The Sun Horse found me at the verge of death, and through rudimentary communication offered to save me. I should have read the fine print. Now I'm bitter, small, and possess an underdeveloped frontal lobe. Why does she want me to learn 'friendship'?
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awesome chapter![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
really crissy freaking out and hunger showing up was comedy gold![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Great chapter!
YES! YES! FUCKING YES! Shining Armor you fool you have done the one thing that all parents try to never do and you have failed successfully! You taught a foal a swear word and they repeated right back to you! Parent of the Year right here, now teach Flurry more bad words on accident so that we can see where this cascading failure leads us! I wanna see Flurry just be surrounded by other foals, says the word 'Buck!' as loud as she can, than the other foals near her all start repeating it as well. I want a cacophony of foals saying swears without even knowing what they mean only to have Cadence just give Shiny the look of disappointment.
Now this is pretty nice. The ending was so good I yelled laughed
Now that was some funny stuff![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Where did you get this information from or did you just make it up?
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God this made me bust my ass laughing
I absolutely love this story
This makes me think of this story: Life Finds A Way
It's still ongoing at 1.2 million words, but the start is somewhat similar to ur story in some aspects. I look forward to seeing where this one goes too, looks fun and I rather enjoy that kind of writing.
Tally HO!
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The settlements are just my own bit of world-building to make the place seem more lived in.
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I genuinely envy people who can crank out longer chapters like that regularly. The only time I ever seem to be able to get those out is if I'm in a bout of mania.
was going fine till that last part, poor Shiny, being a bad influence on Flurry, I laughed until I hurt
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And of get him into therapy to deal with the fact anon resembles queenie before she was tricked into changing before he does something stupid again and scares the traumatized kid who is supposed to be getting help because the fight part of their instincts is gone into overdrive with all the craziness plus their not happy past.
I think this little endeavor is gonna be good for both of them.![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
For real though, I think there is genuine bonding to be had here.
I thought it might be Chrysalis who was gonna be in the Empire to teach Anon. The fact they've got a parent/child pheremone setup is an interesting addition.
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I know back in Entry 19, Chrysalis implied that she'd never get along with Anon...
... but I like to think that the upcoming bonding time would give Anon a unique opportunity to befriend another foe—especially if Anon could see a happy, healthy Chrysalis. They might never end up with the sort of relationship Anon has with Twilight or Starlight, but maybe, one day, they might become vitriolic best buds.
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Can't wait for Anon on to cut Chrysalis's head off just to spite Desiree
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B-but Désirée has no vested interest in Chryssi beyond what she can offer our precious little horror.
Starlight has a lot on her plate to help Anon, but I hope she’s putting together some non-combat spell lessons. Anon doesn’t have many hobbies outside of her runework and staying busy while enjoying the busywork can be quite helpful.
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The new pheromones might also be a big help in shifting perspective. As well as awakening some instincts in both of them. It one thing if they are different species but when they are the same and share the same pheromones l, I think there is gonna be some embarrassing moments ahead for both them I predict.
Oh shit i forgot about chryssi…
Ah, yes. The Shining Armour is a bad father contest influence has spread.
Well, I wasn't expecting Chrysalis, nor did I forgot about her. Her introduction is pretty neutral to me. But, what I am focusing on now is her character.
I am invested to see if she still has that crazed queen and megalomaniac attitude. With a side of whatever she is doing at the orphanage.
That attitude tends to blend an interestingly morbid relationship with a 4chan Anon.
Maybe we might get a really spicy or unexpectedly strong friend-shipping. Maybe it might even delineate from our G5 Anon!
Partners in crime.
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You might be a little surprised by 'non's observations of 'Chryssi at work', and they may even develop into a little vitriolic best buds situation.
As far as your delineation comment, are you asking about character divergence, or getting to see some of Anon's more adult personality from Vlogs come out?
That's for sure
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Delineating, as in creating an entirely seperate timeline where this Chrysalis is more involved. Maybe Chrysalis goes together or replaces Anon entirely for the G5 mission.
Or maybe even prevent Opaline from creating the Equestrian rift in the first place
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Just because she can turn her hooves into claws doesn't mean she's a horror. After all, we keep cats in our homes, and they really do kill things for fun!
Still rooting for her to kill the concepts
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oh read that one hoping it continues
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They're gone in the sequel, so...
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Not really a sequel, and they aren't dead, just temporary indisposed, i want something permanent
We knew they never explicitly told Anon where Chrissy ended up, but it's nice to have our suspicious confirmed. Hunger did say she would be modeled after her best, and before the moth-enating Chrissy was supposed to be that. Actually, think she casually mentioned who the base genetic template was from, and the first mention of pheromones in the chapter confirmed it right away.
Hooray for natural best frenemies!
Come to think of it, if Anon and progeny can't be turned, does that mean they'll be able to share love indiscriminately without consequence? That might be a hidden gotcha the hunger goddess didn't think about... 🙃
There was so much to unpack in this chapter, sort of like a protein bar.
Shining, my dude, you done screwed up. You just lost the "best uncle" award with that little maneuver of yours. To say nothing of teaching Flurry to curse.
And as much as we all want to see Anon get some much-needed therapy and recover, my inner asshole wants to see Anon ratchet up the trolling on Shining for some much-needed payback. Nothing too extreme, maybe conspiring with Cadance and Chrysalis for a little plot that involves them both looking like Cadance for a game of guess who. Or maybe Anon turning into a very floofy mini-Chrissy and rubbing up against his side like a house cat. Or if really pissed off, pulling the same stunt on Shining that was done to poor Flash with a mini Cadance.
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That's one of the stories where I drop everything and read. This one is another. Being the bookworm I am, it's hard to impress me to that extent. Looking forward to more.
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Yes. Let's give Shining shit for having PTSD.
/s
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Anon also has PTSD, and a lot more of it than Shining. Poor kid doesn't need to worry about her uncle trying to kill her because she's wearing the wrong face at the wrong time, on top of everything else.
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im struggling with college because the fic keeps prioritizing itself XD
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The "my pain is greater than yours" is completely irrelevant. Shining has lasting scars from Chrysalis. No one gave him a warning for something they definitely should have. He had a completely understandable reaction given the situation.
Giving him shit for it is stupid.
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It seems that some people are laser-focused on the protagonists and what the protagonist feels, ignoring everything else.
unethical life hack - always teach your kid to say papa rather than dada. studies show that d is harder to say than m, and therefore dada will always lose to mama. what are said studies? i swear i've seen them and they're real, but i can't be bothered to look for them tbh.
Shouldn't she be aware she looks like a small Chrysalis? Not sure how that was a surprise.
My biggest issue with Shining here is Chrysalis is currently living in the Crystal Empire and seems to be known in the castle. Why would on obviously smaller, non colorful Chrysalis surrounded by ponies he knows not at least make him stop and question what he is seeing? I get that trauma responses are hard to rationalize, but he is the prince consort, formarly guard captain of canterlot. He should have more control than to immediately lash out with magic.
I wanna scream at her, "Call her mom," but at the same time, I don't even think we've seen that much interaction between the two. As much as I want Anon to have a mom figure, she's spent far more time around Starlight. Twilight was always just kind of hanging out in the background, for the most part. However, I'm sure we'd get more "mom" interactions between the two if she told Twilight how she felt. I think keeping a little distance for fear of seeming like she wanted to replace Anon's birth would be very in character for her. Or stressing about how she's supposed to act in general, honestly XD I wonder how much Twilighting was going on in the next room while Anon was sleeping or studying in the castle
Who will be...
Chrysalis?
Yeah, it definitely is Chrysalis