I REPRESENT THE POWER OF MY FACE! WHICH YOU SHALL NEVER SEE! OR FEEL! OR EVEN IMAGINE!.... okay perhaps you can imagine it BUT IT WILL NEVER BE LIKE WHT YOU THINK IT IS!
either way I STILL LOVE YOUR STORY JOSEPH! I just remembered, my cousin's name is joseph too! to bad he's like 6 years old, I would like to turn him into bronydom
AND I feel sad now I hate you now you ass nah just kidding I got richie to read the longest book I found that wasnt boring and he is actually reading it!
569918 Fuck the Mane Six, cause if they're the friends you have, they ain't NO one's friend. They should appreciate how you helped them by protecting them, so fuck them AND the Po-leece!
570366 Hmmm... I'd say more so, because he gets to make pop-culture references like nobody's business. Discord... well, he's plain crazy. Plain crazy is boring crazy.
I almost want to say how I'm hating the Mane Six for hating Dano (for killing Fluttershy's dad) but then again, that's not really fair. They don't see it the way Dano does- they can't, having not been there. They couldn't possibly know that he was beyond the point of no return, using all of his willpower just to talk to Dano without trying to kill him... And that's the worst part of it. All of his friends have turned against him for something they don't even fully understand, and now he's even in conflict with himself what with Discord still mucking about inside his head.... And for nobody to express thanks to him for getting the other guys back alive, even though he failed to do so with Carrot Cake? For nobody to have thought that it's because of Dano the others returned alive at all, because they're so caught up on him killing Fluttershy's father? It's got to be absolutely terrible to be Dano at this moment, having his conscience eat at him from the inside out.
I suppose I should also add that I get a massive smile on my face whenever I see an update for Whole New World. You certainly know how to write a captivating story.
I feel sorry for what Dano's going through, but at least he has a sober Berry Punch. Unlike in my story... It was a good chapter though. And like always, I'm looking forward for more! -Richard
570459 .... *snaps finger* okay i enjoy it very much so
570832 exactly I based Dano's conflict on the same conflict that actual soldiers have in real life especially vietnam vets my grandpa served in the 60s and he was treated like shit because of it that mixed with what he saw led him to take his own life as well as the many drugs he was on (illegal drugs) and his life at home
I POSSESS THE GLORY OF THE FIRST POST! .... I shall edit once I've finished reading. :P
o.o Reading COmplete. ... .A wonderful chapter. But now I feel -really- bad for Dano. :C
569908 the first post on chapter 22
silly filly
560957 im so chill
i freeze water when i touch it
I REPRESENT THE POWER OF MY FACE!
WHICH YOU SHALL NEVER SEE!
OR FEEL!
OR EVEN IMAGINE!....
okay perhaps you can imagine it
BUT IT WILL NEVER BE LIKE WHT YOU THINK IT IS!
569974 no offense
but what does this have to do with the story?
either way
I STILL LOVE YOUR STORY JOSEPH!
I just remembered, my cousin's name is joseph too!
to bad he's like 6 years old, I would like to turn him into bronydom
569981 lol
then i would have to kill him
because THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE!!!
AND I feel sad now
I hate you now
you ass
nah just kidding
I got richie to read the longest book I found that wasnt boring
and he is actually reading it!
569992BUT HE'S IN MEXICO TOO!
SO YOU LOOOOooo-no, no no no... he actually live over in LaPorte, indiana....
...fuck
569999 nice
570014 lol
i was kidding with the hole highlander reference
or was it?
570039now you have to read it too
here's the pdf
http://www.classicly.com/download-the-dream-quest-of-unknown-kadath-pdf
awwww, no 21 gun salute?
Maor. Love all this depression stuff. makes me so happy :D
569918 Fuck the Mane Six, cause if they're the friends you have, they ain't NO one's friend. They should appreciate how you helped them by protecting them, so fuck them AND the Po-leece!
Aaah, nothing like an intense amount of depressing stuff to inspire me to write.
The end? SO SOON?? NOOOOOOOO
i hate you for killing fluttershys dad and you should go to hell for just making her upset you bastardi!
Will there be a sequel?
Ha! Discord, you crazy fuck, you!
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570069 nope
just a simple, hand salute
570093 it will get better
quickly
so enjoy it while it lasts
570138 i agree with the fucking of the police
but the mane 6 are totally vindicated with their dislike of Dano
570146 don't worry
we will be having a sequel
570223 ah
you know how good it feels to be raged at?
like hitting up some heroin
570234 yes
and i will put a link in the last chapter
570223 Umad bro?
Anyways, nice chapter Gaius! Now hurry up with the next chapter!
570346
570339 oh yes
he is so much fun to write
i bet Disarray is as much fun
570356 don't worry
it will be here soon
570358
Good story but you must burn in hell for making her cry and if you did that to Luna I would murder you myself!570346
570402 lol
just wait and see what happens to human Luna in the sequel
things are about to get real dark around here
570366
Hmmm... I'd say more so, because he gets to make pop-culture references like nobody's business. Discord... well, he's plain crazy. Plain crazy is boring crazy.
I almost want to say how I'm hating the Mane Six for hating Dano (for killing Fluttershy's dad) but then again, that's not really fair. They don't see it the way Dano does- they can't, having not been there. They couldn't possibly know that he was beyond the point of no return, using all of his willpower just to talk to Dano without trying to kill him... And that's the worst part of it. All of his friends have turned against him for something they don't even fully understand, and now he's even in conflict with himself what with Discord still mucking about inside his head.... And for nobody to express thanks to him for getting the other guys back alive, even though he failed to do so with Carrot Cake? For nobody to have thought that it's because of Dano the others returned alive at all, because they're so caught up on him killing Fluttershy's father? It's got to be absolutely terrible to be Dano at this moment, having his conscience eat at him from the inside out.
I suppose I should also add that I get a massive smile on my face whenever I see an update for Whole New World. You certainly know how to write a captivating story.
@gaius...
this made no sence...
did i miss somthing in the last chaptre?
or am i stupid?
luv u bro....
theres plenty to go around
I feel sorry for what Dano's going through, but at least he has a sober Berry Punch.
Unlike in my story...
It was a good chapter though.
And like always, I'm looking forward for more!
-Richard
Sequel. NOW.
Love this story, and am actually kinda sad to see it go. Keep writing, Gaius! You have, ze spark!
570459 ....
*snaps finger* okay
i enjoy it
very much so
570832 exactly
I based Dano's conflict on the same conflict that actual soldiers have in real life
especially vietnam vets
my grandpa served in the 60s and he was treated like shit because of it
that mixed with what he saw led him to take his own life
as well as the many drugs he was on (illegal drugs) and his life at home
571056 what made no sense?
im confuzzled
571062 you will see why she is sober
it is a sad tale
571462 cool your pants sparky
im working on it
572188 you know it
i haz ze magicz
thank you all for the comments
they were so awesome
572247
i re read the last chaptre... i think i missed a huge ass portion of the plot development by falling asleeep reading it...
>Times Gaius has told me to calm down: 5<
>OBJECTIVE COMPLETED!<
Anywho, good. I hate stories with sad endings that include Fluttershy.
572331 ...
im still confuzzled
572716 the ending wont be sad friend
atleast this time
im a sucker for happy endings
i skipped the last chapter... i didnt understand this one...
573094 ah
but now you are all caught up right?
ALL DAT SELF-REFLECTION!
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...god damn it
577121 lol
ik that feel
577147 Keep it comin' though. i finally caught up.
577628 lol
its on its way