I am a man from Massachusetts who graduated on June 9, 2011. I have been a brony since 2014 and I hope you enjoy my stories.
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This story is a sequel to The Redemption of Twilight Sparkle
Twilight has been forgiven for her past transgression, but she hasn't fully forgiven herself. To make matter worse, she and her friends have to deal with a unicorn Tartarus bent on making every pony equal.
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Needless to say. ;-) i'd like to see Sunset become a princess/alicorn as well.
9572657 Glad you like it
Right Comrade Brony4Ever1992
WHAT THE HECK FLUTTERSHY REALLY?!!! I hope Fluttershy made to pay big time for her treachery!
Another person with no clue on what Communism actually is...
And my God, is Sunset a Mary Sue in these stories.
9594038 Communism is slavery
Sooooo.....I need to play a lot of catchup with your universe but....is Fluttershy more gullible here than in the episode?
About my previous question.....disregard that while I consider shedding liquid pride.
I'm suprised how you did Starlight in this one, I take she may be unredeemable, and Diamond going to really hate himself in the end.
I look forward to Double Diamond being sent to the darkest mines to mine for all time as a punishment.
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While I get they don;t want to hurt them...BUCK THAT! Are they going to hold back if they attack family and even kill love ones while udner control? i don;t care, if they are under control. It's stupid to allow them to complete a attack meant to kill or cripple even.
Or they just going to let them walk all over them to get to their love ones or friends?
9711129 It's the hero rule of "I can't let my enemies be killed"
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Who said about killing them? and not talking about saving them from the Yaks, but to stop them from actually hurting any other pony or so.
Which is better to hold back and lives and ponies are hurt or killed, and then they get unbrainwashed and now have to live with their sins?
Or stopping them even if they get hurt they be grateful nopony was hurt due to their brain washing.
9711258 I agree with you, but the I feel the Mane 6 wouldn't
Can i ask a question? How is Starlight's equalist ponies able to do so much? As far as I know they lack any and all skills to do....ANYTHING.
Everything they do is sub-bard and pathetic. How is it they can take over Canterlot so easily
9871722 Starlight had Double Diamond attack Zecora and obtain the Alicorn Amulet. I think I referenced the amulet here.
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Yes I know But you mentioned Trouble shoes and the others help restrained the guards, and again how?
Also again you said they got the amulet, and several times you seem to point out they were capable of doing other things, like regular ponies when again they are weak, slow, and weak in certain task and abilities, unless they threw those awful muffins like rocks to hurt and attack ponies.
they lack skills to do anything much. Or did Starlight do everything?
9871760 The royal guard aren't exactly they greatest at their job.
We all know spear is compromised.
What is with the Pause?
9966624 i was getting burned out and needed a break. I put an update in my blog.
damn
Ahh the standard answer to perfect leader brainwashing- showing they are not perfect!
Only the one wearing the amulet can remove it. You can edit that to have starlight remove it very easily.
You should start the next few stories with the Storm Kings War, and the School of Friendship, where Chancellor Neighsay starts bringing up Twilight's dark past during his confrontation with the leaders.
10335194 Maybe
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What will the names of your future stories be?
10336214 I don't know if I'm doing them. I'm keeping it a trilogy for now.
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Let us know in the next blog you write.
Don't know why A.I. has such a hate boner for the third part in a trilogy that they had to add it to multiple bad fic groups. Not too bad of a story from what I've seen.
10588675 What bad fic group?
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Overly Stupid, No Originality, and the Absolutely Disgusting group. Don't know why though, since these are for fics that have like a 20 to one dislike to like ratio and yours only has one dislike which was added today. So, I guess A.I. disliked your story, added it to those groups because... Reasons? I don't know why someone would read the third part of a trilogy without reading the other two and then just add the third to those groups.
10588922 Yeah I saw that. Admittedly doesn't make me feel great.
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Ah, don't worry about that guy. Think of it this way, there are over twenty people who like this story and one a-hole who doesn't and added it to those groups.
10588927 Thanks
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NP. Keep up the good work B4E.
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When will Twilight be opening the School of Friendship?