There is a sequel, and a threequel to this...
For the longest time, peace settled in New York City. Young Peter Parker, otherwise known as the Amazing Spider-Man, got a long, relaxing break. No goblins, no rhinos, no lizards. But this will all change, as it always does for Spider-Man. He must save the day again, but this time, things have changed. Dr. Octopus has created a universal traveling vortex, that can teleport any being to a new dimension. Spider-Man must seek the help of Madam Web to grab hold of the new land he has fallen to: Equestria.
Adventure, and Action will pursue.
Chapters (10)
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79911 Lol I already have the next 2 chapters done!
go on. ima enjoy this.
and i feel sorry for the poor sap who doesnt know about spiderman...
Who WOULDN'T know Spider Man?! you don't need that, i don't think those people have electricity. Now then, this is quite good, but Peter changes faster then Superman.... That kinda scares me...
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Next chapter is up.
PERfeCT TIMING
79948
Same here.
Author: I can't really tell, are you working off of Spiderman having technology based web shooting or are you going the route of the movies (is there any other Spiderman things that go with the same idea?) of just being part of his super-powers? If technology based he may run into some troubles in the future.
79961 I never liked the idea of him having Synthetic webbing, its too non-spider-like.
He has organic webbing that is formed from his spinnerets in his wrists (Like in the movies and some comics). I know the problems he would face if he would be using synthetic. (Running out of webbing)
HO SHEEEEEEEEEIT!!!!!!
I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SO LONG!
79990 I KNOW RIGHT?
80013>>79990 WHO WANTS CHAPTER 2?!
Hmmm not bad, flow could use a some work but overall the idea is interesting and so far it seems like everpony is acting in character. I look forward to seeing how this goes.
This is how u do a spiderman cross over
80158 Hellllll yeah!!!!!
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By Celestia's mane! Just don't make him anything like those awlful spiderman movies! YUCK! Emo parker ForTheFAIL!
So you read comic books?
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80295 Yeah, lovem
I had completely forget how snarky spider-man was. Hes being so mean to everyone! I get he thinks it all silly but why the hate spider guy? y u no lik ponys?
80307 Well, he thinks its all fake at first, but he lightens up after the tip to Madame Web. Dun worry, Spider-Man is a really nice guy tbh. Hes just really jokey
Piderman, did you forget that three is your house?
80413 One for penut, two for tubaa, three fo HOUSE! :D
Oh... oh my goodness. Okay, where do I start?
This was amusing, but reading it was painful. The punctuation and formatting seems to be the biggest issue. You used too many apostrophes. There were also a few instances where you told us what was happening rather than showing us. Some of the sentences were made redundant before they even ended. It reads more like a Spiderman fanfiction than a pony fanfiction. There were some places where your grammar was poor.
I'd suggest reading The Editor's Omnibus style guide on EqD.
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Excellent, Excellent, this is rather well done, but you should make sure that he doesn't use his webbing too much unless twilight makes him a spell to increase his natural production since it would take a whole lot of protein to create the normal amounts used by spiderman and I don't think the ponies would take to him eating meat very well, though eggs might be a possibility(pastries and all) he would need to eat about 20-40 times what a normal human eats protein wise to explain it
fantastic
Huh, can Doctor Octopus meet Octavia PRETTY PLEASE?!
80756 LOL!
and Yes, your so very right, this does make a major problem for spiderman.
80769 Thank you so much
80786 I love you too :P
81006 All in good time, my friend. All in good time.
81097
While you doing it can I also have Spiderman and Mare-Do-Well meeting each other? Like, two masked superheroes with glass oculars and amazing abilities =)
81097 if you have twilight or madame web cast a spell to increase his creation ability without an increase in consumption that could explain it
This just gold, better than gold, PLATINUM! no more expensive than platinum, PIETERSITE!
:3 so we meet again spider man
whats up
I came
81981
81996 Thats how much this story pwns
82046 uh huh
So glad I tracked
Ponies... and spider man... well. I think you may be onto something here.
I'm just wondering am I the only one that reads the narration as Stan Lee? I am greatly enjoying this story, keep it up.
82093 LOL Yeah, I guess you could read it like that
82099 Finders keepers loosers weepers
82149 Its mainly pinkie and twilight because shes so intrested. Fluttershy is scared shitless and Rarity doesnt know what to think. Rainbow thinks hes so amazing, and AJ thinks hes just.... well...... same as Rarity.
And Yes, deadpool MIGHT just play a role.... as well as Captain america, and Ironman.
Excellent
82237 Fantastic, AND Excellent? Why thank you good sir. Happy Rainbow Dash for you
needs more....web dakka?
82465 What?
82479
don't worry bout it just make more web dakka
82488 Wtf is web dakka? Sorry a bit dazed right now.
YES! MARVEL AND EQUIESTRIA CROSSOVER!
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