You are Anon, a human living in Equestria. Your good friend Rarity has suggested, or rather forced you, to work at the Ponyville Day Spa as a masseuse. This won't get awkward, right? Right? Right?!
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I know it's meant to be a bit of a comedy, but I like stories where ponies are petted and massaged. If any need it it's the hard working apples!
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Thanks for liking my story. It's my first attempt at writing an anon story
Poor human... All those mares are wanting to make out with him after they experience his hands... Or at least might eat him!
Man, I love stories of ponies getting petted and massaged. I would definitely take a job like this in Equestria to just to pet ponies, dragons, griffins and other creatures.
I had to do a double check at the age rating. I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing...meh, I'll upvote anyway.
This is definitely... interesting. I'm mean, I like it. Don't get me wrong. It's just... different for me, you know?
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Should it be mature if it isn't necessarily in an overtly sexual nature? If you think so, I can consider changing it to mature. Thanks for the up vote. :)
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I'm glad you like it. Just wait until Chapter 3- Wing Boner. :D
Ok, that was just funny!!!
Wait... It's rated M?
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Yeah, I only changed it because it was starting to get saucy, and I wasn't sure if all of the saucy comedy would be appropriate for teen. Or do you think it should still be teen?
Oh dear now all the mares in town are going to fall for him... Poor human when there is no female in town of your kind you will sadly fall for one of the ponies... Like in Animal Crossing XD
There's a short videos someone made that was really funny about Animal Crossing because one of the animals was hitting at him when he is like this isn't right
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So far there isn't anything that shows to be M, only way for this story to become a M rated if sex is it in some way but since it isn't it's better to stay T And see how far u get before people start to suggest it to be M.
I don't think it should M.
This is pretty cute lol.
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Thank you
LAST CHAPTER, NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! This could be a very good series of short stories!!!
No last chapter! I want everypony and other creatures get a chance to get a message from me!
The thing is, I'd probably make the same mistake.
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Thanks for your kind comments. If you all like this sort of thing, I can do other anon stories and tie them to this one. :-)
What groups is this story a part of?
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This story isn't apart of a group. It's my first attempt at writing an anon story.
This is really good!
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Thank you. I am happy you like it so far. It was meant to be awkward and funny. :)
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Well, you succeeded. It's really well-written and the pacing is just right.
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Thanks a lot. :D If you like my writing style, I'm also a published fantasy author as well. I've written five books so far, and my stories convey my sense of campiness and fun. In fact, the novels, The Wrath of the Forgotten, and That Which Dragons Fear both have a ton of MLP references in it. That series, The Korrinian Chronicles, is one giant love letter to Brony Kind. :D
>When she tries to stand on her two feet, her knees are wobbly
No wonder, considering she's a pony and trying to walk on two legs after a massage.
And then they fucked. The end!
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Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!
I don't intend to ever drift over into the clop realm. That is Wuten Country. :D But its totally up to the imagination of the reader. I hope you enjoyed the story.
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I fixed it. Thank you for catching it. :)
8295787 She showed off her cooch. They fucked.
Edit: Yes.....very much.
Poor Annon... Wait I thought this was are own story right? When reading we think we're the human right?
Anyhow... I do wish this was a longer series were he can learn more about different ponies and use advantages of gossip to trick the ponies.
I did like this chapter, poor human he doesn't know what he got himself into.
One hornjob later:
Is it wrong that after the previous chapter I was hoping the "special client" would be Starlight?
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That's not wrong at all. :D I was just trying to have continuity because Rarity beamed him a predatory smile in chapter 1. :) I was considering shipping Starlight and Anon for this.
Damm dude. Well, I can't say I didn't see that. Just kinda happened. Oh well, it still feels right, so, good job. Yeah.
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Thanks. I appreciate your kind words. :)
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Not a problem. You deserve them, because you have done an excellent job at keeping readers interested. You've also shown to have some consistency, which is something I appreciate very much (even if I am lacking in that department), so you keep doing what you feel is best. See ya later.
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I love writing. In addition to fanfics, I've also published novels too. :-) I'm a story teller to my core. Thanks again. :-D
I liked the story, his treatments causing some "excitement" while he worked, but he stuck to his job and didn't give in. Even with Rarity at the end, she arranged things so it would happen after work(if it all).
The one thing that stuck out to me was the sudden inclusion of Twilight as an obstacle in Rarity pursuing him. That just seemed REALLY sudden and out of the blue to just toss in this close to the end of the story. Especially since the story is completed now, its like throwing in a plot point that could be used for later, then it was just abandoned.
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Thank you for your feedback! :-) the logic behind briefly mentioning twilight in the end was because I wanted the focus of the story to be centered around Anon and his work with giving massages. If I revealed that Twilight was suspicious of Rarity's intentions too early, it might take away from Rarity's admission. While at first, Rarity simply wanted to be rubbed on because of the stress relief that came with it, the absence away from Anon helped her manifest that she had feelings for Anon. Also, Twilight being an obstacle for rarity was more related to 'what' she caught them doing specifically. Lol
This was a good story, until it got to the part of the sexual harassment in a workplace. Someone in a position of power over another (able to get them fired) making sexual advances like this? Bit rapey.
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I'm sorry you didn't like the ending. In other Anon stories, ive seen similar sorts of plots play out, and I figured it was a staple of these kinds of tales. You do bring up a good point though. I'm sorry if you felt offended, that was not intentional.
Well, that escalated quickly. I'm not saying I didn't like the ending, but I wished the story to be longer and more detailed. It feels like the story just ended abruptly.
>I do wish this was a longer series were he can learn more about different ponies
Same thing.
>Bit rapey.
Well, I got the impression that Anon started to like the idea. So even if it was going in that direction, it ended with mutual consent actually.
>Her eyes are barely parted, and her eyes are unfocused.
Did you mean eyelids? :)
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Thank you for your kind words. If you all like my version of anon, then I can write something else and tie it to this one. :-)
As for the pacing at the end, I didn't feel
It needed description of the bath, and the shampoo, and the nap. The main point is that Rarity likes Anon, and this entire ordeal was all planned out. Would you like to see more of this anon?
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You could show the Twilight reaction when she knows it. Also, what was the reason Twilight didn't like it? Was she jealous? Maybe she needs a massage too? You surely forgot a chapter with rubbing an alicorn :)
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Maybe so. After I finish the Scootaloo story, I will go back and conceptualize a bonus chapter. :D
And this needs a sequel, as Spitfire tries to steal Anon away.
Every single mare and stallion is going to want to badly drag him home after experiencing one of his massages, even the married ones.
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Actually, because of popular demand, I am going to write a sequel starring this version of Anon, and he is going to do something else in Ponyville. :)
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Yeah... :) Because people liked this story so much, I am going to write another Anon story.