The Red team and Blue team get some new help, but when a failed teleport sends the new guys, along with Tucker from Blue team and Donut from Red team to a different reality things don’t exactly end well for them. Or do does it?
Side note: This is not exactly a serious project.
This is some what based off season 4 - 5.
Rated T for Teen, Cause you know. Bad language.
STARTING STRONG! 2013's already looking good for the bronies and the RVB fans. Keep goin and stay golden^^
Faving now just this chapter is hilarious I'm giggling like a school girl and I don't know why vodka would be good right about now
Comrade i will give vodka for each chapter you make
Wait... is Roger a girl or a guy because I still cant tell.
bow chika bow wow
This looks great! I shall be watching this
Nailed it, more or less. I'll be faving this.
Hey Alpha! I just saw the newest fic of yours!!
Edit: AWESOME!!
A stealthy explosives expert who also is tactical expert? And led a team while prone to fits of insanity, refusing to talk to anyone unless it was about explosives or tactics? This doesn't make sense in the slightest.
And why do you feel the need to put down on the crew? Sure they're not that smart, brave, or skilled. But that did not stop them from taking down the group that made Agent Texas, Washington, and Omega. What they lack in skill, they make up in their sheer inability to die.
But I'm starting to rant, I can already tell where this is going and so I only have this to say
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1885348
You're supposed to disregard everything because:
1) It's a Halo fic
2) It's a Halo fic based off of a shitty YouTube series with an annoying cast.
inb4 fanboy downvotes.
1885377
In what way is it shitty, hm? Because it's popular? Because anyone who has ever been on Youtube, or played Halo has heard of them? Because they have over two million subscribers? Because they're damn better than you are?
No, go ahead. Share with me your wisdom on how bad they are for what asinine reason you can come up with.
1885455
It's my personal taste, you pretentious asshole.
1885462
I'm the pretentious asshole for simply not agreeing with you? For asking why? You can't hear it right now but I'm doing a slow clap for your astounding reasoning. I'm not being condescending because I think you're stupid, really I don't. Oh by the way, condescending means talking down to.
1885475
I was attempting a joke with that first comment, but obviously this was taken literally. The comment section doesn't need this drama, so I'll just end it here.
I don't like Halo and I don't like RvB, therefore I think RvB is 'shitty' because it is not my type of humor.
Thank you for taunting me.
There wouldn't be a reason to define condescending to me if you're not trying to belittle me, unless you're being completely sarcastic.
If you really want to verbally fight me, go ahead and PM me... I guess...
1885484
Even though I'm a fan of Halo and RvB, I completely understand why you have a distaste for seeing them, but I have just one question:
Did you dislike this, and if so was it just because it was Halo/RvB?
I ask this because one thing I can't seem to grasp is why people dislike fics because they don't like the source material, when they could just as easily have ignored it.
1885583
As in clicking the thumbs down button? No, I haven't voted on it yet...
Now this is very interesting.Keep updating this and you might just get a fav and a like.
Wow, nice job dude! Hilarious! Can't wait to read more.
This story... sucks.
Sorry, too good of an opportunity pass up. Nah, this story was pretty decent.
I really really hope for your safety that you include freelancers....
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Watch your grammar. Otherwise this is proving to be entertaining.
One thing I don't get. Why are Donut and Tucker ponies while roger and Rino aren't? Yet?
1886437 It's part of the story, I've got something very special in plan for Rino and Roger.
But.... If i told you.... It wouldn't be a secret now would it?
All I am saying is spell check and grammar
Other than that I am adding this to my favorites. I loved it!
I just made an account to tell you that you have done a great job on this
1886235 Oh, Regidar. You kidder you! Also: ^^^^1885475>>1885484MAJOR CATFIGHT ABOVE^^^^^
This is generally bad. The writing is bland and there are a lot of issues with spelling and grammar. The only reason this story has the likes it does is because there are enough halofans who don't know shit about grammar and storytelling to click the like and favorite buttons.
1885377I back you up with the downvote, but not for that reason specifically. I would give it a chance if it were written well, but this is garbage.
1885455 This story is written like garbage. it is shitty.
Will read later...
I have other stories..Sorry, but I'll follow you for updates and question and like to not forget about it!
Will maybe fav in the end...After reading.
1886597 I appreciate your feedback and I find your comment hilarious.
I shall improve my grammar and story telling.
1886759 Sorry for the brutal honesty. That's kind of a bad habit of mine.
1886773 No no, its rather fine. I appreciate your comment for telling your opinion, not everyone likes everything.
Oh, and look. My comment is getting voted down because I have an honest opinion. Christ, it's like youtube!
If you remember knighty's reason for adding the upvote downvote comment system was to help detect spam comments and comments that did not help or contribute to the story. But since 99% of people are stupid, the system is being used for personal preference instead of practical use. Isn't that just great?
How often do you update?
1886812
You sir, just made my day with that comment.
Grammar needs work, other then that I like this story so far
I squee'd in delight when I read the description, even more so when I read the story.
Ah, yes! Another Red Vs Blue
1886597 I think you got the downvotes because you weren't any help with improving the story. If you had said, "I dont like this story, here's why I dont like it, and here are a couple of suggestions/things you could fix to improve it."
All you said was:
So, you stated your opinion. And reasons why you don't like it. But then you just went on to rage. If you're gonna leave a comment to criticize the story, then at least have the courtesy to help the author out.
That comment wasn't "brutal honesty". It was being a jerk. Please try to not do that in the future!
-Winter Storm
WRITE's Technical Technicality Technician
1887229 What do you think brutal honesty is.
1887293 Brutal honesty is when you speak regardless of the other's feelings. Okay. But you went further and started insulting people, which is not brutal honesty.
1887299 I directed an insult at nobody but everybody.
1887328 The key word is "insult".
Insult: To treat with gross insensitivity, insolence, or contemptuous rudeness. See Synonyms at offend.
b. To affront or demean: an absurd speech that insulted the intelligence of the audience.
2. Obsolete To make an attack on.
1. To behave arrogantly.
2. To give offense; offend: "a speech that was intended to insult."
1886597
the grammar isn't as bad as your claiming man, sure a few errors here and there but i can safely say its not as bad as you're saying.
Should be "plan, do it."
"He" should be "He/she" I think. Also this sentence seems incomplete.
Should be
SargeantSeargentSarge*Grif
Unnecessary period.
Double space.
"He has been in a lot of firefights and"
Himself in one. He does not like Church, because he bosses him around.
*anything
But not to new people he meets.
*Red's
Try "He wouldn't be that bad if he stopped talking about sex"
The saying is "Worth crap". Try dropping the "a".
*he's
I have no idea what the others do for fun around here, and I sure as hell don't want to find out.
1887342 I'm not going to fight with you on this story. If you want to cause problems, take it to my page. The End! bye!
1887380 Thank you, I shall get to editing these mistakes out.
Ehh... I'll be frank, Donut seems a bit of to me, but I'm not sure what it is... It just seems like he's channeling just a BIT TOO much of Caboose. XD Other than that, it's... interesting, I guess. Suppose I'll track for now to see where it goes.