The Sun Horse found me at the verge of death, and through rudimentary communication offered to save me. I should have read the fine print. Now I'm bitter, small, and possess an underdeveloped frontal lobe. Why does she want me to learn 'friendship'?
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So, Anon broke out Starlight's blush and platform boots... that is adorable.
Good chapter, we see more of Anon and she manage to let out a little of stress
I hope it isn't a recurring theme that things work out where Anon is inexplicably the one left apologizing.
(Well, for the most part, this was pretty mature on the parts of all parties... for the most part. Now, looking forward to addressing the whole 'YOU HIT A CHILD' thing. Granted, not really a child, child's body, but still, striking first isn't appropriate for Applejack either. Somepony needs to take her to task for that, especially since two unicorns and an alicorn apparently witnessed it.
Otherwise, I think everypony here handled things relatively well. Anon's putting that adult maturity to use, brain issues or not, and Luna's clarifying her intentions. Actually explaining a thing does WONDERS for communication. Oh, and Twilight gave a sort of apology, I don't think Starlight needed to give any, and I do think Princess Luna needed to give one, despite her good intentions. Still... well enough for now.)
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Was Applejack supposed to know Anon didn't know the difference? Can you hear the capital 'N' when speaking of the dream eater?
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(Applejack was supposed to not strike somebody for using words she didn't like. Especially someone in the body of a CHILD. That is a VERY low bar to clear.
She could have been as angry and offended as she wanted that Anon didn't know about The Nightmare. Even a bit of cursory thinking or examination would have shown that Anon was thinking of something else entirely, being from a different dimension and all. But actually, Applejack is under no obligation to be understanding, or attempt to understand Anon. I disagree with her, and think less of her for her rashness and inability to pick up on context clues, but that's actually not the problem.
The problem is that she resorted to physical violence. Criminal assault. Like Anon resorted to threatening law officers. Criminal conduct. As Anon is being, at the LEAST, scolded for that, so to should SOMEONE, hold Applejack to some kind of standards for her actions. She struck someone for saying words she didn't like. That's not very justifiable.)
If i read it right, AJ hit Anon get her out of her panic attack. Not for saying bad words. A little pain can reboot your brain.
Nice
I notice Luna didn't state or assure Nemo they weren't mag8cally tampering with or altering his mind. But really, I don't see any reason why they would avoid it since they all seem to think reassigning someone's whole identity is a good thing. If they didn't it stands to reason they wouldn't be calling him Anon.
Floof Anon is an adorable sight. She shouldn't have put it down but faced Luna as the little pony fluffy ball of issues she is.
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Go reread the chapter. AJ smacked Anon because she was being hysterical instead of rational. It may hurt, but in the right situation, it works.
I truly have high hope for this story. The prologue and anon's backstory are great. The story itself not so much.
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Still doesn't make it right. Assault is assault no matter how you spin it.
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Compared to the classics? Yeah.
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Just chill out and don't overthink it. Just because you found something you didn't enjoy about a good story doesn't really mean you should start a war in the comments a chapter after the event you are talking about. If it bothers you so much, nobody is actually forcing you to continue reading.
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Yeah, this just feels like a terrible characterization of AJ, and a colossal handwaving of a serious assault on someone vulnerable.
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"You don't have to keep reading" is not the answer to valid criticism.
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Sometimes good people/characters make bad decisions even though they had good intentions.
And as someone who's had their train of thought and worry interrupted by a sudden jolt of pain, like stubbing your toe or smacking your elbow without even intending to do it while you're nervously pacing, I can confirm it works as your brain refocuses on the immediate and defined, rather than the distant and vague. It's not a great course of action, certainly not the wisest course of action, but it works.
Pain is easier to manage than an anxiety attack.
You know, this story reminds me a lot of Trust Once Lost by Greenhorne. Anon's angst, underdeveloped body and mind is similar to Green's. Not to mention the numerous issues that they both have.
However, Anon seems to be slightly more in control of her emotions than Green and not constantly apologising.
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Honestly...I expect it to go that way until the character lives in equestria long enough to know everything.
This must be the wimpiest Anon filly ever.
Barely any swears, no crude humor just teenage angst and apologizing to everyone.
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Ummm..... well that kind of attitude gets snuffed out when you have a physically abusive father growwing up + trying to survive alone via scamming people and winning poker etc
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I LOVE this story.
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Well the difference between them is one has major social anxiety which they have only begun to face the other except for a little anxiety due to an abusive father and not a ton of social stuff outside their family has managed to control themselves better.
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I hate to break it to you bud, but sometimes you HAVE to hurt someone to help them. Case and point, CPR - if you do it right, it almost always results in broken ribs. A slap to the face might not be the best way to stop a panic-attack, but I can speak from experience, it works.
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Anon from my point of view was being pretty reasonable considering they feeling somewhat frustrated trying to understand something that made no sense from their point of view and applejack vague explanation didn't make things any clearer. Applejack expected anon to understand the difference between the two meanings even though the word is spelt the same way for both. applejack was the one getting hysterical because despite trying to understand anon wasn't getting the difference and despite pronouncing it a different way depending upon the meaning it didn't make sense to someone who wasn't familiar with the story about the creature. Applejack lost her cool because she just expect her to understand the vague explanation. Anon wasn't upset just frustrated and confused about what supposedly bad dreams have to do with trying to cover the world in darkness. If twilight had bothered to explain to her friends everything concerning the kid maybe it wouldn't have happened but I guess she told them part of the kid story and not the previous life part.
Actually, there's science behind post-bath-drying floof. Scraping off the water molecules aligns the electrical charges of the remaining water in each of the fur tufts and causes them to repel one another. 😇
Wow, so she was watching him like... the entire entire time. Or it's the matter of news travelling fast in a small town, but AJ was the only one there!