Back inside Stable 4, I was destined for greatness. Outside, I was nothing more than a filly. At the same time, I also seemed to fit in very well into the horribly violent Equestrian wasteland, more than you would expect from somepony my age.
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I soon as I have the time (probably tomorrow) I will re-read all of this.
Well, I didn't expect the memory twist. Interesting.
Candy! Nooo!
Wait... If Candy is dead, then who took their stuff?
And now, the wait begins again.
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Just some random pony, since it's been more than a week since the stuff was dropped there.
And btw, chapter 10 is finished and just needs to go through both rounds of edits. I won't promise a time period, but it shouldn't be so long of a wait.
Damn it, I really wasn't prepared for Candy to be completely dead. I had hoped that she had survived and that they would eventually re-unite...
Damn it, they didn't even get to say goodbye.
Well, at least this allows for some iǹ͡t͞er̴͏é͝s҉̛ti͡n͟g͜͡ character development.
Wait a minute...
Oh.
Oh no.
This isn't going to end well for Cascade, is it?
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The reason I killed her off like this was to make her death stand out. In reality, a person never dies predictably. It's almost always out of nowhere and you don't get to say goodbye. It's not even guaranteed that you were on good terms with the person when their life ends.
Well, technically the other possibility is that person gets ill and slowly dies, and you know it's coming, but you also know you can't do anything about it, and you just end up wishing their suffering would end soon.
I feel that a lot of stories kill off characters after they've fulfilled their narrative purpose, and that almost always makes them feel artificial. Which is why I thought that a real kick in the gut would be to execute it this way.
Damn, I shoulda put that in the author's notes.
Bloody mess...
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RUN CASCADE RUN!!!
So trauma-induced DID, huh? And it seems that neither Iron is quite "complete".
I really respect you for how you wrote Candy's death. Your right in that death is typically unexpected. I'm surprised in feeling a bit sad but her death. From all the stuff I read I usually don't get emotional by it. But I guess your writing did something right.
Irons just going to have to press on and keep going like we all have to.
It's a shame that she just died while traveling to a place she wouldn't have wanted to be. I don't see her working for slavers. She would have probably wanted to go back, idk. The alicorn(s) would have attacked them at some point anyway it seems.
I think the only thing I didn't like about her character was that she accepted the stable was closed pretty easily. It seemed like she should have at least tried. But I guess Iron did explain that she wouldn't go back and Candy wanted to protect her.
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>spoiler 1
Oh wow, that's a really big compliment, thank you! It really means a lot to read that
>spoiler 2
Yeah, that's a fair criticism, and I should have made more efforts to explain why she ultimately left the stable.
O Iron. That's what Candy would say. That's what your dear sister would say.
The price one pays for being a Grimdark lover... I'll miss you a lot, dear Candy.
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I feel that
Part of what spurred me to write this whole thing
One question, what happened to Luna?
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Writers like you are hard to find.
I share your thinking about death.
You remind me of "Prey And A Lamb".
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In the OG Fallout Equestria, it's revealed that she died as a result of the megaspells that hit Canterlot.
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Thanks. And that's been on my read-it-later list for ages. Guess I should read it sooner rather than later.
I do wonder if the alicorn(s) will return soon.
Aw yiss murderfilly is back
Fuck.
damn that's a sucker punch, this kind of death always get me, curse you and your good writing!
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Heh, thanks. I don't think I did it justice, but comments like these make me feel better about how I wrote it ^^
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Hehehe