Just a guy trying to write about MLP:FiM :3
Being a Princess requires a lot of things, and even the most peaceful of them get enemies, Celestia is the perfect example of it, after Luna vanishing into thin air and the Princess fo the Sun and Love turned into crystals, Twilight has another mission, to fight and defeat the three mayor threats to Equestria... But... what if the power of friendship is not enough to win over them?
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Its good! Just needs more sensary I think to give it that umph it needs, very nice consept though and I hope you have more in store. BTW I saw this through your youtube comment lol fun but shirt story to read
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Well thanks! :D I'll upload the third chapter tomorrow :3
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Oh my gosh! XD Trust me I read it all :3 thanks for those tips, I'll be sure to take them in consideration :3 and I may... just MAY include the sirens here ewe I'll see how that goes ewe anyways :3 thank you very much for the comments and don't worry, write them as long as you want :3 help is really appreciated :D I'lll read yours right away
6229875 Eeyup... got a lot to change.... uwuUuu Sorry is just that English is not my native language so yeah, is hard to write a whole story XD I'm sorry it has so many mistakes, I'll change them as soon as possible :3 thanks for the detailing things it kinda bugs me when someone is like "I didn't like it" and that's it XD anyways, thanks again and I'll message at you when the chapters are finished :3 Nice day! :D and don't worry I know how it feel to be in a place where stormy days mess up your internet XD
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First of all, don't worry about not answering right away :3 'cause I know how it feels to have migraine ewe.
Second, thanks to you for making this long edit suggestions :3 they're helpful
Third, I don't really like the idea of villains being evil just because... so I'm planning on something, but you're right, I'll change the chapter a bit... maybe even leave the storytime for another time ewe anyways, thanks! :D I'll correct them as soon as possible :3, plus let's be real, Discord got a chance to get reformed ewe
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Hey there :3 Uhm... well something I'd like to say is that I know that some details are missing :3 But I like to give them little by little, as you could see with the sirens nwnUuu I do like when you point out the missing details like Cadence's missing pain and stuff but at times they're missing because they'll be mentioned in following chapters :3
Now the sirens are also millenial , and since they had no magic after Rainbow Rocks... I just thought they would become old people nwnUuuu.
Please don't misunderstand the first comment nwnUuu I really appreaciate your help :3 I'll correct the ones that are supposed to be the from the chapter and the other ones well... let them be a surprise
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Thanks! :D
I really hope Luna gets punished even after it's all over. I mean seriously....Letting herself get seduced by Sombra she knew he was bad news and like a Bimbo or Fan girl let herself get used and tossed aside to let Nightmare out.
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Why so much hate to Luna?
anyways, let that be a surprise, plus as far as the story has gone she hasn't done a thing 
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I don't hate Luna I love her, but she really let me down. I understand Sombra was a old love, but to fall for such a easy trap...
With out any second thoughts or regret he turned her to Nightmare moon.
The moment she let herself be taken by his charm was the moment she blew it, this Luna ....let me down.
Luna was so happy she could’ve died there and wouldn’t regret a thing.
Okay, maybe having sex with the one who turned Shining Armor into crystal, but he’s not dead.
Or the fact that she betrayed her sister by loving Sombra, but she wasn’t the one to blame! Damn heart does what it wants!
And let’s be real, Sombra knows what to kiss, how to kiss and when to kiss.
SERIOUSLY! What the hell Luna what the hell?!
Candance was a heartbroken mare over what happen to her husband Twilight was a huge mess.
Then Luna goes off and sleeps with the enemy?!
WOW...What a let down! That being polite i got chose words for how she acted and none of them are pretty.
I at least hope she remembers everything a Nightmare Moon and knows she screwed up big time, i hope she loses the trust of the ponies and needs to earn it all over again, not the main six as they just forgive her but the other the citizens of their world.
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Well... sorry if I did the Princesses a lot OoC but... just remeber Luna didn't want to turn herself into Nightmare Moon, Sombra forced her, sure she did slept with him, but as she said, it was only to remember something long gone.
Anyways, I'm sorry if I did a bad job with the Princesses :( I hope you'll still follow the rest of the story