YOINK! Stealing the first comment

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You swine!

Looks promising. I will keep an eye on the updates :)

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Ayy thanks. I'll be posting a chapter a week until I run out of already written stuff

Ah.~ A fellow Fallout: Equestria fanfiction author!~

New "Perk" – Sadistic:

This was when I knew; This is going to be glorious.

wow............ you got rid of him, quite fast........................

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Yeah, he was never meant to be a fleshed-out character. I almost wish I had a reason to flesh him out more, but at the same time, Iron wouldn't care, so why would the reader?

OK that was grim but well deserved.

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I take it you don't like it. Thank you for your input.

Needs some polish but the concept is dark but interesting... I think you just need to expand a few sections and add some more dialogue to things like the confrontation to give it some more depth.

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Thanks for the input! I agree, that's definitely one of the flaws of my early writing. Definitely something I'd try to improve on if I rewrote this.

I also felt a weird tingling near my hind quarters. Curious, I turned my head, and immediately noticed it. An image of a long-barrelled gun adorned my flanks, surrounded by red stars and held afloat by black wings.

I had my cutie mark! Best day ever!

Thanks, daddy!!!! <3

Concerto’s eyes went wide in terror and understanding as he started running at me. He clearly hadn’t been expecting me to comprehend what a safety switch was, at least not this quickly. I aimed at his head again, delighting in the horror on his face. Was this what he felt every time he hit me? If so, then I could forgive him; this was godly .

Uff!!! <3!!!

That filly ain't right, I tell you hwhat.
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Schizofilly is best filly.

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imao

Fillies like her, I remembered hearing Mother say, were what happened when you didn’t get as lucky as me. Her family couldn’t afford education past the most basic knowledge, and so she had to pick up a job around the stable at a young age. In her case, it was cleaning ponies’ quarters.

Ahh, so this is “what if Littlepip was Diamond Tiara?” Interesting concept, let’s see where this goes…

Just like that, my biggest tormentor was dead. I was almost filled with regret as I realised that the moment was over. Such ephemeral joy… I should have made it last…

….Okaaaay then. Maybe less Diamond Tiara and more Cozy Glow. I’ll admit, I’m not sure if I can go all the way with this one. But I’m intrigued enough to give it a chance.

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Cozy and DT were both pretty big inspirations for her. DT more so than Cozy

just started this story and I have to say, it seems very promising

I observed in fascination as red fluid with chunks of his brain burst out behind him, splattering on the cave’s ceiling, painting a gorgeous pattern resembling a constellation of red, six-pointed stars. I marvelled at the beauty of the picture before me, observing as the liquid dripped down from the ceiling.

I also felt a weird tingling near my hind quarters. Curious, I turned my head, and immediately noticed it. An image of a long-barrelled gun adorned my flanks, surrounded by red stars and held afloat by black wings.

I've grown wary of stars in Fo:E and I'm going to take a wild guess and see if it comes true but the stars are going to have an influence on this foal sooner or later probably not a good one

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Thanks!
I won't spoil anything, but I'm glad someone picked up on that