The Sun Horse found me at the verge of death, and through rudimentary communication offered to save me. I should have read the fine print. Now I'm bitter, small, and possess an underdeveloped frontal lobe. Why does she want me to learn 'friendship'?
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Nice.
And also I sure do love stories that pad out run time with stuff just to leave on a cliff hanger
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Mostly I ended it there to ensure that I still had myself time to properly write out that interaction, rater than rush it and further delay the chapter's release.
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Hey it's your story I'm just a dude who reads it the second it's uploaded. Don't worry about my complaints just do what you want
“Keith had been obsessed with a TV show about a military branch of the United States Air Force operating out of Cheyenne Mountain, travelling through a portal to other planets and interacting with aliens.“
STARGATE!
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The very same. Joel Goldsmith's compositions for the series were superb. I haven't watched the original series in a long time, myself.
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Indeed. Fans might have ideas or stuff they wonder about when it comes to the characters but you have to be in the really good category not to have that happen. If the Fans are wondering why the characters aren't doing something that they think they should be doing well the Fans might mention it and as the author it is up to you to respond or not. Take a good idea if you see one I don't think the Fans will mind if they inspire you. As long as they aren't complaining all the time count yourself as good.
Why am I imagining Anon freaking out internally, and using the excuse of food to stall Emerald Breeze while she screws her brain back in?
I also like how she now basically has a non lethal firearm at her fingertips! Badum tsss~
I'm diggin the idea of a Magic Elemental Entity that wants to be recognized. I also am a huge nerd so I'm adoring reading the realistic physics of rune type spells, such as an "air bullet" since its fired from the hand, there would be recoil. Since Anon is using various subharmonic spells in place of modifiers, I'd like to see how much his/her imagination forms into new ideas. As long as they don't overuse mana, the spell types are essentially limitless
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Good thing she didn't jump straight to rail-gun, eh? Would probably have fractured her finger at the very least.
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I mean, that's not actually far off. And yeah, finger-guns and whistling a tune inappropriate for school. Wonder what melody that could be...
I'd like to try to guess what song that is, but I don't know how to read that notation.
It sounded like she was reading a novelization of Kamen Rider. Mind you I'm not the most familiar with Kamen Rider, but I've heard things and seen part of an episode or two.
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It's in 4/4, if that helps. Your best bet would be this.
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You'd be right. Specifically, Decade, which served as an anniversary series and the transition point from the Phase-1 Heisei Kamen Rider series to the Phase 2. Pretty sure there's a 'Displaced' fic here about a passing through Kamen Rider.
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??? Oh jeeze, it took longer than I'd like to admit for me to spot the problem. XD
so, I wrote up the tune in a bit of notation software. but for the life of me I can't place it....
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Would it help if I placed some inflatable basketball shoes in front of you as a form of hint?
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inflateble basketball shoes.....
well, I've looked up some of the movies that made me think of but...
yeah, still not able to place it.
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Foster the People's Pumped Up Kicks.
uuh awkward![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
Nice, another chapter!
It was nice to get some petty revenge on Spoiled Rich/Milk, and I wonder how she'll react. Scratch that, I know exactly how she'll react![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
I really enjoy your whole magic rune system, and it's always a joy to see Anon experiment with her rune designs and medallions! It was also really nice how her usage of her special talent improved her mood so much. Poor girl needs some peace and happiness![:pinkiesad2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesad2.png)
Also, I like how blatant Anon is with her magic in front of everyone
Granted, she was asked by that magic entity to reveal magic to humanity again, but it's still funny! I wonder how Trixie will react to real magic in the future. She's obviously already incredibly intrigued by Anon's display of magic (her fire to cook her medallions), so I wonder if she would ask Anon to become her teacher
Though I wonder if her ego will let her beg Anon for magic lessons ![:trixieshiftleft:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftleft.png)
As a side note, I still wonder what you will do with Sunset Shimmer. Personally, I would like her to remain in Equestria and become a bit more of a permanent addition to the cast, she's one of my favorite characters after all, but I can also understand if you want her to return to the human world after the whole Anon-a-miss incident has been resolved. Sunset would be a great magic guide for humanity, but I'd still rather see her return to Equestria... You could always make Trixie humanity's magic guide, I'm sure it won't do anything to her overinflated ego![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
And finally, it's time for the conversation with Emerald Breeze. As much as I hate cliffhangers, I think you made the right choice to postpone it for the next chapter. The meeting seems too important to rush at the end of the chapter. It's been built up for a while, so it would just feel unsatisfying to rush through it like that. I wonder how the meeting will turn out though. Hopefully Emerald Breeze can get some closure from the whole situation, and maybe Anon can get some answers to her questions about her current body and what happened to Emerald Flicker. I guess time will tell.
I look forward to the next chapter, and have a nice day/night![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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OOOOOH!
Ok I see it now. note speed/spaceing is kinda criticle to the jump though. I'm not suprised I had toruble.
11553525![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
I can only fake knowing music so much, after all.
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Seems you still have the extra "gave them a" in there
Also in the letter.
"proper justice the behalf of the girl"
Replace with "on"
Anyway, enjoying the story, nice to know she has Magica's blessing or whatever that God is. I wonder if that will transfer over to pony Equestria and keep her magic filled at a steady rate.
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I knew it was pumped up kicks before you even gave the hint... Just made things easier
Uhm... Ben 10? Mega Man? Doctor Who?
Sounds like Anon's mission over here is a lot more complex than it seemed initially... or maybe it's a thing to work at over a long period of time, whereas her short term mission is nearing its conclusion.
Schools and songs can be pretty synonymous. Especially the inappropriate ones. Very easy to identify. At least for US residents.
I was expecting Anon to finger gun more while singing that in the hallway. For the lolz of course. And... is "bang!" literally the trigger for the spell? Would be pretty funny if Anon shot himself (is it herself?) while clenching a fist
11554228 Nah, it's not a trigger word; as mentioned in a previous chapter, she lacks the knowledge to produce a somatic trigger. She just said it out loud while channelling mana into the medallion with her other hand.
as I pass "3G 3F 3F 3E♭ 3E♭ 3C 2B♭ 3E♭ 3E♭ 3E♭ 3C 2B♭ 3E♭ 3E♭ 3E♭ 3F 3F 3G 3F 3E♭" to sound?
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Kamen Rider specifically one that travels multiple dimensions the whole thing is obvious when you think about the motorcycle bit and the mention of bugs since one of the best known Kamen riders in the US the masked rider is an adaptation of one of the bug themed common writers
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Aww too cute thank u 💖💖💖💖
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Ah that's cute.
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Indeed, but there is more
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Pretty sure you're actually missing a few notes
3G 3F 3F 3E♭ 3E♭ 3C 2B♭ 3E♭ 3E♭ 3E♭ 2B♭ 3C 2B♭ 3E♭ 3E♭ 3E♭ 3E♭ 3F 3F 3F 3G 3F 3E♭
"Kamen Rider D-D-D-Decade"
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Decade
Eqg-god would have a fun date with Harmony.