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Gotta go fast! Gotta got fast! Gotta go fast!
No one else thinkin' this, just me?
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I was thinking of Sanic myself, but basically yes.
I wonder what traps Discord left for Celestia.
Btw, is Max going to hit a good luck streak soon? It seems to have gone down hill for him for quite a while.
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I like the way you think author. Your Discord is quite devious. He was never that interested in the game of chess, (honestly it's a poor representation of how a war is won, because of the implication that the king is what gives the other pieces their power to move) and if he was, he probably could have won.
Rather, he was trying to use the board to deliver a message to Celestia, in which he demonstrated her decisions and his own actions all to show his endgame irl. The pawn turning at the end into a human (or a queen, most powerful chess piece) is signifcant as it is to tell Celestia that she has overlooked something vital. Judging from her actions, she still hasn't gotten the message.
(A bit of over-analysis to add to the depth of the scene, may be right or wrong, but it's fun to speculate)
Nice addition.
Funny how Celestia lost complete track of why she went to Discord in the first place. I win you to turn to stone, you win I turn into stone but I still won't answer your question.
cant wait for the next chapter
Have a happy Nightmare night as well! Umm... Still a good story so far!
well I was hoping this hie would try and avoid the 'human fights manticore' cliche, i also don't think anyone really wants to see more injuries and downtime for max.
good, but not your best chapter
HELL. BUCKING. YES! THAT. WAS. AWESOME!
Great job man, really awesome chapter!
Nowz we orderz a new onez!
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My brain went to the scene in Jurassic Park where the T-Rex is chasing a jeep. It's not am exact quote, but still pretty close. Similar line: Malcolm Reynolds when the mule is being chased by Reavers in the movie
great chapter, buy i was hoping i'll get to read something more interesting than poor Max getting damaged again. i was hoping for something along the lines of "princess visit max and communicates with him bla bla he's cool and she is surprised and somehow feel a little bad for treating him like an animal when she first met him". like, come on, give him some rest, he suffered enough for our sins already.
Man this poor S.O.B. isn't going to catch a break anytime soon.
3408336 Huh? I know of no language that is not gender specific. Heck, English is relatively non gender specific. Most foreign languages that I've seen give genders to even inanimate objects. From your comment I think you are referring to the tendency to think of an activity as "manly" or "feminine," though I have no clue where that came from.
Eh, I don't know what I myself speak of. It's three in the morning. Imma stop myself before I say and type something I regret.
My main reason for even commenting in the first place is to say that English is in fact not a Latin based language. It is Germanic.
Also, great story. I eagerly look forward to more.
Yay! This chapter was awesome!
Poor Max. Well, at least Celly can help a bit now, but I hope she doesn't try to take him from Fluttershy and Twilight while he's being treated. That probably wouldn't end well...
--SPOILERS--
Interesting to me that Discord would care so much about humanity. The deliberate loss to prove a point I can understand, but the empathic link? A little bit extreme considering Max could have died at any second. Or maybe he knew (or trusted) that Max would survive? Gotta say this is one of the more interesting takes on Discord I've seen.
I'm unsure how to feel about the manticore scenes. It feels like protagonist is a punching bag right now, I mean he just survived the pit fight and now he's fighting mythical creatures. Some more chapters in between would have been nice.
3424231 A few more beatings and we're going to have to coat him in a nano-suit so he can avoid being as shit as the Crysis 2 protag when his suit runs out (Aka Jellified flesh and powderized bones held together by his suit)
Geez, dude can't catch a break, can he? Although I must admit, I can't wait for the turnaround - the point where max starts the rebellion and becomes a Luke skywalker mofo with a legendary sword or something XD
Awsome chapter! It really makes me wonder tought what Discord's Little game is all about.
twilight is going to be soooooo pissed
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Getting the answers doesn't really matter if he can't do anything anymore anyway, does it?
Theroy: Celestia is going to try and kill Max, and fail, then Max snaps and revolts against her with the rest of the humans (somehow)
and discord planned it all..... and that would be fucking brilliant
This is starting to reach grimderp-levels of pain towards the protagonist, even if the rest of the fic doesn't share the worldview.
Give the guy a break.
3424892 It gets better, I promise. Next few chapters will see to that...
3424491Even better, a MUTE Luke Skywalker.
3424881 Planet of the humans?
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Oh Dear...that won't end well...
HAPPY NIGHTMARE NIGHT, TO YOU TOO!!!
3424420 Incidentally, I was listening to the soundtrack when I read this comment.
3425426 Alcatraz is just a crippled blob when the suit runs out though,Is he not?
The most powerful little line i have read on this site, maybe...
Discworld reference?
3425773 Have never read it. What's the reference?
3425790 In the Discworld series, the physical manifestation of Death will sometimes play a game with somebody with lives at stake. Basically, it's the old "If you beat Death at a game, you can prevent a death" trope. The exact reference is in one of the books (I think it was Small Gods) where Death, while playing a game of chess with an Abbott, asks for help remembering how the "little horse-shaped ones are supposed to leap."
Death in the Discworld series is a VERY sympathetic portrayal of the Grim Reaper.
"Gotta go faster!" and that made me laugh.
I like this story and I can't wait to see what happens next. really gripping.
3425891 Oh, yeah. I wasn't sure what the quote was from, but I liked it and decided to use it. Should probably give those a read sometimes...
...anyways...how's your writing going? Not to bug you or anything, but I kinda miss those updates on Foreigner
3423889 Good luck is indeed headed his way...
3424046 Yeah...I know. I have shamed myself with that...
But fortunately, I'm planning some more happy chapters later on that will focus on Max's relationship with the Mane 6, as well as Twilight....and maybe
You just accomplished no small amount of justice for Discord in this chapter. That was extraordinarily well done.
Max the "suprise" will be given to you on the 10th of nov. on the 9th i gotta go to a high school ball. Marine Corps ball Oh-rah
3426160 Surprises?! I like surprises!!!
>>MadMaxtheBlack I also have IloveDashie helping me make it.
That was just too perfect.
Max really needs some backup here, I mean with all the shit he's been through I think a platoon of Redcoats is what he needs.
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The maticores would ne'er see it coming. Say what ye want about the accuracy of smoothbore muskets, lad, but over a dozen .62 calibre rounds coming at ye in a volley of gun smoke is going to ruin your day.
Particularly being that a musket's accuracy is just fine if ye let them get close enough. And bayonets will finish off anything that doesn't die from the initial volley.
Good show
He definately does have luck if he survived that, if he was unlucky as he says he is then he wouldve died.
Anyway, great chapter bro, cant wait for the next one.
Is this story inspired in any way by the Pendragon Series: Book Five?
3427416 Sorta...kinda...maybe a little...not sure...?
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Yeah, stand there in your neat and orderly (and close grouped) ranks. Just wait till I lob a grenade in the middle, and then use an automatic rifle from my position in the treeline on their right flank to mop up the rest :P
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