• Published 13th Aug 2013
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Falling Stars - guitarguyjoe



Fluttershy was up late one night caring for her animals, when she noticed a falling star. She made a wish to meet her very special somepony. Little did she realize that the star was heading for her cottage, and that it wasn't a star, it was a po

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Epilogue

"Well.. today's the day." I stood in the dressing room preparing my suit.

I was so nervous. I tried to straiten my tie but my hooves were so shaky that it just kept getting worse.

Finally my best man came to my aid. "Thanks Big Mac."

"Eeyup" he said not to enthusiastically.

I was to worried to notice though. "It's just that... I'm so worried that something would go wrong. What if the rings go missing. What if the cake gets ruined and the party turns into a disaster. Or what if another star falls in front of the church and she falls for him instead of me."

Big Mac hit me in the back of the head. "Thanks. I needed that."

There was a knock at the door. "Five minutes left" said Spike behind the door.

I was heading to the door nervously as the red stallion behind me grabbed my shoulder and told me. "Good luck champ"

I smiled at this as I nodded and took my place in the front.

As I stood there I began to look for familiar faces in the crowd. There was Twilight and what I would surmise as her family in the front row with princess Cadence and Shining Armor. Applejack and her family were next with Rainbow Dash and Rarity. Pinkie Pie sat in the next row with the Cakes. Beyond that were many ponies I would presume to have been invited by Pinkie herself. In the back sat the princess of the night Luna smiling at me.

Finally the music started playing. What followed next was the doors opening revealing a mare in a beautiful wedding dress approaching, guided by Angel Bunny in a little tuxedo, followed by Applebloom, Sweetiebelle, and Scootaloo as the flower girls. Angel gave her away to me as they approached the front and stopped in front of Celestia.

Celestia began the service "Dearly beloved, we are gathered here today to join Fallen Star and Fluttershy in holy matrimony. If there is any pony who would object to this, speak now or forever hold your peace."

No pony answered, and in that moment I knew that this was meant to be. I finally relaxed as we began the vows.

"Do you, Fluttershy, take Fallen Star as your lawfully wedded husband to have and to hold in sickness and in health so long as you both shall live."

" I do" replied the made in white attire.

"And do you, Fallen Star, take Fluttershy as your lawfully wedded wife to have and to hold in sickness and in health so long as you both shall live"

I looked into her eyes and saw souch joy in them that it became unquestionable. "I do" I said with no regret.

"I now pronounce you man and wife. You may kiss the bride."

I removed Fluttershy's veil to see her in all her beauty. Our muzzles approached each other's as we locked lips, causing anduproar of hoof stomps and cheers.

From this moment on I knew that my life would be one worthwhile so long as I had this made by my side.

Author's Note:

Well here it is folks the last chapter of the book. :(
I really enjoyed writing this one but I have other stories waiting. I may have switched it to complete but that doesn't mean I won't take suggestions to improve the story. Special thanks to those of you who stuck with he story since day one. I will make a sequel but I have many ideas in my head so it may be awhile. Thank you all for your help and I hope you read my other stories too.
Simcerely-GG Joe

Comments ( 2 )

Only one thing...you put the word "made" where you would've meant "maid", i presume that is what you meant, at any rate. otherwise, your story is buckin' awesome and Zhenra-Khal approves:rainbowhuh:

4303537 yea was my first story and I do need to work on detail but it just difficult for me. I imagine my chapters as movie scenes; when the scene is coming to and end then so does the chapter.

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