the mix, especially Pinkie with how out of this world her crazy ass is but again I don't know what you'll do as you are the writer.
Twists & a whole lot of turns in this story & that's what I like about it. Always keeps me on the edge of my feet.
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The funny thing is it's obvious that three is no "if" Twilight finds out, it was always a matter of "when" Twilight finds out. The real question is "how" Twilight finds out.
Me, too. I'll have to write it one of these days. Seriously, I haven't gotten that far yet.
I wanted to make a point to have these two stand out. Well... at least after I first wrote them in the bathtub together. I kind of forget what was supposed to be the original arrangement for Lumberman and Applejack when I first drafted up the outline for this story. I think originally Lumberman was supposed to take a super long time to eventually come around and AJ was going to be incredibly prudish about such an arrangement. But that was also when I was toying with potentially 2 very different paths this story could have taken.
AJ has the advantage of Lumberman already being super invested and caring about her. When he'll cross over to that romantic line... egh... well have to wait and see.
Becky... she's a bit of a mystery right now. More will come out about her eventually.
Benny... He's got a double, double date to see where he stands. Gonna have to be careful testing those waters.
Yeah, not being able to be rutted full of foals, like originally planned, will complicate things... potentially. At the very least, they will have to reassess their relationships yet again.
Well... that's kind of the thing with all these characters. There's no easily identifiable pattern or common tropes that have presented themselves as to how will end up with each other. That is to say, you can't really isolate any event in the story and say "Ah-Ha! That's when you know their gonna get shipped!" Well... that and it's only been three couples that have actually officially formed so far. But, come on. The brony, the self-admitted slut, and the man-whore playboy. Granted only Kelly had an obvious pairing. But both Chris and Sniff had a lot of variables thrown in the mix to keep you guessing.
That's been one of my biggest goals. I didn't want to write a cookie-cutter story. I wanted a story that's just as messy and complicated as real life.
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"It's how Twilight finds out" well then that makes what could transpire between her & Sniff even more interesting.
I love what you've done so far with Ovens and how she's developed as a character & because of Sniff? She's become more than just "that baker pony" I initially thought she would have been. She's a growing character & I like that.
Twilight's development is an extremely welcome add on as well. I like that she's not just your stereotypical nerd with nothing really else going for her. She's developing more over time & again thanks to Sniff, we're seeing a side of her I don't see much in other fics I've read on here & from what very little I've seen of her on the show. She's quite the thirsty one for knowledge.
New fresh takes on an already established character and or characters if you will.
P.s. Twilight is like a damn teenager getting so excited for her date & it's really fucking adorable but woman YOU ARE A PRINCESS...act like it lol.
I could just hear that damn "squee" sound from her excitement. There is a whole ass compilation of that sound & I almost punched my wall once lol.
Alright, I love this story, but my gripe is the fact that they say everyhuman and things like that when we don't call ourselves that. But seeing as its kinda in their nature to do that i am willing to just let it slide. Again I don't hate the story, its just a minor nitpick of mine.
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Oh, I can't wait until that comes out.
Every character will have to grow at some point.
Twilight, in some ways, kind of took the jump her season 6 level of confidence to her late season 9 levels of confidence. All it took was Sniff telling her that she needed her own priorities, not Celestia's. Even her willingness to let him go and be with Ovens was her listening to her own conscious.
LOL... NO! Let the little royal nerd have her moment. She just bagged herself a man!
I kind of pictured her reaction to be something like that of when she was jumping around screaming "Yes!" over and over again when she was retelling her story of how she got into Celestia's School... only this time a with a little more self-control.
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No, that's a perfectly valid complaint. But, given their vernacular, and the human's own willingness not to be so hard up for how they're addressed, it's a slow change. There are cases where some of the ponies who have been more properly educated on how the human's words work, what they mean, and how they're used, have more accurate and less annoying speech habits.
It's also why there are some occasions a pony might say "every creature," when referring to a combination of ponies, humans, and another race.
I'm happy to hear that you're enjoying the story so far. There are still some big events to come along.
"It was at this point Sniff's original fears of Twilight and Oven Fresh butting heads turned to a bigger danger of them joining forces"
Haha Sniff pulling double.....flank is the term I believe lol.
Also Ovens had a falling out with her mother Cutter? Interesting news that might come into play I hope.
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Not sure what the term double flank is, but yes, working together is now double temptation. Double poon, double the pleasure, double the rewards, double everything.
It's been hinted at earlier on, though it started with her father. As for it coming into play... it will have to be revisited. Especially given how it was one of the things that Sniff found to be something he could relate to Ovens with.
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'Pulling Double Flank' was a reference to the title of an American Dad episode called "Pulling Double Booty". That episode I wouldn't recommend if you're uncomfortable with the implied incest but not really incest plotline. It's a crazy ass rollercoaster of an episode man.
I said flank because apparently that's another word for what you call a pony or horse's hindquarters and or rear end. I am correct right? I've heard that word quite a lot regarding this show but never got what it meant.
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Ah, so it was a play on the term "pulling double duty." Makes sense.
And yeah, that play on words wouldn't really work for this. The only play on words would be using flank to refer to the rear end of a formation. "Protect the flnaks," as the phrase goes.
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This is embarrassing to admit btw but after reading your chapters, I dream & visualize the next one coming. It is really really fun to picture the events played out in the story inside my head, even the more....explicit... stuff which when picturing that I almost burst out laughing because of how funny it must look but I digress man, your story is something else. No other story has made me do that.
I'll tell ya that it was fucking hilarious to even try visualiz Twilight fucking Sparkle doing the damn wobble lol
And I don't even like the wobble lol. Every family gathering or cookout ever.
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Don't you worry. Eventually, the more explicit stuff won't leave as much to the imagination... I think... I dunno. Future events won't be so vague or short. But I know what you mean about imagine what the events in a story must look like.
OMG! You have no idea how hard it was for me to narrow down what kind of dances they could do. Especially with Twilight being a terrible dancer.
Much like Cerb, I both dance like a brick with legs, and even then, only when I've been drinking.
Have you ever been sad while writing for this story? Like, are there parts of the story where you feel sad writing
them because you don't want that to happen but you know in order for the story to progress further, it needs to be done?
Btw because of you I'm tempted to write my own story on here but I barely know anything about the show overall & what very little I do know is from having the show as mainly background noise for the majority of my life.
I did learn over time about the show but not from watching it, just reading here & there from time to time.
You possibly reignited my passion for writing again so thank you very much.
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I'm not sure if "sad" is the right word, but I've certainly gotten emotional while writing certain parts. The first one that got me was the ending of of Chapter 15. Almost.
At that moment, Big Mac was at this crossroads of nearly having Kelly as a real love interest, or only a friend that trusted him, yet had her dying as he held her. Then to have the doctor ask him if he was close to the victim, that heartbreaking moment that he knew he almost was, that was a little hard to handle.
I certainly got amped up with the fight between RD and Glim-Glams. So much passion and devotion from those two, finally coming to a head with both of them having valid reasons to be at odds with each other, yet justified in their reasons of standing their ground. RD was so bitter, holding onto so much resentment towards a pony that nearly destroyed the friendship with her and the rest of the Mane Six while trying to help Becky. Then Starlight, finally embracing friendship and a meaningful relationship with Chris she felt she had to defend and protect to make up for her slights against him... it just tugged at the feels.
I suppose I got a little worked up when Twilight broke down with Sniff. At that point in the series, she had so much responsibility dropped on her, yet no real purpose or destination given to her. Then with the humans showing up, all their issues and problems, Luna coming down on her, no support from Celestia, even if I wrote it, I really felt for her.
Otherwiise, everything bad that happened to Applejack... I won't lie, I teared up a lot both writing and editing the chapter where she was injured and was suffering. Between "Let's party" and her screams projecting past the castle walls... I don't know if I relate more to Cerb being the one helping someone endure the pain, or more with AJ as the one who had to be help deal with the pain.
Regardless,, it hurt to have her endure that.
Twilight's night of discovering the other gifts was a little painful as well... Gah... how miserable that night must have been.
Well, depending on what you want to write, I'd be happy to help. Not that I can guarantee how much help I'd be willing to give, but still. Also, if you don't know the show that well, there are ways to write around that.
Hell, I'd be willing to help you brainstorm. I already do some creative editing for another author here on this site. I was helping a second, but he sadly got caught up with life and work, so, his story is on the back burner with no heat.
Side note, I've been drinking and might have screwed something up while replaying. My bad.
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Thanks for the offer of helping me write but I think I'll be fine. This was only a possibility though. If I ever do get the feeling to write something for this website, it'd likely be a one time thing only.
My story or possibly stories would be about MLP & our world crossing over because I've had this dream many times for some reason. I guess the world of MLP is just so interesting that I couldn't stop thinking about it. There's lots of them like this already but not really good ones like yours. Hope to have something original at least if I ever do write something here.
Take it as a token of appreciation for this fandom that has managed to keep this show still alive somehow from someone outside the fandom who has very little knowledge of the show itself & it's really dedicated fanbase.
Much respect to you guys on the fics, fanart, comic dubs & whatever else you do involved with this show.
Big question for you.
Did you ever expect this story to get so much attention?
P.s. don't sweat it about the drinking & shit. Everyone has something to calm themselves from time to time & if that's your thing? All the power to you but drink responsibly my guy. :)
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There's a lot of interesting concepts and commentary you can make when having the two worlds interact, so thanks for saying I've made one of the good ones.
Not really. I kinda figured I'd get about 30 or so people who would read it, not over 100 people interested enough to track it for every new chapter getting published.
Just had a good night chatting with a friend online and had some drinks. And I'm always responsible.
Ya know? It honestly surprised me with how quick Sniff was willing to date Twilight. You'd think he'd be good with just Ovens alone but I guess maybe deep down Sniff was always interested in Twilight until he was pushed onto Ovens by her but now that she was in his good graces again, the door was open. That's what I think at least.
"Twilight-" What was he planning on saying to her before she interrupted him? Did you have a response ready in case or was that intentional?
I found it really sweet of Twilight admitting that she really wanted to date Sniff in front of Luna, Spike, Starlight & Sniff himself & then was likely going to praise the shit out of him had Sniff not intervened lol.
"I mean look at him, he's" Twilight, relax girl, relax
I didn't realize this but Starlight likely won't be the only one to have gone all the way with their human companion anymore. We got Ovens on the prowl to get Sniff to give it a shot & who knows what could happen with Twilight because while she did say that she thinks she wants a family (something Sniff can't give her), she didn't say she in fact wanted a family so she's still on the table.
Oh & can we talk about the adorable Swift Sails? She's a precious little thing that deserves respect. Love how open she's become because of Sniff. That dude sure knows how to get the ladies to let loose. He's a keeper....for a short time.
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Well, once Sniff got off his high horse (no pun intended) and accepted the fact that he was in the magical pony land with no foreseeable way out, he stopped being a dick. That allowed him to open up just enough to see how relatable some of the ponies could be, the first being Twilight, the second accidentally being Ovens due to Spike egging him on. So, Sniff honestly, had Twilight no pushed him away and Ovens come on so aggressively, it was likely that Sniff would have found himself trying to get closer to Twilight. Eventually, dating? Well... the path he was on with the others tempting him, then what happens in the next chapter... who really knows how it would have ended.
Regardless, Twilight was the first one Sniff really cared about and had strong feelings for. Sure it was shrouded in confusion, but (see above), yeah.
Had he not been interrupted, he was going to try and talk her out of trying to have sex with him. After his time with Ovens, and that same lead in of "...After all, if you are here for a short time, we should make it a fun time." Sniff was bound to think Ovens on a quest for his dick.
Yeah, Twilight found the courage to show no shame and Sniff wanted to get out of there before he had to explain any of the naughty stuff he had gotten into with Ovens, if it were to come up.
Ovens may be pushing for some extra lovings, but Sniff seems a little apprehensive to give her anything more than a kiss and some hands-on attention. With Twilight, we'll see how the story goes on with her. 63 hours until the next chapter, then a bonus chapter on Saturday.
Swifty is adorable and I have a lot of fun with her character. As for her becoming more open, it's like Ovens said:
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What would you say was the most romantic moment in this & are there going to be more of those moments?
Those are my personal highlights from this fic because it's so fun picturing.
AJ & Lumberman have had their romantic moment & their adorable moments.
I feel it's time for some others to shine personally.
You know how possessive of Sniff Trixie's dream version of Twilight was in her world? Was the fact that for a brief moment IRL Twilight actually considered telling Sniff that Ovens should find someone else since as Rainbow said 'she found him first' another hint of something possibly being a reality?
I'm making sure to see some connections but I understand it won't all be identical. There will be differences.
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The solo dance with AJ and Lumberman, hands down. A close second is the date between Cerb and Rarity. Namely, the two of them sharing a fork for their dessert. I'm gonna work a few more in, yes.
All in due time.
There's still a lot of unknowns from the other timeline to give the context about what led those characters to make those decisions. As for how possessive she will get, only time will tell.
Yep. No two are the same.
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So Twilight spoke of Celestia possibly having lost a human companion herself & that's her theory of why Celestia is so demanding of separating the two species as to not experience the same heartbreak she suffered.
I feel she's reaching a bit as even though I don't approve of Celestia trying to break down a good thing going on with the humans, she has had the best intentions to keep everyone & everypony safe. I could be wrong & Twilight might be correct but that's only based on how much time we're given on Celestia because so far we haven't seen much of her & how she's handling the fallout of that vote.
In speaking of the humans, Cerb has gotten really accustomed to Fluttershy & Rarity. So much so that he's basically said "Fuck it, I'm not on Earth, morals are out the window" & began to do a lot of things he wouldn't ever do back home like sleeping naked with them & even kissing them.
As you said, it's looking like the humans are coming to terms with the fact that they may in fact be here for a long time & are slowly but steadily migrating to this new life.
If they are truly leaving soon, where this leaves Cerb who has expressed his undying love for his two mares will be something to witness because he doesn't want them to leave him & I'm sure he wouldn't want to leave them either.
Maybe Celestia's rule was a good thing because now that it's been voted against, the outcome of the possibility of the humans going home is going to be a huge amount of heartbreak.
Poor girls, poor humans. At least with Celestia's vote getting tossed, all of them can actually grow to know one another, romantic relationship or not.
This is tough. Really tough. Never thought a story between humans & ponies could get so complicated & make me wonder. That's how good you made this story I guess.
Tomorrow's gonna be great.
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As of right now, I can only confirm that it's just a theory Twilight has.
I wouldn't go so far as to use the term "his undying love," but he certainly has given himself to them.
There's a reason every character does the things they do, including Celestia, and they all will be able to grow from this.
Don't expect a cookie-cutter story, and tomorrow will be a good read.
Very nice! I would rather be careful for Kelly, if she can actually take Big mac
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I have to get a hand of them. They seem pretty epic at times.
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The good bad boys or the really bad boys?
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That or a general Choleriker. In her profession a bad thing since they often end in blood... Especially since ponys start to bleed now a days
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Luna & Celestia should just doubleteam a human... Since Chris might be a Waifu Horder thanks to Starlight Horny as fuck Glimmer i could imagen him sooner or later taking Luna and Celestia for a ride, become the King if Equestria and make true Queens out of them...
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Starlight Glimmer the first pony to open a swinger club
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Also trigger/sword swing happy as shown to the nobel pony... Not that he didn't deserve it
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O my Loonamoon Like she tries to push in the heat of the moment a agressiv pony away with fireworks and fires a Kamehameha at them
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Some good points but since Celestia come into recent use of the Elements to save Kelly... She might be more influenced than anyone since her contact to humans is to low...
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Give Twilight the Kamasutra and we have one horny nerd for the history books
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Simply there culture. With actualy different species thing like: Everyone,everypony,everygriff,everyling etc. Are normal for there race. Humanity spawn with one race languages and cultures beyond counting. Equestria with many races? Mindblowing
The art is very lovely and FLUFFY ears
But Fluffy eartips are more my thing
How would he know what that feels like?
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It was more of an expression. Something of an extreme statement to sell the idea of just how drained he felt at the time.
It's obvious that Pinkie Pie has access to create stuff made off magic to shape it to many things.
I guess it need a human willpower to make magic objects brittle and dissolve them, otherwise the diesel would be unmade in the cars tank.
I guess the human channel their will power through things they come in contact with.
I think Cutter is the worst option for taking somepony against their will peacefully, she seem to be following the stereotype of the american way first and second.
Hope Trixie get monetary support, she is literally starting to starving herself.
No good point for anyone's mental health.
Have the human even access to fish and other meats?
At least money should be stable for them all, their knowledge is priceless in research and development.
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I'm leaning towards Chaos Magic.
They type of emotion and proximity.
Proximity and contact.
Cutter might not be the best for bringing someone in peacefully, unless you consider brining them in out of fear, but she would be one of the best for bringing them in, no matter what.
That's a nice thought... Not likely, though.
Not at this point.
They're getting by at this point.