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Will You Ever Be Mine (Re-write in progress) - zodia



a brand new student that falls inlove with rainbow dash. Aka you

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(Bonus)Chapter 11: Rainbow's Birthday (Summer Tale's #5)

It's been a month since you and Rainbow, and your friends that just appeared out of nowhere went to silvershores, and now that your back in your home town. And you have big plans for Rainbow's Birthday tomorrow and since you want to surprise Rainbow, you asked your friends for their help, you went to Zack's house to ask him to help you rent a part of Rainbow's favorite go-to park.

You knocked on his door but looks like he's not home but when you turned he was across the street talking to someone, but before you approached you waited for them to finish.

You went across the street "Hey Zack can I talk to you?" you asked.

Zack smiled "Oh Rushi slushie how can I help you?" said Zack, you're a bit nervous since this is a huge favor since renting a park is no joke.

You sigh "I need a favor... do you know the park that I and Rainbow always go to?" you said.

"Yeah... so what's the favor?" asked Zack.

"Well I know that you hosted a lot of events maybe... *Sigh* can... you help rent a half of that park" you said nervously.

Zack touches his chin "Well the park that you two always go to is owned by Filthy Rich... he's a tricky one but I think I can help you with that... but don't get your hopes up I'll just back it up for you if it turns out that I can't help you with that" said Zack.

You hugged Zack since he agreed to help you to such a favor "Oh thank you- thank you" you said.

Zack pulled out "Heeeeey now... im not a hugger" said Zack.

You nervously laughed "Well thx again I'll see ya tomorrow" you said, then after you met with Zack you went to Rarity's house to ask if what kind of romantic stuff Rainbow is into.

Rarity giggled "Oh Rushi my dear! Rainbow isn't really into tons of romantic stuff but she is vulnerable to a certain romantic thing in her life" said Rarity, you got really curious what it is.

You gulped "So what is it?" you asked.

Rarity giggled once again "It's you, darling... to be honest with you she actually won't stop babbling about you... He's like that... He's like this... she even slipt her tongue on a certain event that happened in the cabin" said Rarity while smirking.

You nervously laughed "Well... she is quite a talker" you said nervously, and after that so said conversation you went to Apple acres next to meet with AppleJack.

As you were walking around the farm you saw AppleJack making cider's, and when you approached her she happily greeted you "Hey... do you think you can lend me a hand I need to take this to the trunk" said AppleJack.

You agreed to help to AppleJack so you took a batch of cider and loaded them into Big Mac's pickup truck "So are you doing delivery?" you asked.

Big Mac looked at you with a smile "Eyup" said Big Mac, you got confused since he only said eyup and not to mention this the first time you ever talked to Big Mac. And after your done loading the last batch of the cider's your phone rings, Zack was calling you.

You picked up the phone "Hello! Zackodia so how did it go?" you asked.

"Well he won't let me rent half of the park so... I just bought the park" said Zack, wait what he bought the park is that even possible.

You got shocked "Im sorry what!? you bought the park the whole park" you said.

Zack laughed "Yep I bought the park I own the park now and I named it to you so technically you owned it now" said Zack.

"You didn't have to buy the whole park" you said.

Zack laughed again "Too late now... I already did plus he was planning to excavate it tomorrow to turn it into a new building and there a lot of plant life's there so I may have threatened him a little on selling me the park but its no big deal" siad Zack, you want to believe him that it was no big deal but it feels its a big deal.

"Are you NUTS I mean why? " you said.

"Come on don't whine now plus he just made a good deal plus I won't lose anything good luck tomorrow I already set up what you need" said Zack, then he just hangs up.

AppleJack approached you and ask you what's wrong "Hey what's wrong did something happened?" asked Applejack.

You sigh "Well Zack bought a whole park and named it to me" you said.

AppleJack smiled "That's nothing to worry about... actually I and my family owe Zack a lot... to tell you a secret he actually bought our farm back from the bank well not the bank he bought the bank that owns our farm now" said Applejack.

You got shocked "Just how rich is Zack exactly" you said.

AppleJack giggled "I have no idea" said AppleJack, you just sigh and smiled and just asked her what kind of gift Rainbow would like.

Applejack raised an eyebrow "You two have been together for a year now and you don't know what kind of gift she liked?" said AppleJack.

"I know that he liked takoyaki as a gift but she said that she has a new favorite kind of gift now and she's not even telling me what it is" you said.

AppleJack scratched her head "Well none of us do... since we all know that she like takoyaki as a gift" said AppleJack.

The sun is setting and your walking towards home, when you bumped into Sunset "Oh hey Sunset what are you doing here?" you asked.

"Im on my way to see Zack... i'm gonna guess your heading home... well we could walk together since where going in the same direction plus you looked troubled" said Sunset.

You luaghed nervously "Oh... you noticed that*sigh*" you said.

Sunset pat you in the pack "So what's up with you?" asked Sunset.

"*Sigh* well tomorrow is Rainbow birthday and i have this plan to throw a birthday party for her, at a park we love to go too, wich i owned now since Zack bought it and pass it to me" you said.

Sunset got surprised "Oh... god... his not kidding when he said his gonna buy a whole park..." said Sunset.

"Yeah and the worst thing is i dont know what kind of new favorite gift Rainbow wants" you said.

Sunset pat you in the back again "Well you'll find out tomorrow cause i know what her favorite gift and it is something you cannot buy it is something you can only do" said Sunset, then she left you infront of your house and went to Zack's house which is just right beside your house.

You thinkied about what she said "Something i can only do huh!?..." you said in your thoughts then you just went home.

Tomorrow morning you asked Pinkie Pie if she can get Rainbow while your getting ready on surprising her "Zack can you move help move the arch way a little bit more to the left" you said, and Zack just nodded yes and moved it.

Then a few minutes later Rainbow arrived with a blind fold and everyone is in their position for the surprised "Can i take off this blind fold now its the tense is killing me" said Rainbow.

The moment Rainbow took her blind fold off you started singing a song... that you made just for her as you approached her while your singing Rainbow's eye's were glittering, and her face was bright red and she was smiling as you get closer tears are coming out of her eye.

"Rainbow... you and i have been together for so long and everytime we meet and spend time together i felt joy i always felt joy and love from you... to be honest im not speeches but what i saying now is from my the depths of my heart... i want to be with you for the rest of my life and i promise you that, you and i will always be happy together... i love you Rainbow Dash" you said.

Rainbow giggled "Your so lame... but i liked it" said Rainbow, then she pulled you in, you both kissed infront of your friends.

"Well isnt this so sweet" said Rarity.

"Buddy to be honest with you that sounds like your proposing" said Zack.

"Yeah it sounded like that" said Sunset.

"Ouu if you two ever get married make sure to come to me first" said Pinkie Pie.

"Come on now everybody we all are still students but seriously you two are just adorable" said Hearty Fan.

"*Ahem* speaking of adorable i captured on my phone to love birds kissing on the sawn bridge" said Zack while looking at Hearty Fand and Twilight.

After the birthday party Rainbow invited you to her house, and somehow you felt a really heavy feeling in your chest when you got into her room she locked the door, then she approached you and she wrapped her arms around you.

Rainbow Dash looked at you in the eyes and smiled "Do you know what my new favorite thing?" asked Rainbow Dash.

"Umm... me?" you said nervously.

Rainbow Kissed you once again "Bingo... *giggles*" said Rainbow, and on that point you already what happened next.




























while you were sleeping you heard a mysterious deep raspy voice that is calling your name "Who are you!?" you said.
The voice replied "I am awake and i'll come for you chaos or creation cannot stop me now" said by the voice. Then you woke up on Rainbows bed, Rainbow is still asleep and she's cuddling you... you felt a litlle uncomfortable since you can feel something that poking the side of your torso.

You face palmed "I'll just my eyes again" you said.

Author's Note:

I hope you enjoy this bonus chapter
sorry for my grammar in advance

Comments ( 5 )

Wow, I did not expect a bonus chapter.

AppleJack smiled "That's nothing to worry about... actually I and my family owe Zack a lot... to tell you a secret he actually bought our farm back from the bank well not the bank he bought the bank that owns our farm now" said Applejack.

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Yeah thats a little reference i put in to see if someone will react XD

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