Back inside Stable 4, I was destined for greatness. Outside, I was nothing more than a filly. At the same time, I also seemed to fit in very well into the horribly violent Equestrian wasteland, more than you would expect from somepony my age.
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Silly Iron, all the bleeding is internal and that's where the blood is supposed to be, I don't see anything wrong here.
That was an interesting encounter. The vine creature and that whole facility. Excellent job with this one.
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Nah, that would make it stand out more. This thing evolved to be sneaky
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Thanks! I was really unsure if it fit the fic when I was writing it, but it's easily the one chapter I've gotten the most compliments on, so I must have done something right. I should probably write more chapters like this in the future, heh.
"Will you love me if I help you hide?"
If you follow the Old World Blues data for the psychoanalytic cardiac-dampening sneaky stealth suit, the cardiac regulator might cause problems for someone ingesting Buck... and it might advise against smoking, because the Stealth Suit doesn't want you to die, it wants to be your best friend!
This highlights one of the automapping spell's weaknesses: Its display medium. I see the automapping as a form of either sonic or radio echolocation, or some magic equivalent of LIDAR. Even if it could map the interior of a building with great precision in 3D space, however, the PipBuck is unable to display that 3D data. I imagine Stable-Tec intended for the full scan data to be usable at some point, but never had the chance to develop something to take advantage of it. It would have been fantastically useful for creating topographic maps, just as an example.
Actually, that would be a good job for any pegasus. Fly along geographic formations just above the ground and export the automap data for compositing.
Rip and tear, until it is done.
Buh--
What--
u wot m8--
Did you just lampshade Healing Potion and subvert Hyperactive Metabolism in the same paragraph?
Your version of the sneaky suit is neat.
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KILL. IT. WITH. FIRE.
How much fire?
ALL THE FIRE.
Or lightning. That works, too.
Cherry needs proper armor and weapons.
I love fallout abominations and pre war drama so this chapter is right up my alley
is sonata gaining more control other their shared psyche, that can't be good
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>stealth suit
Nah, this suit doesn't have any horrid flaws such as, ugh, the ability to feel love. It probably should though, given that Gluon Village/Moonlight Research are based off of Higgs Village/Big MT. If only PH hadn't already done the talking stealth suit.
And thanks. I loved coming up with the thing.
>automapping
Yeah, it's similar to the main issue with EFS. Originally, I was gonna have Iron get a firmware update for her PipBuck late into the fic, one that would allow the EFS to display its data in 3D, but I never got around to that.
>doom soundtrack
Yeah, that's basically what was playing in my head when I wrote that scene.
>subverted and lampshaded tropes
Yeah, I guess I did I mostly wanted to "balance" healing potions. I hated the idea of healing potions just being magical "undo wound" buttons, but at the same time, I thought ponies would reasonably have more mild forms of healing magic.
>kill it with fire
Yeah, I agree. So does Iron.
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Glad you like it. It was probably one of the tougher chapters to plan out, but I'm really glad I did it. Looking back, it's one of my favourite chapters, and I know a lot of people like it.