The Sun Horse found me at the verge of death, and through rudimentary communication offered to save me. I should have read the fine print. Now I'm bitter, small, and possess an underdeveloped frontal lobe. Why does she want me to learn 'friendship'?
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If twilight was aware how smart the tree of harmony was I think she would have words about sending children into danger. But I am impressed by the kid he was pretty tough against odds that most people wouldn't face without a weapon and some of them not even with.
Great job Lighting now instead of an expulsion you have a fucked up wrist and jail time. Seems like violent morons never change.
I can see some serious fallout from this mess. Principal Celestia should have gotten the police involved when Anon was assaulted in the hallway, and again when she knew the Lightning Dust was the culprit, and now an eight year old has sustained life-threatening injuries.
I had to go back and check the earlier chapters, but it was Twilight's map that summoned Anon to solve Sunset's problem, and she just came back from the other world with two hooves in the grave. Twilight's going to be thinking about that every time she or her friends are summoned in the future - it might find the right person for the job, but it doesn't guarantee you'll make it out in one piece. She's also going to try and find out how that thing actually works because it sent a filly (an unusually skilled and mature one, but still a child) on a mission that almost killed her.
Thanks for the new chapter!
Welp, I think that everyone is sufficiently traumatized to where they'll never try something like this again.
The Rainbooms fell into a depressive spiral out of guilt but they are trying to make things right and rekindle their friendship with Sunset.
Lightning Dust pretty much had her athletic career completely ruined, both by the broken wrist and likely a criminal record followed by expulsion. Gilda is also likely to be facing a criminal record and expulsion in addition the psychological trauma when she saw death staring her in the eyes and couldn't handle it.
And finally the Crusaders got front row seats to witness this violence knowing that this all happened because of them.
Hope that Anon recovers soon.
(Lightning Dust and Gilda are lucky they didn't get worse. I can't say that I'm surprised that Lightning Dust tried something, she was obvious. Gilda, on the other hand, that surprised me. Probably shouldn't have.
In any case... I honestly hope they both suffer. Spoiled Rich to. I know Twilight wouldn't approve of my thinking either but... people like them? Make me truly furious. I can take some solace with the hope, that they have prison time, and their lives are over.
Oh, also, glad to see Lyra away and alive and hopefully safe. Good luck to her and Bon Bon.
This one?
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/390844/tfw-you-find-your-crushs-nudes
Also, I'm disappointed Anon didn't wreath herself in a flame aura.
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Nope, it was another Anon-a-Miss aftermath story. I think it'd involved Sunset attempting, but being foiled, in committing suicide, which Apple Bloom had witnessed and ended up confessing, while the other two split off.
Edit: Funny enough, the one you mentioned was the same author. Turns out it was Cold.
Wow, what a great chapter, with some truly scary moments!
When the gang parked outside Donut Joe's, I knew there would be trouble, but I didn't imagine to this extent! Anon was super lucky that she made that amp-spell, or she would've been toast! Poor filly, she just can't get a break. I really feel sorry for her. First it's her whole past, then the scalding tea and fight, then getting kidnapped (foalnapped?) and everything that entailed. And now she's gravely injured following her stay in the human world. Poor Anon really needs and deserves some peace and quite, some time for her to cope with everything that's been going on, and come to terms with all the danger she's been subjected to. Those therapy sessions can't come quickly enough!
I really hope "Anon-a-miss" understands the gravity of the situation and their actions. They need to understand that the current situation is a result of their actions. I don't know what kind of punishment they should be subjected to, but I want it to be something harsh. Their actions have already lead to a near suicide attempt, and now we have a gravely injured girl, who might I add, ended up this way to protect them from that gang. Anon is too good for this world. It's really sweet that she tries to follow the tenant of Harmony, even if it ends in bodily harm to herself. Anyway, back to the punishment. I would imagine they AT LEAST get put in separate classes and denied internet access until they're of legal age. The more realistic punishment would be to expel them and make sure they end up in different school, again with no internet access, except for schoolwork. Depending on the law, they might face some type of juvenile justice system. I don't think they'll end up in a youth detention center, but I imagine some type of community service might be in their future. In any case, I don't want them to get away with this scot-free. And then there's all the "attention" they'll get, now that their identity has been revealed. I would look over my shoulder a lot more from now on if I were them. But enough about that.
I hope Anon is able to relax and recover after her return to Equestria. Just spend some time with Twilight and Starlight for company and comfort. Maybe have some fun with her friends (though I think she'll be more wary of them from now on after the reveal), and I'm sure a Flurry Heart snuggle session would be nice, when Anon can finally get her therapy sessions in the Crystal Empire. Well, I guess that would have to wait until after the hospital visit. Those injuries look really bad, and she needs immediate medical attention! It's concerning how soon she has to return to the hospital after her last visit... Poor Anon.
Thank you for the chapter, and I look forward to the next one! I really hope Anon can get some peace and quiet after everything she's been through.
Have a nice day/night
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At this point im pretty sure that if anyone is gonna be the alicorn of magic its anon. i mean with all she has been through plus getting the green light from not just one but 2 planets to use their magic im pretty sure she is beyond qualifyed and just needs a accecion trial or something now
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Lol yeah, move over Twilight Sparkle, the true Princess of Magic has arrived
KIDS ARE CRUEL, JACK, AND IM VERY IN TOUCH WITH MY INNER CHILD!
Anon really just can't catch a break
Someone have very fragile ego.
That was unexpected. I hope Anon's health will get better.
Mate, you really out do yourself with these chapters.
awesome chapter
Thankfully that wasn't as scary as I feared. Anon was mostly in control the entire time. Injuries all around, but nothing permanent I hope. Could have gone much, much worse. Now we just need everyone to get healed up and face the punishment for their crimes.
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Anon to Gilda after tanking a bat to the head: “I think it’s time for Jack, TO LET ‘ER RIP!”
Keeps getting injured in the eyes… I feel bad about that. Still, made Gilda wet herself. Well done, Anon. Good thing human Rainbow is down to clown. Backup was necessary.
Hooray! Starlight sister! And Sunset is mostly okay! Human CMC have some issues to deal with.
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Eyes sounds permanent enough
FASHION DIVA and DA PRINCESS?
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I sure hope not. In the little time Anon has had this body, it's already gotten enough scarring for years to come. Give Anon a damn break already.
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I think in next chapter Anon will say something like "nah, I'm gonna be child, it's much easier".
Probably there will be Big Sister
is watching youStarlight and other cuteness in next chapters.this chapter is best enjoyed with yakuza battle music
Gilda whimpering:
"H-how are you still standing?"
Anon going crazy from both her own and secondhand aggression:
"I'm really bad at dying,"
Truer words have never been spoken.
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Diamond 4 Princess, I believe
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Or maybe protection. The fact is since day one he stood up for folks in need. Though if he does become an alicorn that would cool there aren't enough alicorn stories that don't star the princess from the show.
The CMC are definitely going to get it. They at least had a more valid reason than in most stories, but that doesn't justify just how bad things got.
Then again it could be argued that Spoiled Rich and her insistence of a "hands off" approach to getting petty revenge against Sunset allowed things to get this bad, so she might be for an even worse punishment than the CMC, because she's an adult and should know better.
Not irredeemable. Just a teenager with some horrible traumas and home, that'll likely get fucked in her life due to bad societal support. Can even point at really bad parental relations, considering how ignoring her by anon turning her back on lightning triggering her that hard.
Children are fruits of their environment, and this is a sad tale all over
I was expecting a more cleaner take down from Anon considering he has an air gun. Based on his survivalist nature in his first life, shouldn't he have learnt to "shoot first, ask later" when they declined his offer? Or at least disable them like the other dudes?
Also, does his bullet magic have limited charges?
Anyways, I don't think the cutie map would have sent him just to get injured like this. Maybe it was already resolved when the main 5 friends came together again but the map couldn't exactly call him back?
Either way, sounds like Anon would have a gnarly scar that his previous life likely doesn't
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By the time, she'd moved into knock out the third, Gilda was already swinging her bat, and Anon no longer had the advantage of surprise. The spell, as rudimentary as it was for something so advanced (for her) as only a single shot, so she would have had to pulse her magic through it to fire off multiple shots.
Ponies are going to have a discussion regarding the Cutie Map and Harmony in the next chapter, and we might even learn the name of human-world's magic goddess.
As for scars, it'll be in a pretty inconspicuous spot when it fully heals. Think about how a human hand is. She'd have likely been stabbed right through space between the third and forth metacarpal bones. Anatomy-wise, that translates to the cannon bone (third metacarpal) on a horse. Depending where it translates, it could be just a piercing injury on both sides of the bone, or it could even appear near the lateral splint bone (the 4th metacarpal).
Instead of leaving from the back, maybe it could had been a better plan to ask Joe to close temporaly and call the police or Luna... Maybe reinforce the doors. Sure Gilda and the others could be a rebellious tennagers in a group but the less they could like is for police to arrest them.
Maybe a plan like that could be better that what happened in the end with Anon
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She didn't exactly have a lot of time to save the girls and come up with a plan to do so. Them escaping was the first thing that came to mind. Trouble was just outside the door and would be inside soon enough,.
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You never know when inspiration could come to you, and usually the plan of "Close the door" is what you could think... The typical Fight/Flee reaction, after all, what if there was no back door?
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That what she asked. I assume she would had the cmcs hide in the while fighting with the rainbooms if there was no backdoor.
Thanks for chapter
I'm not a big fan of this school story arc, and I will be honest, I cant wait for it to be over and we can move on to something better. But it just seems to keep going on and on and on, chapter after chapter.
Monk
"not only was love blind but it must have some severe mental disorders too." -Recteik Shade
Great chapter
Awesome ch great on the detail but why was they there i wonder 🤔🤔🤔🤔
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Orders from Spoiled Rich, perhaps?
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That what is actually intentional.
Human crusaders must to go to therapy. The fact that they actually drove Sunset to almost kill herself due to their actions show much of their sociopathic tendencies. Something like that has to be fixed early on. Otherwise, Sunset won't be the only one to attempt suicide.
Loved this arc, Amazing
For someone who apparantly had run ins with gangs, he's terrible at fighting
The strangest part of reading several fanfics at the same time is how each author develops the characters, just yesterday I read a story where Dust was the 'sane' pony, and now I'm here seeing what seems like a more faithful representation of who she was in the series (not that I can say that for sure, I never even got to the 3rd season)
She has a skull fracture, I hope it doesn't lead to anything else
Victory! But at what cost?
Honestly, I kinda thought it might be them. Gabby Gums two electric boogaloo.
THAT DID NOT GO HOW I EXPECTED AT ALL.