TWO CHAPTERS?!?!?!?
YESSSS!!!!

Needs more feature.

man this is a long story

ITS ALLLLIVE!!

Awesome, I was so wanting to see a new chapter up soon, plus two chapters in one day; jackpot.

Although it would be funny to see or have you make both The Male Rainbow be ‘taken care of’ by the knew female Max.

Rainbow with a dick!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Um how is the chapter between Chapters 13 and 14 dated January of 2014 when Chapters 13 and 14 were published in September of 2013?

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It was either a cliff hanger, or take another 3 months to update.

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Who's TD?

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His story starts here. The main character TD has punched Celestia a few times becuase she didn't think something threw and it adversely affected him. Like stranding him in Equestria by pulling him across dimensions.

Update!!!!! My year is officially made.

So glad to see this and I realy need to reread some chapter to find out where that slap came from.

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Are we going to see more updates? This is my favorite HIE fic.

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Too long? Too many characters? Maaaan you obviously never bothered with classic literature.

Hell yeah an update

I should be sleeping, but instead I'm here reading the new chapters at 2 am. No regrets!

Was hoping to see the max and Twilight reunion but I guess that will be in the next chapter. Here's to hoping it gets done a little quicker, but I would rather it take a while and retain its quality than get it faster and be lackluster. This is easily my favorite story on fimfiction! Thanks Max!

Please continue

Good news: YHaY has updated with two chapters! a full-fledged 12,000 word chapter and a Sunbutt side chapter!

Bad news: I've finished reading them.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH ITS FUNALLY HERE!!!!!!!!!

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Then do a better job. We'll be waiting with baited breath.

Max... buddy... you are so helping with that. You have no idea how much you're helping with that.

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You can add chapters to your stories. He just added one between two old ones.

I'm glad to see updates today , & I hope your doing well

I gave him a deadpan look. "I'm sooo not helping with that."

You damn tease!!!

Nice to see you back, can you please give us more soon?

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Oh ok, I did not know you could do this.

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Hm, don't think I've seen that one.

I mentioned the one I did because it happened multiple times. (And there was even an offshoot story heavily related to it.)

Ugh, I was so happy with some of the character updates I'd been dying to get to, and then the chapter ends like that!? How... What! And now, I wait... Glad to see another good chapter though

is alive

I loved the new chapters. Worth the wait, even if I was hoping the thing wouldn’t be Twilight getting pregnant...
Still, I loved it, and I’m glad you’re still among the living. You’re doing a damn fine job, don’t stress yourself out none.

I hate intermission so much but great job as always!

Better follow that slap up with a backhand there buddy.
Well then, back to the waiting game for we patient readers?
*mouse clicking noises*

Beautiful

LOL!

Cross gender is a bitch aint it!?

But, some folks find it kinky...

lol, a funny interlude, nicely done, hehee

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Hmm not really TD likes to punch Celestia. But a slap sends more of a message in opinion.

It took me three days to read up to this point.

Okay am i stupid for not understanding what TD stands for or not because its really starting to urk me now

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Sorry. Still not ringing any bells.

8804728 I mean that one should be pretty clear. You know, cause he talked to Riddick. Which included the his backstory, and what happened between him and Celestia. Yada yada...

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TD is the main character in Brony Writer's "Not a Brony" stories. He's hit Celestia for pulling stupid shit more than once.

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thanks i felt clueless for a while.

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Good God man! Are you trying to kill people?!

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That's probably the best response to our unabashed bashing of your writing style ever.

Love the work btw.

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Now I'm half-tempted to add a bunch of lip/cheek biting and absentmindedness to the next chapter.

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There you have it folks, Max is trying to kill us.

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so does this mean this story isn’t dead? cause it’s really good

IT LIVES!