• Member Since 29th Nov, 2011
  • offline last seen Apr 5th, 2019

Leoheartxx2


Part artist, Part writer , Part student....All brony....XD

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One day Twilight was trying a new spell she found in a book regarding time magic.....However the incantation wasn't properly conducted and she was sucked into a new world so familiar....the future. But what if the future wasn't all.....bright??

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 8 )

OKay, major grammar mistakes and such, but a good story. Tracked all the same.

Using '...' EVERY sentence is annoying.

171059ok thanks for the feedback...ill try my very best to patch up those mistakes as soon as possible....and also thanks for the track...:ajsmug:



171094 Im not quite sure about your comment should effect the way or style you read...but if thats the case ill try my best to fix it....:twilightsmile:

i Couldn't believe me eyes when i saw this had been updated :pinkiehappy:

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ohhh...i guess you must have been waiting a LONGGGGGG time fot this....sry :fluttershbad:
well i had a lot of stuff to do and this is not the only fic im working on...anyway glad to see some1 still keepin track of it :twilightsmile:

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Are you going to continue the story now or this was just a lone update?

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of course ill continue to update this story, but it would take sometime before i pubish another chapter.
As i said before, im actually quite busy with stuff, especially when ur college term is closing in on finals...:applejackunsure:

It saden me much...althought I've tried my best, but i apologies to those who continue waiting for an update on this fanfic. I had a lot to bear and time isnt a luxury i had. :ajsleepy:

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