The Sun Horse found me at the verge of death, and through rudimentary communication offered to save me. I should have read the fine print. Now I'm bitter, small, and possess an underdeveloped frontal lobe. Why does she want me to learn 'friendship'?
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I hope we get to see Anon and Rainbow reconcile. Partly for the closure, partly because I want to know that Rainbow understands that she said those horrible things to a traumatized filly.
I'd really like to see the moment when Rainbow realized how badly she screwed up, but I don't think it'd fit in the first person narrative without shoehorning in a flashback sequence.
I kind of want to read a mini fic where anon is sent to Tartarus, then one day gets a new cell mate: Cozy Glow.
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"Why are you here?" Cozy asked, noticing her cage's other occupant. "I didn't think they actually sent foals to Tartarus."
"I accidentally nearly caused an entire city to be wiped out in the middle of a war, and Auntie gave me the option of either going to Pony <<Hell>> for a few months, or volunteer at an orphanage," Anon replied. "How about you?"
"I tried to banish all magic from Equestria, nearly caused a race war, and almost got Princess Twilight's school of Friendship shut down."
The green filly's smile changed into one with far too many sharp teeth. "Oh, how sweet. Auntie sent me a snack... I hope you'll be more filling than that old bag of bones, Tirek was."
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that made me laugh WAY to hard, I woke up my half-brother
I see they are assigning her a guard to help her learn to magically protect others with the least amount of life lost while still stopping the problem. I'm glad that she pointed to the girls that she doesn't wish to hurt others but those who choose to hurt the people she cares about will be stopped whatever it takes. . I was afraid that rainbow not understanding this factor would find a way to ruin the friendship between anon and the cmcs.
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That was funny and would have been interesting to read.
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Maybe anon could find out about her regret from the cmcs. They are good kids and they haven't gotten their marks so they could try for relationship fixers.
I love how Anon mentioned pony version of Hitler. Isn't the pony version of Hitler, a filly they end up sending to Tartarus later?![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
Hmmm, Tempest getting a "cushy job" as punishment? Anon getting a probation officer/bodyguard? What could it all mean?![:trixieshiftright:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftright.png)
Reading this really does give me an appreciation for how stable Anonymous is in Insect Vlogs.
i would call this a perfeckt ark ending
next life in the crystal empire ^^
Tears of relief, amusement, exasperation, and more, I imagine.
And so it is written, Anon must deal with the ultimate punishment for her actions. The terror... of foals!
As Munro said, this is a very fitting end to the arc. While it's almost a slap on the wrist, it still feels like justice has been done. Were it another pony, with all the extenuating circumstances, I could easily see the same punishment being levied.
Looking forward to more!
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If you can believe it, there actually is a bit of an epilogue to this arc in store. That's what 49 is. One that involves spicy food, big mouths, and making peace with certain polychromatic pegasi.
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Anon and Rainbow Dash going to get into a hot pepper-eating contest?
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That fits too. It wouldn't be like Anon to leave a loose end dangling like that. I just hope it goes well!
So... With this Season 1 of "Diaries of Anonymous" is finished and season 2 will begin when your muse returns, with luck in a couple of months or less
So, probation, therapy, 500 bits fine and 200 hours of community service. Basically, a slap on the wrist/fetlock. No meaningful consequences. Not even short-term PTSD. One nightmare dispelled by Luna does not count.
Just as I thought. Look, I understand that it's a magical world, where 'I was under the influence of an evil entity' is a valid defence, but we're going from dead serious and realistic stuff to this nonsense of a trial. You know what happens to the people who kill pedophiles? They go to jail for murder. Once again, I have to note that I had enjoyed the story until the entire Manehatan arc, which feels like it only exist because the writer thought the story was not dark enough. And, had Anon and Co went straight to the guard compound where Blueblood was at and stayed there, this whole mess could be avoided. But nope, they had to grab an idiot ball with all four hooves.
Oh, and to those who want to bring 'But then Luna should have been trialed for the crimes she committed as Nightmare Moon', she already did her time on the Moon.
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Alright. Why don't you tell us what should happen instead. What sort of punishment should Anon be facing, in light of everything that happened and was going on well outside of and against her control? What sort of punishment should be dealt to Anon, when Désirée basically took advantage of a minor and had a good amount of control over her actions and thought processes at the time everything was going down?
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I feel like you didn't read the chapter and just skimmed through everything.
But anyways, great chapter! The only unrealistic part here, and in our world is that killing pedophiles is actually a crime.
Nice
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Oh, yes, he was manipulated alright. Oh yes, it's not like Anon made a deal with the devil and then invited him to a dinner with him with a spoon ten times shorter than it should have been. Hell, even the original name, Hunger, does not sound like someone you can trust. "Oh but his brain is underdeveloped, he can't control his impulses" - bullroar. The first things that parents must teach their kids are to not pick up stuff from the ground and shove it in your mouth, not to talk to strangers, ever, and never accept anything from strangers. So what did Nonnie do? Talked to an obviously evil stranger, and gleefully jumped headfirst into a potato sack with a single candy at the very bottom.
Jail time, no help from Luna with any nightmares and lifetime ban on practicing and studying any magic that goes beyond the basic necessities of his new species. *throws a wyrd token* And there are friends and families of ponies he murdered, who are out for his blood.
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Well between the ptsd and their need to protect others from harm and harmony unwilling to fully honest and being upset with him when life started spilling the beans about the secret did you really expect him to see anything but justice for those in trouble and the pstd would have encouraged the route that seemed most likely of getting justice for the innocent people. The fact the mob boss and his cronies paid in blood for their actions doesn't upset me especially knowing that innocent people probably have paid in blood so they could do whatever they wanted and more would have if not stopped.
So you mean Neighsay. I bet he could start a world war with all of Equestria’s allies if he tried hard enough.
I don't mind if the next chapter won't be out any time soon; your next project must be pretty worth it.
As far as community service go, I don't know if Anon feels strongly about foals, aside from his sisters, including Emerald. On a somwhat related note, another commentor mentioned Cozy Glow and I realised something: we don't know her origins.
From what Anon's "Fate" has been leading him to, I wouldn't be surprised if Cozy was a Crystal orphan filly. But... another character was brought up in season 9 who has a pet called "Bloofy".
Spur is not from the Empire and she kinda resembles a teenage Cozy Glow. Possibly related.
And what's the punishment for the ruler who's capital get conquered twice in two years, Celestia?
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11800940 I'm glad Celestia was her judge and not you.
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I'm kinda surprised she didn't mention jaywalking as well.
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I'm pretty sure given the rest of the items listed there, 'Vandalism' counts for the "Arson, Murder, and Jaywalking" trope.
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Might as well classify killing the one guy in the hotel as littering while she's at it.
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Yeah if he had done that on earth it would have been a huge diplomatic incident that would have been tons of figurative fires to put out from the fall out.
Would someone explain this to me? Am I losing my mind? What the hell is a "bodyguard-cum-probation officer"? What does that mean
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In addition to the slang meaning it gained referring to ejaculate or the act of ejaculating, it originally served another purpose as a preposition. Carried over from the latin word cum, it is 'used in indicating a thing or person which has two or more roles, functions, or natures, or a which has changed from one to another.'
Quoted from Wiktionary.
What it means is that this bodyguard she is being assigned will also be serving as a probation officer.
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The entire killing spree was classified as littering.
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Magna cum laude is another common use of the word.
I’m glad the Crusaders proved themselves different from their mirror counterparts. Sunset hasn’t returned yet, right? I forgot if she has. If not, will she come to the Crystal Empire to meet the therapist as well?
Trixie might need a new cart. Lots of property damage all around. Maybe Anon can figure out a way to help with her talismans in making building materials like she did with the water and ice in Manehattan? Like something that literally sh*ts bricks? Crystal or stone bricks?
Something I was thinking about during a reread, does the change in form mean Anon loses a lot of their Runic Creativity, or are they still in tune with their old mark in some fashion? Was pondering about that given the project given to them.
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It's been mentioned that she retained her mark and talent.
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Ah my bad, must have misremembered that, though that's on me for thinking about this before I even got back to that part. :P
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I'd discussed between Harmony and Hunger during Anon's re-rebirth.
And the specifics are classified as this incident will go down quietly in the books.
What an idiot. When your standing in court and ask to tell them why you are there, you don't give a list of your crimes!!!!! The answer is "I'm not sure, why don't you tell me." But this guys an idiot. I do like this story, but these last several chapters, the Author has made the mane character an unstable idiot.
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(Twilight to Dumbledore) “In the short time I have known you, you are always so confident. Yet you are also so frequently wrong.” -tKepner