Chapter 23
Onyx Versus Luna
“SISTER, WE HAVE A MONSTER IN OUR BED!!!” Celestia spat out her green tea; she totally forgot to tell her beloved sister that Onyx wasn’t a pony and had been given Luna’s former room. Celestia sprinted to her son, until she realized that she could teleport there. She closed her eyes and charged her magic; when she opened them she was in her son’s bedroom. Her sister, Luna, was shooting magic beams at Onyx, which he was blocking them with a broom. Onyx’s marefriend, Trixie, was stuck to the wall, probably by Luna’s magic.
“Lulu, stop!” Celestia yelled at the moon goddess, using her magic she freed Trixie from her magical bonds. Luna and Onyx both momentarily stopped fighting at Celestia’s command. As soon as Luna saw Onyx drop his guard, she shot him directly with a paralyzation spell. Onyx’s body froze and fell to the floor.
“Quick, sister, thou has to help us rid of this mon-”
“Lulu!” Onyx’s body began to glow with a golden aura as Celestia levitated him onto the bed. Luna watched what her sister did and saw the soft look of worry in the Sun Goddess’s eyes. Then realization struck her like a lightning bolt. That thing was Celestia’s son.
“Celly...did...did. I-is that your... son?” Celestia nodded to her sister, she was checking to see if Onyx had any wounds; to the mother’s great relief, there weren’t any. Celestia walked out of the bedroom with Luna following suit.
“Sister, thou must explain to us who and what he is.” Luna said, still using the traditional Canterlot vernacular. Celestia nodded, she looked through a window overlooking the royal gardens. She remembered the day when she found Onyx, his strange appearance and how happy he looked to have somepony to take care of him.
Celestia told her sister how she found her son, how much she worried about the population’s reaction, how happy she was raising and taking care of him, how... how distraught she was for ten years after the Gryphon Emperor took her Onyx away from her and the joy she felt when Raynor brought him back, how she felt after Onyx and her student shared her bed. Luna listened through the whole story without interupting. When she finally finished, Luna remained speechless; she didn’t know if she should tell her sister that she was crazy or to just accept her choice. When Celestia saw that Luna wasn’t responding, she decided to show her how Onyx was good.
“Listen Lulu, maybe you think I’m crazy to adopt a completly unknown species into our family, but let me present him to you. Tonight, we’ll organize a small reunion with only you, Onyx, and myself. This way, you’ll be able to see who he really is and maybe accept him.”
“If you wish, sister of ours, but we have one condition: if Onyx wants to be accepted by us, he will need to give us back our room.” Celestia giggled at her sister’s demands.
“I will talk to him about that later. Now come, we need to talk about what we’ll do to celebrate your return. And you really need to work on your speech.”
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Onyx woke up in is bed, his body hurt but nothing that he couldn’t deal with.
‘Was all that just a dream?’
But when he saw the mess in his room, he knew that what he saw had actually happened. Onyx rose from his bed and began cleaning his room, humming a song from his early childhood. After he worked his way over to his desk, he realized that most his drawings fell off the wall; as he was picking them up, he found a scroll on the floor. It was locked and had his name was written on it. He took a seat and opened the scroll, immediatly recognizing Twilight’s writing.
Dear Onyx,
I’m writting this to tell you that I am no longer living in Canterlot. Princess Celestia moved me to the Ponyville library to oversee the Summer Sun Celebration. In a way, it’s like a dream come true; I have my own library! But it saddens me to know that we won’t see each other as often. I hope you’ll come see me if you’re able to in your free time. I want you to know that I won’t be alone here, I’ve made some new friends, I’m sure you’d like them. Oh! That reminds me, my new friends and I are bearers of the Elements of Harmony; I’m the Element of Magic. I’m staying with the other Element bearers in Ponyville to study the magic of friendship. I’ll be sending a letter each week to let Celestia know how things are going here... I might write a few to you too... Don’t worry, you’ll always be my best friend even though I have other friends here. Take care of yourself... you’ll always be in my heart. I... I really like you...
Your best friend,
Twillight Sparkle.
P.S.
I met one of your childhood friends, I forget his name but he works at Sugarcube Corner, the Ponyville bakery.
Onyx dropped the letter on the floor, tears rolling down his face; he felt like somebody was squeezing his heart.
“Twillight... she’s... gone.” Saying this last word out loud was like being cut with a knife. Trixie entered the room from the bathroom, wearing her show outfit. Onyx didn’t pay her much attention.
“The Great and Powerful Trixie says ‘hi’ and the only thing you do is cry... could she know why?” Onyx, trying to hold his tears show her the letter on the desk. She read it and easily found what Twillight was saying to Onyx in the letter.
“How... that slut! How dare she to try to take y-” She could not finish the sentence; Onyx pushed her against the wall with one forearm pressed against her throat. The look in his eyes was that of a hunter’s and for the first time, she was truely afraid.
“Say one more word against her and I swear on my mother that I will show you what the emperor taught me. Understand!”
Trixie gulped and nodded slowly, Onyx let her go and returned to sit on the bed; he was too confused to pay the showmare more attention. Trixie rose from the floor.
“If you think Trixie will stay with you after what you’ve done... I’m leaving you Onyx!” With that she left the room with only one thought on her mind: make Twillight pay.
Atta be Onyx, with Trixie out of the way you can now bed Luna! And then go date Twilight! *creates finger bridge* Yes this is going perfectly...
Well, shit done got real, mate.
That went well.
Well, I hoped the air is clear between Onyx and Luna, and it appear Twilight did had a special place in his heart, well it was good the mystery while it last. Je Trixie, broke up with him, because of their fight? Ok Onyx reaction was a little extreme but still… Oh well, is Trixie we are talking about.
Hey you never answer my question, did Trixie recognized Onyx from school?
Now we're really getting somewhere.
Read this chapter-
So that's the reason Trixie became GREAT AND POWERFULL TRIXIE we known from season1...
Anyway...
I REGRET NOTHING! soory for the worst grammer
Isn’t the palace built after the nightmare incident wouldn’t that mean she never add a room in it(not so sure if it canon)
well that explains why trixie hates twilight so much.
Well... it shows that Trixie is not good girlfriend material, and Twilight still likes him.
wow i have to say i feel sorry for onyx i mean loosing somebody you care about and hearing they have feeling for you so dear is pretty rough in my book. i hope he feels better soon
There is still hope for Twilight X Onyx relationship!!! YES!
Oh, I cannot wait to see how his visit to Ponyville turns out.
Why is everyone trying to get onyx laid with Luna? That's a bit (or a lot) fucked up.
Good chapter. But I Hoped, it were a little bit Longer.
The eye of the predetore
2223696 agreed, agreed 1000x agreed. They are aunt and nephew after all.
Yay, you got featured :D
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NAILED IT
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"Hey mom! I just slept with your sister! No hard feelings right!?" Said onyx
"Hey onyx! You just got beheaded! No hard feelings right!?" Said trol-Celestia
this is going great! now onyx can try with twilight again, or (in the future) crysalis the plot thickens
2223696 I believe the colloquial term is 'Princest is wincest'
Personally, I wanted them to be in a relationship just for Celestia's reaction.
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Not gonna lie, if it does happen, I wanna see the reaction also. Just without the whole beheading thing.
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You just read my mind
2223508. Dude banging Luna means that onyx is having sexy times with his aunt... As in the sister of your mom. That's like a "your mom" joke gone horribly wrong
Bad Trixie bad.
Ouch! That was harsh for Onyx to do, even to someone like Trixie, despite what she wanted to say. I wouldn't want to be in her place once the prince knows, just what is going on in her head.
Wonder how Onyx will get with his new aunt!
2223949 Oh I know the implications but the sheer hilarious situations that can arise from that would be epic
Also remember that Celestia didn't give birth to Onyx so...nah it is still wrong but the breakfast afterwards would be hilarious to see
Mood swings much? And yay, Trixie is gone now!
ah, so THAT'sS why trixie doesn't like twilight. and YAY for no more trixie. i kinda feel bad for her though.... no one deserves to be dropped like that when they thought what they had going was stable.
Mood swings..................... Also I feel bad for twixie........... Dammit I'ma go grab a coffee don't ask
i feel like he is getting a op character he needs more bad things that are not things people feel sorry for. at least if your planing on making him skilled at anything
2223696 Agreed. This is my reaction every time I see someone suggest that.
annother funny instalment but really LATE
So, she's still headed to Ponyville... and Snips and Snails, once again, are gonna bring an Ursa Minor to town, right? Or will it be worse... will they actually manage to get an Ursa Major?
Well thank Cheezus for the NON-incestuous relationship. I mean come on... OnyxXLuna?
I see a good romance here that doesn't involve Luna, but I won't say anything.
Aaaaaaand... just yo point out the obvious... the supposed broom he used to block the MAGIC attacks...
....buck it... either he: 1. looted it from a dungeon full of witches, and is enchanted to resist magic;
OR
2. has magic capabilities which are either dormant or innate...
Besides that, a good chapter. Keep em coming.
2224683.. Or it could have just been a broom and they were all concussive attacks.
2224683 hmm...
Well I wouldn't really know, so I'll go with what you said... for NOW
Aaaaanyway, keep em coming.
*sees title of new chapter*
*goes to make popcorn* dis gon b gud
All of you are saying the shit has gone down, I disagree. I'm just waiting for the real shit to go down at the Gala or when Discord pops up.
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well duh! Onyx is a unique creature so yea she remember him....hey now that Twillight know Rarity...maybe her and Onyx will meet each other
Yep, totally knew it would go this way.
It actually helps make it connect to the TV show even better.
And so, he is now a bachelor again and is free to be with Twilight.
Furthermore, despite being a prince I think he needs to go out and get a job.
Maybe he can become an important figure in Ponyville?
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op....wtf what Onyx have do for become OP
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is because he was using a swiffer
2223949 mylittlefacewhen.com/f/3168/
i like this :D the ending made it more awesome!
also anger leads to pain and regret...or death when your blind by it yooooooooooooooo
Works in the bakery?
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Go read the story apple of my eyes if you want to know who is it
*Twilight