When Dipper and Mabel find a magical portal to Equestria they meet the mane 6 and they all soon become friends. But trouble brews when the eight new friends must now join forces to stop Trixie and Gideon from taking over all of Equestria and Discord from making Gravity Falls into his own playground. These friends will need much more then just luck...they'll need friendship.
The time this story takes place is between the second and third season, so stuff like Trixie's and Twilight's battle, Discord being reformed, and Twilight becoming a princess has yet to happen.
Cover Art by: TheUltraVioletS on DeviantART
Chapters (11)
Interesting, a few errors, but an excellent start!
Come now my dear friend when is the next update?
Yours Truly Thecakedevil
Please update soon!
Alright, I'm not sure if I know the other show this is being crossed with. I do so love alternate universe fiction, though! Infinverse is bestiverse!
Great chapter. Gideon and Trixie may have been defeated but a greater threat is now loose. What is Discord planning?
WHY ARE THERE NO COMMENTS ON THIS AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!
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The other show is Gravity Falls, from Disney channel. It's my favorite show other than MLP, seriously, I think it's awesome. Usually I don't really like the shows on Disney Channel, but Gravity Falls has great humor, mystery, and fun. You have to check it out!
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It's funny, 'cause you writing a MLP GF crossover also!
P.S. Yes, I am also reading that as well!
One lonely comment.....
One lonely comment.....
Only read the first two chapters but after glancing ahead to confirm some things, these are my thoughts.
I love the crossover
The dialogue feels good on the Gravity Falls characters especially with Grunkle Stan
The writing styles irks me greatly.
Honestly the idea and Gravity Falls dialogue alone are the only reason I want to keep reading but its hard with the way it is written. Your transitioning of sentences to lack of dialogue or depth on the pony side in first chapter made it hard to read past the first chapter
. Again I've only read the first two but glancing ahead it seems your writing style hasn't improved much with the story. In addition the grammar mistakes show here and there aren't easy to ignore.
Looking ahead I found this in the 7th chapter and just couldn't help but feel like what?
But criticism aside, I love the idea and will read the rest and follow to see how it turns out story wise. I love the concept but the writing needs heavy work as I'm sure your tired of me saying in this comment.
I recommend finding a proof reader if you are able to and when your writing does improve I would go back and polish up the majority of the story. I know some people like to leave things as they are as they improve their skills. But for me personally as I improve and really like one of my stories I go back and do it some justice by improving it. And so far I believe this story seems worth the justice to have it be improved upon and polished. Will finish and best of luck on your writing and stories as you improve. A fav and watch from me to help support
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THERE IS NOW A COMMENT ON THIS AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!
A Wild Trollestia appeared!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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I'm right there with you bro
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No need to be lonely 
Hi!
Dipper is now Scootaloo
Your argument is invalid
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i must know WHERE THE HELL DID YOU GET THAT PIC!!
its freaking awesome. and also. can we be friends
this is my first comment and im triying to make a friend!
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The Cover Art is from TheUltraVioletS on Deviant art. Go check out his gallery, its really cool.
Totally cool.
This story is one of the best crossover of gravity falls and mlp ever.
My face is like so happy (pinkiesmile)
Do More! Do More! Do More!
3181505 Just for writing an awesome first chapter, how 'bout a hoof bump? (Can we be friends?)
discord WROTE THE EQUESTRIAN BOOKS I FEEL THAT IS THE TRUTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Gideon why you no kidnapp Mabel?
awsome story
cool chapter.
One of the best storys I read since i got back from a mini holladay.
Keep up the good work.
You Mistakes OMG I saw 2 -You carrots really? I forgot where is the other one
the lonely comment with trolestia
If you de-code the message that's in the picture "TZNV RH LEVI PRWH" it reads: "GAME IS OVER KIDS" using Atbash cipher.
(Note: you can use this to decode secret messages throughout the show(Gravity Falls) or at least some of them. Also, almost at the end of the intro, you can hear a whisper... If you play it backwards it tells you what kind of cipher you can use or at least gives you a clue of what kind of cipher to use...in season 2 you need to find "keywords" in order to decode some messages)
I think you should do a dipper and twilight shipping in this story makes it interesting.( twilight smile)
lots of typos that need fixing, if u can go through and fix them i'll happily continue reading but as is it throw me off of the story and makes it much less enjoyable
Eh...
Love Gravity Falls, and there are some good ideas in here... but this needs a LOT of work.
Seriously, the spelling and formatting errors, and... gah... the characterization.
Okay, so the first chapter... This hurt you more than I can say. Really, I was ASTOUNDED at how quickly my eyes glazed over reading about Fluttershy doing her shopping. Is this relevant to the plot at ALL?
All that happens that we care about, is the chapter ends with her finding Mabel and Dipper unconscious by her cottage. Really, chapter two should've been chapter one. We've missed nothing by cutting that. We don't need to establish that she was going about her daily business before including her in the story. The viewer should know who Fluttershy is already.
The dialogue, for the most part, REALLY needs to be punched-up. It's not engaging, and half the time it doesn't sound like something a human being would say, let alone the characters who say it.
It takes more than having the walking, talking dialogue balloons referring to each other as Dipper and Mabel, referencing something from the show now and again and conversing dryly about how bored they are.
I mean, for the sake of the plot Mabel finds fascination in the idea of a portal from whence all the mythological stuff is flowing forth. Firstly, this is a HUGE detail about Gravity Falls and its weirdness to be explained, and not only does Dipper find this at random (without the blacklight no less) but he doesn't even show passing interest.
Okay, he notes the foolishness of springboard diving into an unknown Universe of dubious properties, but he doesn't even sound intrigued by the thing that explains why Gravity Falls is so whacked-out with the paranormal.
And Mabel, ditz though she is, is all for leaping headfirst into it because she's BORED, and for no other reason.
Look, Mabel is quirky as a two-dollar bill, but she's not stupid. Really, it ought to be Dipper urging them forward, investigating the portal only to be accidentally drawn in (mayhaps by some "invisible pushing force!") with Mabel showing her own misgivings about getting close to the Hellmouth spawning all of their problems. Not by Mabel challenging his grit and egging him into doing something so stupid. That's more something Mr. Corduroy might do. I mean, Dipper might wear that vest half the time too, but that doesn't make him Marty McFly.
Lastly, how does Dipper know the portal didn't send them through time? That could be EXACTLY what happened. He can't possibly possess the frame of reference to say that or not.
The story sounds great, but I can't help but noticing all those typos. With a little more attention to them, this chapter could really......um.....blossom!
I would like this so much more if there weren't so many mistakes. You seem to have captured Dipper and Mabel very well, which I like.
I saw a couple errors.
Shouldn't that be 'shoe'?
That should be 'yes' or yeah'.
'Now' and 'you're'
Wow I have been eyeing this story for awhile now and a part of me ignored it due to it not having alicorn twilight
but ended up looking into it in sheer curiosity! That and it had gravity falls in it 
it is an extremely great story with tons of twists and turns! Its 1 in the morning here but who needs sleep with such a great fan fiction?! 
out of 10 
Also I am looking for a project and would love to edit this for grammar and spelling!
Other then grammer, you get 100
You should make a secuel with bill going into celestias mind to get exactly what forbidden spell she used for his own purposes
GIDDEON, YOU ARE CRAZY TO TEAM UP WITH SOMEPONY WHO SPEAKS IN THIRD PERSON POV, THE ONLY OTHER YOU SHOULDNT TEAM UP WITH THAT DOES THE SAME THING IS RATH FROM BEN 10
YEP THATS A CHICKEN
THATS MY GIRL PINKIE
WOW