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Caddy Finz


We're screwed and life will never get better...but in the meantime, get your free pony garbage over here!

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This story is a sequel to Mobster Meets Equestria


Three years...I have been living in the beautiful land that is Equestria for three years now. I was made an official citizen and even turned into an equine to better enjoy my time here. When I first got here, I was scared, confused, and worst of all, I was friendless. That all changed when a town full of ponies looked past the less than ethical things I have done and taught me what friendship is all about.

Does that sound familiar? Well let me jog your memory if you can't quite put the pieces together. This is Vincenzo Scungilli and once again, I'm needed to right some wrongs and fix what is broken. A crazy turn of events lands me and some good friends of mine in a place that I once called home. It has changed a lot since I left and not in a good way. Equestria is full of friendship, love, peace and kindness whereas New York has animosity, hatred, violence and corruption. I am now and will forever be an Equestrian but I can't return while the city I once loved is being rotted to its core.

This can go one of two ways. It will either be a nice pleasant walk down memory lane or a huge mess in desperate need of a good cleaning. Whatever the case may be, I'll be needing all the help I can get. This is a concrete jungle that's nearly lost all hope and I won't be going home until that hope is brought back! Shouldn't be too much of a chore, right? I mean I've only got Animal Control, a long lost kin and the entire NYPD standing in my way. Wish me luck. I'll need it!

This story is a sequel to "Mobster Meets Equestria". It is recommended that this story's predecessor be read first. Rated teen for language and violence. More tags may be added later as content changes. The cover was made by the lovely and talented little-tweenframes.

Chapters (21)
Comments ( 108 )
Comment posted by Caddy Finz deleted Jan 23rd, 2016

Dis gon be good *grabs popcorn* im waiting for more Caddy-San.

6868726 I'm glad you're enjoying it :twilightsmile: Have you read my original story? :rainbowhuh: It's easier to understand this one if you do :raritywink:

6868869 Yeah i finished this one and that one lastnight

6870459 Splendid! :raritystarry: Feel free to share any thoughts :pinkiecrazy: I'm always striving to improve :rainbowkiss:

It would be pretty cool if there was a human there who was like "Woah. How you get here?" "Oh you got teleported?" "Well since im not high ill take your word for it. You wanna get back home? Ok." "Ill help!" and then shenanigans

6874216 Oh, I think you'll like what I have coming up next then :trixieshiftright: :scootangel:

6874436 :D Will you accept any like... idk... OCs? not pony OCs of course but human ones. It would be funny as if you got a military General and was like "Gawd dammit... ponys? that talk?.... bring the tanks."

6875109 Interesting question for sure :rainbowderp: I dunno, I haven't really thought about accepting OCs before :trixieshiftright: But I'm open to trying something like that now that you mention it. In fact, a future chapter I have in mind could possibly do something quite similar to what you described. :pinkiecrazy: If you're okay with mild spoilers, perhaps we could discuss that through PM? :trixieshiftleft:

p.s.- Boom! Here's chapter 5 for you!

I love you and hate you... I love you for the fast chapters... I hate you for cliffhanger... but i have a pretty good idea whats going to happen.

That guy that hit him is going to help them get back to Equestria and POSSIBLY come back with them... also... just for me *looks around* add a REALLY juicy police chase... youknow... with spike-strips and helicopters flying low trying to make the driver loose control etc etc... maybe make me the pilot of the helicopter... such as "Call Sign Dark Star is in the air and following suspects now" etc etc... something like this

Skip to 1:22 for the helicopter part im talking about. PS Fave game of ALL time...

6876093 :rainbowlaugh: If it makes you feel any better, I'll be releasing the next chapter tomorrow. :yay: That will bring some closure to the cliffhanger and everything will start to make sense :twilightsmile:

6878281 The individual of whom is responsible for such a terrible atrocity would be yours truly :trollestia: C'mon guy, you gotta sit back, grab a beer and relax :moustache: This story is going to be chock full of cliffhangers at the end of every chapter :pinkiecrazy: They'll all be answered in the end. Trust me :scootangel:

*Le me is reading* *takes a drink* *Sees name* *spits out water*

good... good... its all coming together nicely. Shame that this story does not get alot of views.

Uhh, yeeaaahhh...If anybody could leave a comment and/or a like on this...that'd be great :applecry:

:rainbowlaugh: oh man that last bit was funny as hell, can't wait to see how he's gonna react when he finds out, that his father is standing in front of him. Love the story buddy, and keep up the good work :rainbowdetermined2:

6920495 A sincere thanks from the bottom of my heart :heart: I won't let you or anyone down :rainbowdetermined2:


6910718 I believe I also owe you a thanks for being such a loyal reader of my work :heart:

"IM DEAD!!! WOO!!!" "actually your alive..." "What?!" *bang* now your dead...

I doubt they will make it there without getting chased... got an odd feeling the "Dark Star" decided to up the anty. I dont think a van is gonna cut it. If hes gonna get there hes gonna need to fly.

6932822 No I didn't :twilightblush: I'm terrible at drawing so I pay someone else to make it :derpytongue2: The person I had make it is on deviantart by the name of litaly :raritywink:

this has been a good story so far, and it is much better then the last one. For what I can see, there is really nothing that Vinie could have done to be part of a family and leave the mob; the last story has show that very clearly seeing that his boss tried to kill twice for leaving the organization. Their would have been no way to be safe like that because of the circumstances before he was in Equestria, he can only try put some closure on what happen.

6951119 I couldn't have said it better myself :twilightsmile: If Jennifer had told Vinnie about their kid, they would have been in grave danger if he left the mob to be there for them :fluttercry: Now that he has met his son, he'll just have to help him recover from his addiction and make up for lost time :heart: Regarding the quality of my story, first of all, thank you very much for saying that :raritystarry: I have found that over time, with each new story I write I seem to improve :raritywink: Thanks for reading and I hope you keep enjoying it :pinkiehappy:

...Jenny is dead, isn't she ?

good chapter again, it is good that Vinny finally explain to Vicente that you can't just leave the Mod with out putting your self and loved ones at risk, even if you think you got Don's blessing there is no certainty that they will keep their word. By the way wasn't Vinny thrown into the fontine by his disgruntle colleague that learned that he was leaving,? I had aways tough that he did it with the don's blessing.

7003962 thanks for your feedback. In the end of the previous story, it turned out that the don told Vinnie he had his blessing but was lying the whole time. He then hired two of Vinnie's rivals to whack him.

7004083 oups, sorry, I meant that 'they' had the Don's blessing.

Well, I was already expecting Vinnie's girl to be dieing from some sort of ailment but didn't had expect her to be already dead for years. This was a good sad story, and I am happy that you manage to all the numbers of the unfolding of the drama.

7024483 Thanks for the compliment :twilightsmile: The only thing is that jenny has been gone for only seven months at this point in the story. She was diagnosed with the illness a couple years ago. :fluttercry: But yeah, Vincent and Vinnie have some work to do now that they've found each other

PS: I noticed you said this "was" a good sad story. I'd just like to clarify that it's still far from over at this point :raritywink:

I went to NY a few years ago.
Don't remember much hatred, or animosity...

7068483 I went there about a year ago and I had a great time as well. It's true, most of the people you'd meet there are very nice and that city is chock full of culture and diversity. This story isn't supposed to portray how I think any particular place is actually like. Basically all I wanted to do was add something to the plot of the story that will later be addressed and maybe even fixed around the end :raritywink: I hope that cleared up any misunderstanding :twilightsmile:

7072718 From the bottom of my heart, I'd just like to say that your input truly means a lot to me :heart: I really don't know why it gets so few hits :rainbowderp: Sometimes I feel like a lot of people on this site have extremely high standards regarding what they are willing to read or maybe will only seek out very well known authors :applecry: I simply can't put my finger on it but maybe someday it'll just hit me :unsuresweetie:

7075317 Say, that just might be crazy enough to work! :derpytongue2: Thanks :twilightsmile:

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You put your story in Displaced, Pending.

Is your story actually Displaced?

Or, less obtusely...

If I wanted to do a crossover with you, would you be willing?

7078823 If I'm honest, I more or less put it in displaced because the name alone seems to fit the situation the ponies are in :scootangel: I was kinda in a hurry and had somewhere to be when I was clicking around and I'm very well aware that this makes me sound like an ass :twilightblush: Anyways, regarding your crossover question :trixieshiftleft:...go on, I'm listening :trixieshiftright:

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Send me a message so we can talk in private. And yes, with my current browser, I can't initiate messages, but I can contribute once they're made.

Cadance has her attention fully focused on Vinnie. I feel kinda sorry for her. And him. I know just how stubborn he is...

>was a yellowish orange with a blonde mane and tail

Can't be Applejack, she's too young. Or at least she seems really young. Who else on the show has... Harshwin?

Harshwhinny. Most proffesional.

And gosh, they actually decided to mess with the portal pool? Without making sure nothing bad would happen beforehand? They should have fenced it off and put up a sign or something saying 'Do not swim in'.

That blows, Vinnie should have been able to enjoy his date in peace.

It's dah fuzz! Quick gang, we gotta scarper!

Interested to see how Vinnie interacts with them after his... I guess he's better now, doesn't go around killing people at the words of others... still, he has a morality scale that is clearly skewed.

Honestly not sure how tasers work. Aren't ranged and contact tasers mutually exclusive? I could have sworn cops carried the shootable kind...

Crap, now I'm remembering the cover pic. Rarity with a dart in her butt.

> It all just happened so fast and in ten seconds flat, the vehicle was covered in dents, busted glass and a couple of shredded tires for good measure.

Shredded? Uh, Rainbow... You shouldn't put your mouth on stuff like that...

Forgot this from last chapter.
"Oh please do, Rainbow."  Rarity pleaded as she rubber her temples. 

RUBBER. I KNEW SHE WAS A MARSHMALLOW!!!

Damn. After he made such a fuss about it with the girls. Would have expected him to take his own advice to heart.

How the heck is the car going to help them? It's been sitting for what, three years? The wheels are probably flat, if not completely busted. The gas in the tank would have undoubtable gone bad by this point, from what I remember it only lasts like... six or seven months.

I wanna see how they deal with that!~

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