i didn't really mind the wait, what with the sun and all. but i did notice something going on between dano and fluttershy, i suspect that the romance tag will come into play soon and don't stop with the little bit at the bottom, i find it rather funny
I've said it before and I'll say it again; you do Fluttershy BRILLIANTLY! And she is so frickin' adorable! I want one!! Mushy, shipping goodness is... well, good!
I think it's best to keep chapters like this one short. It's really easy to over-do sections where there's the potential for lots of descriptive writing; it's really easy to get carried away with that sort of thing.
im just gonna say bro THIS ONE DOESNT COUNT!! and I agree with twilight it was made mostly as filler SO you still need to make 3 more chapters by thursday
I liked the akward spoon feeding
363765 lol
it was fun writing it
i giggled a bit
Great chapter!
i didn't really mind the wait, what with the sun and all.
but i did notice something going on between dano and fluttershy, i suspect that the romance tag will come into play soon
and don't stop with the little bit at the bottom, i find it rather funny
Even though this was a short chapter, it was still really good.
363869 thank you
363948 thank you for not biting my head off
lolz, yes the romantic tag is there for a reason
and im happy you find my lack luster comedy funny
363959 thank you friend
363968 Your next chapter better be longer though... or else!
363995 lolz
you bet
and it is guaranteed to have action
363996 Oh noooooo!
*insert sarcastic voice*
I can't stand to bear it if someone dies in the next chapter!!!
Oh lawdy, dis gun b good!
Good chapter, and its alright. Weather does that to some people. Personally, I'm a cave troll
I liked this chapter, it is sweet
I've said it before and I'll say it again; you do Fluttershy BRILLIANTLY! And she is so frickin' adorable! I want one!! Mushy, shipping goodness is... well, good!
They were spooning
I think it's best to keep chapters like this one short. It's really easy to over-do sections where there's the potential for lots of descriptive writing; it's really easy to get carried away with that sort of thing.
im just gonna say bro
THIS ONE DOESNT COUNT!!
and I agree with twilight
it was made mostly as filler
SO you still need to make 3 more chapters by thursday
364015 heads will roll friend
364226 i used to be, but then some of my friends actually asked if i wanted to hang
so i said yes
and it was awesome
364323 thanks, and nice profile pic
364427 looks like i have the mind of Fluttershy
I AM FLUTTERSHY, AND I AM ACTUALLY WRITING THIS IN EQUESTRIA!!
be jelly
364481 lolz
hawt
364568 thanks for the advice friend
and i agree
so much potential to over do it
364785 this does count for one reason
it develops the relationship between Fluttershy and Dano
so it moves the plot
making it a true chapter
364846alright whatever
make 2 more chapters by thursday
or else...
364850 ik this man
you wont win this one
364851I'm gonna wear aviator sunglasses
so you cant see my eyes
364868 lol
do it up friend
You were brought outside by the weather? Truly, you are a better man than I.
Nice chapter, by the way. I can sense Dano is gonna make a move on Fluttershy soon.
368756 not to toot my own horn, but yes i am a better man that you
and with the Dano making a move...
you will have to wait and see
words. none. just for this moment. Love? its really.... nice.
369070
IF you are truly the better man, then how did I almost win?
373112 hmmm
every dog has his day?
372419 thank. you. for the comment. it. is. really..... appreciated
374694 i just checked that
it says sweat
-_-
Thanks, but I copy and pasted that. Can't lie to me bra.
374722 ....
alright
il go edit it then?
edit: i thought you were talking about the latest chapter, not chapter two
my bad for doubting brah
374730
Sure thing, just make sure to check the little "Chapter ??" thing next time,
374745 lolz
yes friend
i have learned my lesson
373675
Not quite. The only reason I didn't win was because that guy stepped in the line of fire.
374950 damn
well ig you were close
375062
Close but not close enough.
375108 lolz
thats what she said
375111
Damnit, Invictus!
375133 i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/160/616/TROLOLOL.jpg
375150
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375162 except read a good story
375171
That's too obvious.
375328 ik it is
and guess what
i got discord on the mind
i bet you can guess why
375331
Discord, eh? So we should be expecting a big ol' storm of chaos?
when are ya finally gunna ship th' two together instead of making chapters with not-so-subtle innuedos?
376543 massive
as in hurricane Fluttershy big
376810 when i get to it
lolz
there is much more story to tell friend