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Well good so far thank u
"are ten"
Yes, capitalist market economy + monarchy with nobility = communism. Who was this 50+ y. o. guy exactly, Jordan Peterson?
So this fic is set 92 Years before canon? Meaning unless cure becomes an Alicorn he won't meet the mane 6! That's a shame!
Also is Cure a unicorn or an earth pony because there are a lot of mixed signals in this chapter...
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I think he is earth pony. He straight up says it here. But don't quote me on it if I am wrong
That was a decidedly heartwarming sentiment.
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Long dead before Scootaloo was born. Like where the hell did he land in the timeline? Also with a name like Cure Wave I can only guess he's going to be a healer of some kind. Be it of creatures or nature
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He still could. He only needs to live to the age of 102! Well he could meet them a few year's early. Not like finding most of them would be hard. Just wait for the large explosion and BAM you know where everyone but pinky pie are
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Well it's a durn good thing 'ol Cure (or Ed?) grew up watchin Jiminy Cricket, then, isn't it? He'll be fiiiiine.
Que significa esto? Estamos años o siglos antes del programa? No estoy seguro si quejarme o disfrutarlo
Edit: Ehhh supongo que no soy tan fan como para no saber que significaba la fecha del principio, no una sorpresa, soy un gran fan de Bleach...
Maximizing profits has been the aim of the game since wayyyyyy before the 80s bro, ever since corporations existed and trust me when I say they cared just as much if not more about efficiency as modern day corporations; so at least since the 1300s. A little nitpicky of me, or maybe I misinterpret what the mc is saying, but I just hope you don't think buisness is some kind of modern day invention.
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Yeah, if I remember correctly the 12th to 13th century was the raise of the guilds and a bunch of mercantilist republics. Early Capitalism at its best.
Set nearly 100 years before the show? Bold. I am intrigued.
So... Dam is his mother, while Sire is his dad?
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...I just got here bit I think he has a few moms and a single dad and does not want to get them mixed up in his head with last life's dad
Just discovered this and I’ve got to say, you’ve got me intrigued. Setting it 100 years before the show is a bold move. Much harder, but much more potential if you have the imagination, and it seems like you do! I also love the fact that he’s not treating it like he’s in a tv show, treating it like the real world that it is makes the story feel so much more alive, because his choices will have consequences! Going to go binge read the rest now, good job with the hook!
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Yeah he he using the horse terms since he has multiple moms in a herd.
This seems interesting, though I do want to ask why you decided to go the polygamy route? Is there a specific reasoning, or was it for the heck of it?
Who’s dam?
Knowing about the mlp universe before arriving, red flag.
Harems being a thing, red flag.
A shit ton of references, yellow flag? I'll give slack there, but too much time is being given to references of other things rather than actually telling a story.
All in all, 6/10 first chapter. Good grammar and structuring, alright story telling so far. But I'm already worried about the story. Will give a few more chapters a chance, but this is already giving off the vibe of yet another average "Human reincarnated into pony world and getting all the horses as partners because he's so special" story.
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A sire is a stallion father, and a dam is a mare mother.
Equestria is a vegan communist country. I see that as an absolute win.
Nice beginning so far, love the portrayal of polyamory as a normal thing and a regular type of family. The protagonist being curious about everything is nice to see as well. I'll definitely read further.
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I think you should replace "Red flag" with "I personally don't like it". You know you are not forced to read free fiction that you don't like, right? Your comment is Just unnecessarily rude.
i hate how the story doesn't tell me what the character looks like, we know of his mother, another mother, and father, but no his color, he has his mother's mane i.e. yellow, blonde, but what about the coat
Polygamy is against God's ideas
Cadance.
No steaks maybe, but he's forgetting that fish and other seafood should still be an option.
This looks intriguing.
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Luke 9:49-50 (KJV)
49 And John answered and said, Master, we saw one casting out devils in thy name; and we forbad him, because he followeth not with us.
50 And Jesus said unto him, Forbid him not: for he that is not against us is for us
Time to Re-read the story for the third of forth time (I forgor)
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I can't tell if you're rp'ing beakolini or just homophobic 💀
Grandpa in Equestria!
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Another Re-Read for the fourth time I will just consider the last time the third.
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Back for another Re-read, this is the Fifth time.