The Sun Horse found me at the verge of death, and through rudimentary communication offered to save me. I should have read the fine print. Now I'm bitter, small, and possess an underdeveloped frontal lobe. Why does she want me to learn 'friendship'?
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great chapter
Nice
Very nice chapter
Good read, this chapter was 👍
Was quite surprised of the Hyprocrisy loop. Great end of a Arc.
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What do you mean by loop? Anon following Celestia's example in forcing change on another being without regard to free-will?
I don't belive nourish is the word you were looking for.
Nurture perhaps.
Flaming BB is the best.
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I guess a better word for the situation is hypocritical. Do not go gentle into that good night by Dylan Thomas. We can angry at the world we live in, but to be born into a world is to be formed from it. Non existence is by it self unimaginable. Sorry at this point ai am just jabbering. I enjoy reading your story and want thank you for your passion to share it.
Ohhhh that was good! Thank tou
Great chapter!
No one likes a hypocrite though, and looking at Anon, he sure is a giant one.
He may be a hypocrite, but at lest he had a reason to be one; protect his friends. Sun Horse was just a evil overlord.
The problem with using "hypocrite" here is the context of both characters scenarios are different. I have no reason to hold it against Anon given that he was abducted and Chrysalis is a very dangerous individual.
Well, I guess I lost the bet, I thought it could be someone else instead of Chrysalis... Also, I coincide with 'Pause' thinking that in this case Anon did it to save himself, Celestia did it not to save herself but to help Anon and Harmony maybe did it because thought it was funny
I love this chapter. I do think it probably went a bit fast. From the unveiling to the transmute to a bit of emotional fallout. Still, I've always been a fan of Chrysalis and I find this change and how it was tricked and forced on her interesting. I really want to see where that goes. I'm I'm glad Anon and Twilight are getting closer. It makes me happy.
Anon made Twilight curse!
It's been said that the real winner of a Dungeons and Dragons game is whoever can force the dungeon master to make the most rules to nerf a character. This is the equivalent of that.
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In all fairness, Anon had absolutely no way of knowing just what the gamble would actually do. He didn't knowingly force Chrysalis into anything.
I'm astounded at how thoroughly the ponies f*cked up.
They knew Anon was being targeted, and they knew it was Chrysalis.
After the third time it happened, one can't help but wonder what Anon's supposed guards are actually doing.
The bat guard even seems to actively dislike or at least (justifiably, to be fair) distrust Anon. Perhaps not worth protecting?
Incompetence at best, deliberate negligence at worst.
Why wouldn't "protect my young filly" immediately jump to top priority?
And Twilight presumes to consider herself a mother...
I'm even more astounded at how nopony is talking about this, especially Anon.
Not even a "hey, sorry it took us six days and you breaking yourself free for us to come find you", genuine off screen worry and effort notwithstanding.
And regarding the supposed hypocrisy of Anon's forced transformation gambit, it's worth noting that Celly-belly was not in life-threatening danger. Anon was.
It was well-intentioned, as any Celestia should be, but that's not what is in question.
This was brilliantly executed
What an interesting way to take things. I'll admit, I didn't see it coming.
Though I do have to wonder, what with that enhanced emotion sense at the end, if maybe she got a little changeling DNA blowback while they were magically linked.
Thanks for the chapter
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Anon the living lie detector? That'd be pretty awesome.
MOTH-U-RA!!!
Noooooo😒😒😒😒😒 great ch loved it💕💕💕💕💕
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And still in grade school without a cutie mark.
What a loser, giving Anon the business like that.
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Wait, did I go and goof, saying they didn't have their marks? This is roughly Season 7 territory, so...
I honestly felt a tiny bit of dread the moment I read that she could feel emotions in a way. I had a fleeting thought that this was going to end up in a sort of self-insert transformation fic, of which many
horrible oneswere written a couple of years back. As you stated; Anon transforming would be very sudden and out of place.Though I am biased. I prefer my Anons with fluffy green coats and black manes and tails. They cuteI’m really liking the written style of this story. Nicely paced with enough attention to detail without making an overbearing amount of descriptions,
Anon getting into trouble a lot, but with a good amount of relief before the next hammer strikes,
And an unique take on the personality of characters whom act and respond as you would canonically expect them to when faced with the shenanigans of our little green ball of fur. Except for Twi dropping the F bomb there though, but it was funny enough to pass!
I look forward to seeing you return, good luck!
Let's not forget that Twilight also had her species changed without her consent just like Anon and Chrysalis.
Great chapter. Nice close to the arc, even if it did seem a bit rushed.
Now that anonymous can get an even better read of those around her, will she try gambling again? Even if it's just with her school friends.
"I bet you one cupcake that I can guess who you have a crush on."
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D'awwww!!!
This shit is hilarious
Curse you for offering such an amazing plot point!!! For a bit I was beginning to think anonymous ended up a changeling and chrysalis was trying to reclaim them, but now with this idea I'd love to see it.
Ugh such a good story none the less, your extremely talented.
While in this part it seemed to me like she was going to try to turn anon into a changeling
Here she looks like she's really going to drain anon
So what will be her plan of action? Will the poor anon be able to escape before Queen Chrysalis does anything?
Should I really be wondering instead of reading the rest of the chapter?
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A creative way to force the change. Very sneaky.
So the pegasus filly she presented... was that truly her? Fascinating.
I wanna hug fluffy bug horse!
I never liked the idea of those skittle bugs, or the idea that they can just live feeding off their own love. Energy doesn't just come from nowhere, and if it was really that simple the Changelings would have figured it out ages ago.
There's got to be a catch.