• Published 17th Feb 2012
  • 4,098 Views, 1,054 Comments

Whole New World - Spec Ops Pupper



Daniel is a normal college kind, but after a terrible coma he awakes to a strange future.

Comments ( 53 )

I loved this Fic man, and I hope your Dad gets better. You sir are one of my favourite Authers, and I'm glad to see you still gunna write. :yay:

593787 thank you
and i don't plan on stopping any time soon

sleep? bah, who needs that when you have ponies :rainbowwild:

on a side note, awesome story and i bet I'm gonna have a good time reading the sequel





feel honored as spike has deemed this story to be graced by the presence of his awesome stash :moustache:

I'd like to say I'm sad to see this go, and don't get me wrong, I was utterly sad to see the "complete" tag on this story. I want to say I'm happy after reading chapter one of "Same Old Fight" because it's the sequel to this, and more of your work, but it would feel... almost dirty, being happy about it. It's more of a bittersweet contentment. No spoilers, but that whole ordeal left a very unpleasant taste in my... eyes? I can only hope that something good comes of all of that. Somehow.

593859 i am honored
thank you spike

593997 very good things friend
you could call them great!

"This fic is dedicated to my dad."

Does your father know what occured in the previous chapter?...

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I'm glad I followed this story to the end, but in glad that there is a sequel.
I'll be sure to read that also.
and I'm also sorry to hear about your dad, I hope he can recover soon.
-Richard

*EPIC GENTLMAN OPERA CLAP*

595220 thanks
looking forward to you reading it

595368 *bows*
oh thank you
*bows again*
you're to much
*bows again*

Nice chapter bro

And for your dad il recupero può essere rapido e facile:twilightsmile:

604520>>604787 someone isn't a fan
:trollestia:

735759 :ajbemused:
he may have some help
but you figure that out later

756859 you sir confuse me
your comments tend to be more on the negative side, yet you continue to read?

806341 good to know
but i think the MREs in my fic are a good represeantation no?
i just dont really want to get like super in depth about the food

822077 i used K9 for dogs and wolves.

1261374 WHY CANT I HOLD ALL THESE FLUTTERSHYS!!??!!
:derpytongue2:

1415898 lol
sorry friend
i dont listen to Pebdulum much
and i never reference anything in my chapter titles
only the chapters themselves
a "wet your apatite" thing
i hope this doesnt make me less awesome

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Ah, still, nice writing. Liking the story so far.

1424546 thank you
and thanks for reading

1705886 even in the post apocalyptic wasteland there is plenty of food for those who look hard enough

1705977 nnope. not the fallout universe

1706027 sleep is for the weak!

1706071 most of the survivors are. you dont get to meet many others

1706147 lol. Fallout is da best, too bad the Legion sucks

1706187 he is.
to the fic Ballad of Echo the Diamond Dog.
i can link you if you want

1706250 im a mr.
and the sex will come
also, why should Echo have a heart attack?

1706368 Echo is resourceful, but Dano will get friends

wow. 8 comments on one fic. Reminds me of the glory days when this was incomplete

1753137 he hasnt been working on his smithing level

1754649 you better :ajbemused:
lol
jk.
thanks for reading friend :pinkiehappy:

1974673 lol
oh yes friend
but a character from a movie also has the same hair.

2066756 EVERYONE LOVES LOGIC!!

2157377 i would never ignore someones opinion, and i thank you very much for the comment.
This was my first story, and i will admit it is a bit rough.
My writing does improve as i go along, if you would care to read it.
Read or not, i will take your advice and use it as i continue writing

2391923 Drugs makes everything better friend.

2392033 References makes everything better friend

2418821 I love G1 as well, one of the reasons i put it in there. May fav part in the move was the battle for autobot city, and when i watch it now i laugh hysterically cuz im like "Look at them kill off all the old guys!" Which makes me laugh harder because in the entirety of the TV show they couldn't hit the broad side of a barn, and now everyone is dieing.

2504687 thanks.
I will remember that.

2504747 damn you lazy

2846340 i dont listen to much Pendulum to be honest.

3053153>>3053238 i used fallout as a pop culture reference for giggles.

3053353 its magic, i aint got to explain crap. :ajsmug:

3053704 i actually measured my truck bed for that, and they fit. of course, my truck had a full bed.

3053844>>3054350 yeah, i have only finished the original as well. that was a while ago though.

3687805 Same difference friend.

Lovely fic! I enjoyed Daniel's character he seems just like an ordinary guy and it fit well, he wasn't too outrageous nor too subdued he was just right. The concept was rather good and you portrayed Ponyville and all it's people surprisingly well! Overall It's an 8.7 in my book great job!:pinkiehappy:

3690680 Thank you very much friend.
I'm happy you enjoyed the fic

Started off a little rough, but I got into the setting and started to dig it. I really hate villains that never get defeated though, makes the heros efforts feel useless.

3858538 You bet it started out rough. This was like my first fiction I really sat down and wrote to completion. Pretty much my first public writing really.
I actually like the villians who are very difficult to beat or pretty much unbeatable. While it does bring the feeling of futility it also brings with it a feeling of stubborn resilience in the face of inevitable defeat. Holding the line against all odds kinda feeling.

3908863 Thank you very much friend.

4153339 Can you give me a reference, because i don't really understand what you mean.

4154723 I will never tell!

4155116 Or all the dudes got killed or something.

4155263 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/10394/the-ballad-of-echo-the-diamond-dog

4168767 I try to insert at least one reference in every story. It makes things fun.

4479724 I have a very special love for anything that is used as a designated marksman rifle. Relatively close range sniping is always fun and dramatic. Anywho, have fun reading friend.

4677033 Thank you for the slightly aggressive comment. I really dont have anything to say in response other than this story was written and completed years ago. It was also my first. Mistakes, and I mean a lot of them, are supposed to happen so i can learn. Thank you for your comment.

4680641
Oh no no no, I'm so sorry if it came off aggressive, I really am, I meant it to be just observation on the story. Dude I love your story, I think it's epic and I'm going to read the whole thing which isn't something I do normally. Your story might have a few parts that don't make much sense but I can overlook that while reading because it's entertaining which is hard to be said about other stories with this sort of set up.

4697165 No need to back track friend, or flatter me. Its up to you if you read the story or not. Also, thank you for the compliments. I hope you enjoy.

5187195 Gunporn is one of my fetishes. :ajsmug:

5491685 XD wow it's been a while since I posted that. I've actually played fallout 3 and fallout new Vegas multiple times since I've posted that

5492798 A) A bit silly i admit. B) While thew correct term is magazines i believe they are pretty much interchangeable.

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I appreciate the comments immensely friend, and will take your word into account.

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