chapter 11
When all was simple
Celestia was in her room, she just received a letter from her son who was sent with Gryffin to the Gryphon Empire last week. She looked at the scroll, it had some dry little spots of what she thought was water on it. like if her son had been crying when he was writing it, she quickly opened it and read it, her heart missed a beat, the hoofwritting was shaky and she could feel the sadness of her son through the words on the scroll.
Mommy,
Please I want to come home, the Gryphon’s here have took all my plushies and threatened to destroy them if I don’t follow their rules, I miss you please mommy. I’m so sorry that I picked the Emperor instead of you. I want to go come back home, I miss you, I miss Twilight, I miss my friends and Philomena, I promise I will never eat meat again If I come back, please mommy, I’m sorry! I don’t want to stay here anymore.
Celestia was in tears, she couldn’t do anything for her son, the only thing she was able to do is send him some letters. Suddenly the door of her room slammed open and a purple fog entered and soon followed by Nightmare Moon. Celestia was shocked, what was her sister doing here?
“HAHAHAHA! As I see, my sister your still so well. First you banish me, your own sister the only member of your family, then when you are given a life to take care of, you lost him in the claws of a Gryphon... and if I’m right, that Gryphon will probably return your son in a body bag”
“NEVER WILL YOU BE HAPPY CELESTIA, EVERYPONY AROUND YOU WILL DIE OR BETRAY YOU, YOU SHOULD HAVE LET ME KILL YOU 1000 YEARS AGO”
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Celestia flung up in her bed, sweat was flowing down her coat like a stream of water and her breathing was loud.
“A dream...That was all just a dream...” Celestia walked out of her chamber for a glass of water, she went into the kitchen and drank a pitcher of water. The moon was full this night, she looked through a window and she could clearly see the Nightmare Moon picture, showing that luna was still indeed imprisoned, usually the stars would shine more brightly and the moon was even more brighter when her sister would raise the moon, but when Celestia would raise it, the bright lights of the moon and the stars would be darkened. She never learned how to properly raise the moon and the stars, she only learned how to raise the celestial bodies, when luna raised the moon, it was like a beautiful painting, unlike when Celestia would raise the moon. Celestia remembered when Onyx had asked her who was the other pony In an album of celestia and luna’s
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*Flashback*
1 Year Ago
Celestia’s Room.
“And this one is when I had raised the sun for the first time.” Celestia said showing a picture of her to Onyx. “Oh! And this one, is one of my favorites, it’s when my mom let me wear her crown.” Onyx was looking at the picture, his mother was wearing the royal crown of the day and an Alicorn was looking at her happily.
“Mommy, who’s the other pony in the picture?” He asked curiously.
“Well the big one behind me is my mother, Galaxia. She was the one who ruled Equestria before me. She was a good mother and took care of me very well.” Onyx, still hugging his mother, pointed to the little filly in the picture
“And this one mommy, who she is?” Celestia looked at her sister before she slowly answered her son.
“This is my little sister Luna, she was upset this day because she always wanted to wear Mother’s Crown.” She told him with a sad smile. Then she covered Onyx with her wings to bring him closer to her, she then turned the page of the book. The next picture was of her and Luna, walking around old-time ponyville. Small tears started falling down from her face and dropped on the book.
“Mommy... why isn’t your sister and mother in the castle now?” Onyx asked innocently. Celestia took her time to find a correct answer that wouldn’t startle him, she never told Onyx that Luna was the one called Nightmare Moon. At least it will be easier to explain where her mother is, since she had already explained to him what death was.
“Well for my mother, she passed away a long time ago, and I’m sure she’d look over you and me. Now about luna... she got the need to go on vacation to clear her mind, but she will be back, when you’re older, I’m sure you and her will be great friends.” Onyx, still embraced by his mothers wings, looked at the album and asked her.
“But how can your mommy be in heaven.... You’re suppose to live forever because you are a Alicorn!” Celestia giggle.
“This Onyx is false, many ponies think we are immortal, but that is not true, in fact we can live a lot more longer than all the other ponies, we can live approximately 10,000 years.” Onyx waited a little before he returned with another question.
“So how old are you mommy?” Celestia laught before she hugs her son.
“I will only answer you if you promise me to never ask this question to a other mare ok?... I’m 2986 years old and my sister is 2786 years old. And for your cousin Cadance, she 15 years old.”
“Wow you are really old mommy.” Answered back Onyx. Celestia was speechless. being stold by your own son that your old is always a shock, even to Alicorns
“Mommy....can i ask you a last question?”
“Sure but after that its will be time to go sleep.”
“Will I live as long as you mommy?” Celestia this time didn’t find an answer, so she just held Onyx close to her and hummed a little song to help him to sleep.
Stars and moon and air ballons
Fluffy cloud to the horizon
I’il wrap you in rainbow
and rock you to sleep again.
Teddy bears of pink
Duck and limbs of white
Dont you cry my dear, I’m here now
I’il be your nightlight.
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Celestia finally finished her water glass, but before she coul go out a guard pony ran to her.
“Celestia we need your help, somepony found the dead body of our captain, alone in a alley with his throat cut.”
For the love of all that is harmony please dont have him go with the griffons!!!!!!!!!
To the Empire!
Tally-ho!
you should make him stay with celestia! otherwise, he'll turn into a battle-heartened badass with a mother complex!
actually, that doesnt sound so bad, to me!
GRYPHON KINDOM PLS!
hnnnng - Celly y u so sad!?
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Celestia has visions of the future.... The end is nigh......
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the future....maybe...
btw we can't see the pic you have take this time
Now I wish my mom was with me right now.denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw3115-5997bddace5f3af39e6ee75d1fc215aa.png
Grphonia obviously, you need a direction to take the story, and at the moment that's the most obvious one.
Pretty chill story, by the way.
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try it now
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2040523
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dude, look at that source code.... it goes on forever
as sad as it makes me to say it, he has to go with the gryffin. it explains how he becomes a warrior and add a nice second part to the story. while he's off at the gryphon place, celestia is teaching twilight all her magic and stuff. then, he comes back at some point. simple.
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i know right
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i hope he goes with celestia and not the gryphons, but the poor guy sounds like a impressionable kid ever to a bodyguard who treats him like he is not natural
Sad to say, but I have to agree with everyone else. Griffins it is. Funny how a few chapters ago everyone was saying stay stay stay.
While it's sad Onyx has to go.
That wasn't a dream.... It was a vision!
Off to the Gryphon Empire, and drive the Emperor crazy with Onyx's monkey business shenanigans!
Not necessarily. If the good author uses a tool he has been given just right he may in fact be able to keep Onyx with Celestia and still get the desired affects. The only hint I shall give friend author is... Dragons live long lives and they will always honor debts no matter if it is to you or your parents.
I don't want him to go…yet, yes he will become a warrior, but for cry out loud, he just start school and already make friends.
If you have being just starting school and pass the first day having so much fun, would you like to suddenly go transfer to another place? Of course not, is confusing annoying and Onyx was the one that was more than eager to go to school, there is to much to loss, and he is not idiot he will be thinking that as soon as he heard the proposition.
I said he should stay, learn about socially and be a good friends, maybe even tap a little with magic…THEN when he is in his 14 teens or so, go to the Griffin kingdom, already prepare and eager to learn how to become a true knight.
The story can progress much better in that way, in my opinion, beside with all consider is just to soon to him to go away, is just down right cruel.
By the way the Griffin told or will tell for how long will take Onyx?
P.S: This chapter take place the night Celestia make the deal with the king?
Hey one thing, there is not a story about a man that when he bath in dragon blood, gain super strength and a very long life? Zighfrit was his name I think. I can solve Onyx problem
Make a chapter with him to go and dont go
Dont see how it will work on chapters later on but its your call
Dont you think he 8s to yong to go wait till he is 15 give or take not when he is 7
>travel to Gryphin Empire
>train like hell for 5 years
>overthrow the Emperor (and probably cook him like they do at KFC)
>UNLIMITED POWER!
>Emperor Onyx
>get all mares.
Why not have it be that he stays with Celestia, but the Gryphon empire sends an emissary to train him in the arts of war in addition to his normal schooling?
I say he'll choose Celestia and after this, she decided to get the best of the best fighters to train him in self-defense.
Celestia, please!
Well, for the sake of happiness I'd vote for him to stay with Celestia, for the sake of drama I'd vote for him to go to the gryphon kingdom.
So yeah... I have no idea!
Also, don't take this the wrong way, but the grammar could use an improvement.
In my case, I had issues reading through some sentences just due to the way it was written, the grammar mistakes, and the sentence flow just wasn't correct (mentioning the same name multiple times in the same sentence, too many commas etc). It's pretty disruptive to the experience right now - if the grammar got better then the overall experience of the story would go up, since then I'd be able to focus purely on the story itself instead of having to decrypt a sentence every once in a while.
Once more, don't take this the wrong way - I like this story and just would like to see it get even better
there is realy enough drama in this style of Fic´s i go with Celestia because serisly in every other fic he would go to the griffins but be diffrent and let him stay. And look he is a child, he ould never abdom his mother, this dosen´t come by realistig or does it?
2041059 Standard HiE Shit
PS: my english
EDIT: and don´t say he don´t got told that he would not see his friends and mother for many jears.
Because serisly Celestia would told him that
I honestly think that you should have him stay with Celestia. Hadschott has some very good points on this matter.
CELESTIA!!!
Please!!!
Griffin is a huge dick in this fic.
Go with griffin.
Sending him with the griffins will be heart wrenching and I've been reading too many heart wrenching fics, so let him stay with Celestia. please
Please let him stay with Celestia
Celestia.
To send Onyx away from his mother at such a young age is a crime against the laws of Equestria and the Will of Epona. Don't send him away, there is no need to. He is just a child who finally made friends, a mother that loves him very much and will never forgive herself to send him away. If he has to be trained as a warrior then let the Royal Guard help or bring in a exiled Griffin warrior to train him.
My vote goes to him staying with Celestia.
the griffons will turn a frightened little child in to a sociopath with way to much power.
make him a warrior gryffin
I can only hope his friends will save him from such a painful life..
Celestia!!
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i got it
he will be swayed towards going towards the griffon empire, and he says that he would like to see it in the future but at the moment would like to stay with his mum. However this doesn't go down well with griffin, so he tries to kidnap Onyx, nearly wins but is then forced to retreat because does something. THIS is when Celestia hires trainers to train him in self defence and other ways/things.
he doesnt really enjoy it but eventually gets a liking towards a specific form of combat.
(i could have included more of my ideas on the subject but i wont bore you lot)
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all of you guy have plenty of good idea and you should all writte a story of your own. BUT i will never say with who Onyx will go (wel yea i will say it in the chapter but not in the comment )
..............return writte your chapter before i force you to do it
fine -_-
2042530 I am in the process of writing a HIE fimfic but it will take a while.
and when i read good stories i sometimes come up with good ideas for how itcan progress, and i become a bit envious of the author for having good ideas
celestia make onyx stay with celstia and make gryphon bite it since he cant haz no onyxz
He's gonna go with gryffin to become a swordsman, and this chapter is to short!
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but i add a picture on it and everypony know that
1 picture = 1000 word
so this is a chapter of 3k words