Back inside Stable 4, I was destined for greatness. Outside, I was nothing more than a filly. At the same time, I also seemed to fit in very well into the horribly violent Equestrian wasteland, more than you would expect from somepony my age.
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Look at my boi, all grown up and already being an asshole.
Now this is the psychological... Thriller? Horror? Exploration? Whatever that I came here for.
Sorry, only a little. It was much more fascinating than disconcerting (the fact that it's fictional helps).
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Fair enough, still very glad you enjoyed it in the same way I did.
Well, things developed fast here...although how Iron's detached viewpoint skims over a lot of stuff helps. And yes, she's lucky Sonata never came out - and had better hope she doesn't soon, given how she didn't explain her to Star Seeds.
Plus, more (quite horrifying) info on what happened with Cascade... wonder if we'll see her again later.
Wow, a lot certainly happened in this chapter.
That warning about Crow is... Ominous.
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Wow! You're right! jaja
Epic chapter.
Watershed!!!
Well, that sure was a chapter. I thought I had gotten used to the manner in which you could drop crazy bombs out of nowhere, but this felt like getting hammered by Steelhooves’ grenade machine gun. Perhaps there is such a thing as too fast a pace? If there is then this chapter sure is testing that limit. I’m still finding this an entertaining read, but sometimes this feels like somepony’s fever dream.
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Yeah, in hindsight I was a bit impatient to get all of that out of the way. Nowadays I'd probably split this chapter into two parts and really let the dream and its reveals sink in, and have the next chapter focus on Star Seeds.
I usually only comment after having read the chapter but with the title, I have multiple suppositions on what this chapter will talk about, I'll see if I was right:
well my prediction was miles off but it's still a very good chapter I was wondering if there would be a ref to murky number seven but then I remembered the story takes place several years prior, too bad.
I still very much like seeing fillydelphia so I'm not complaining
even though my predictions were wrong, I'm still betting on something related to the stars with a name like star seeds and him being that interested in magic
the dream sequence also made me begin to wonder if sonata isn't an after effect of the stars and not exactly who she seems to be (not much proof as of now but I'll keep that thought)