Back inside Stable 4, I was destined for greatness. Outside, I was nothing more than a filly. At the same time, I also seemed to fit in very well into the horribly violent Equestrian wasteland, more than you would expect from somepony my age.
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10375823
Hehe, thanks. I hope it lives up to the expectations
10376012
She did, as one would. I just didn’t bother mentioning it because I didn’t think it was necessary; like you said, it makes too much sense, so I was fine just leaving it up to the reader. In hindsight, just a few words about it probably would have been better.
First:
My wish was granted before I even uttered it. Nice.
Second:
Oh.
10376086
Definitely. The lack of mention is the problem. Mention it, and there is no problem.
"If it isn't written, it didn't happen."
– Some Guy, Probably.
I just realised I was writing comments on chapter 8, apparently. I thought it auto-replied to the correct thread. Oops.
10376302
Yeah, I try to write by that philosophy as well (I’ve even said in a blog post that if it’s not in the story it’s not canon, even if it’s in a blogpost)
It’s just that I didn’t think it was important enough
10376294
Glad you like it
I think I found Iron sonata's (future) theme song.
10377569
Oh, very nice!
I seem to be experiencing an inner conflict of interest. I want another chapter to be released as soon as possible... But I also don't want it to be rushed, and therefore of lower quality.
Please release a new chapter soon. But please take your time with it.
10383314
Chapter 9 is currently sitting at around 8600 words, and it's about halfway finished. Since I already have a good plan for the rest of the arc, I might actually release it sooner than I'd expected. We'll see
Though I'm definitely working hard on it
10376086
Hi again.
I've decided to re-read this entire story when you release the next chapter, and that reminded me: Did you ever go back to add a few words about it?
10401163
Only two. One a few weeks after I started releasing the story, I decided to remove “Level up!” from the footnotes, for a variety of reasons (partly because it felt weird to give my “just a mentally ill filly” levels—which feel more like a “future wasteland hero” type of thing, but also because I sometimes felt like she wouldn’t have earned a level in some chapters, and it felt weird to not end the chapter on anything)
Another small thing I added was the precision that Iron told Candy about how she got hurt in chapter 5
10401459
Neat. I admit that I expected dialogue, but it's still better than nothing. I eagerly await the next chapter.
This update interval is foreboding. Always less than two weeks, until now, when it has been three.
What happened? Please, this is one of my favorite Fallout: Equestria stories ever. I want to see it finished.
10410851
Well, I've been writing since December, and when I started publishing in June I already had 6 chapters. I'll admit chapter 9 took me a good while to write, but now I'm in the process of editing it.
I'm also about 60% done with chapter 10's rough draft, and I think once it's finished I'll publish 9 (since the two chapters are strongly linked)
Sorry it's taking so long; speed has never been my forte, but I'm getting better (in terms of quality _and_ quantity)
10411025
That explains it. Keep up the good work, then.
Wow, that really escalated, I was not expecting that ending. I was starting to enjoy the adventure of the two mercs.I hope she isn't dead, but that didn't sound like something you could survive.
I am surprised there was no goodbye after they rescued banter, lockpick and grumpy mare I can't remember the name of. They probably would have heard her laughing at the gore and said something or at least looked at Iron differently. Seems like a bit of a missed opportunity.
11383244
Yeah, it's one of my biggest regrets about volume 1; I didn't build up or hint at its climax nearly enough.
As for your second paragraph… i never thought of that, but now that you point it out it's indeed a missed opportunity.
Ufff!!! I hadn't thought about that O.o
Ohhhhhh fuck. Big fish meets really really huge fish.
oh shit
oh shit
OH SHIT