The Sun Horse found me at the verge of death, and through rudimentary communication offered to save me. I should have read the fine print. Now I'm bitter, small, and possess an underdeveloped frontal lobe. Why does she want me to learn 'friendship'?
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Man, with that breakdown, Harmony really did Anonymous dirty here. I hope she gets the time to heal, physically and mentally, and then reaffirm friendships. Give the poor thing some stability and stop injuring her!
Very nice! I'm interested to see where we go from here with Anon's Silly Adventures
Thtanks for the update!
"Lady" Anonymous Flicker - a courtesy granted as a ward of Twilight Sparkle, or has Celestia given Anon her own title?
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Mostly Column A, but unofficially a bit of Column B. I would think that any being that answers the call of Harmony would be placed in a sort of knighthood.
Nice
Now that that's out of the way I gotta say this is what I CRAVE from a chapter. It's long but not too long. It moved the plot along at a great pace and even showed us plenty of new stuff waiting to happen. My only slight issue is what will humans do with magic. Since we are human and our leaders are monsters will they invade pony land for resources? Who knows what pony humans can do so I'll leave it at that.
Anyways great chapter. Enjoy your little break but I want more. FEED ME YOUR WORDS OF MAGIC AND TALES
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Yeah the kid was just beinging to adjust when the tree called and if twilight knew that tree was smart she would have words. I would like to know how it went after anon left to be treated considering the girls meant Well but something they haven't learned is one that this is one of those things they are too young for and sometimes you can't save someone from their own mistakes. They should have talked with the adults who cared about the rainbooms and let them handle it because all they did was take a possible problem and make a worse one. As for diamond not reforming it possible with her mom issues she can't really change even if she wants to because she will be in trouble if she doesn't do as she says. When she older she can escape if she chooses but not now. I would have loved if anon had taught those book idiots a lesson about non fiction and fiction as well as manners. Now it one thing to think that someone overreacted to something its other to right to their face.
Fun times with Auntie Cadance coming? Oh, and the eldritch demon she spawned.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
Wow, that was one powerful chapter! Great job!
I will enjoy seeing this Anon attend the School of Friendship. I think it will help her a lot and present lots of fun for us.
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A bit of a spoiler, but that's where I intend to have her transfer later, since that setting is much more suited to help socialise her (and learn how to forgive).
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Oh great, now that you've said that, and with this from this latest chapter,
in particular this,
Anon is gonna fall for Cozy Glow's act, isn't she? Mind you, it was a really good act, considering it fooled a fair number of show watchers right up until the big reveal. I'm just concerned about what that would do to her at this point.
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Personally, I think something about Cozy Glow would put her hackles up, namely her emotions not reflecting her outward expressions, and coupled with her growing paranoid about her choices, would probably accidentally sus her out as a two-faced little cretin.
Someone's been reading the Overlord light novel lol
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I was just about to say that Anon's probably gonna take one look at cozy Glow and smell the deceit radiating off of her.
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Would you believe that I haven't, and only watched most of the first season?
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fair enough, It's basically the only way the writer describes someone dying
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With her empathy powers she going sense something isn't right pretty fast plus a lot humans have a sixth sense when something isn't right about someone. Anon will probably figure out that there is something very wrong with her very quickly but will twilight and the others listen considering cozy fooled everyone into thinking she was just a sweet innocent little filly who didn't have a mean bone in her body when the truth was the opposite. Plus they tend to see anon as a kid a lot of the time when they are more mature than those around them sometimes.
I wonder if Anon is going to catch Cozy Glow... Also, I guess that the friendship between Anon and the crusaders is unstable, even if Anon don't know that when they managed to see it was wrong they were blackmailed. I also wonder what is going to happen at the other side of the mirror, more so with those that put Anon to the hospital, if they will be left alone and be forgotten or put to jail, and if Anon will be forced to go to trial to testify
I don't know if it is going to be adressed, but i worry for human lightning dust.
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I know I was fooled.
I knew from the start that Cozy Glow was going to turn out to be evil, but I thought she was Chrysalis in disguise. I was severely disappointed in the fact that she wasn't.
I'm proud of Anon for wanting a therapist
Well that was awesome ch ty can't wait 4 more
Cozy is going to make an argument against runic magic, won't be surprised for Gun Magic Control lobbyists demanding for, heavy regulations
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That's gonna be a very difficult argument for anypony to be making since rune depictions and their explanations are available in every library, every school, and modeling clay is easily available to everypony for all manner of artistic endeavors and more. For all we know marker on cardboard is good enough for producing magic discs. I'd like to see anypony try and lobby against what amounts to teaching foals how to read and write.
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Forget Cozy. Clearly the unicorn supremacists among the nobility are going to argue that. Only they can have magic, and anybody else should be resgulated into the ground.
This chapter is pretty good. Lengthy and interesting. Though I do find some small aspects not quite there yet, I still find it good enough.
Specifically, I am referring to how the "annoying/joke" characters are still portrayed. This is a hard sell to anyone who watches the show, but Blueblood shouldn't be treated as that one annoying guy that people hates. At least, all the time. My reason for this comes from one of the IDW's comic publication, Friends Forever 26, (SPOILER) where Blueblood's vain attitude is backed up by his ability as a great diplomat.
In it, Prince Shining finds him insufferable like Rarity did. But this time, they are on a diplomatic mission to the most volatile creatures they recently made friends with: the Yaks. Long story short, after Shining almost caused another war just like his family member did, Blueblood came back from the detour that Shining sent him on and smoothed things over. In fact, Blueblood even made them cordial in seconds.
So in all honesty, I hope you at least give one positive character interactions to characters you deem to be the target of jokes or annoyance. I like that Anon at least gave his cake to the prince. I don't like to see a failed side character like that 2 dimensional "Jar Jar Binks" remade.
Typical Blue Balls behavior.
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I recognized her as an evil character from the start and didn't think she was anything other than a filly, but I wasn't expecting her to be the season's villain. I thought she'd be a one episode villain and reveal herself as some precursor to the actual villain
Anon: "I'm guessing your Sombra, huh?"
Sombra: "Correct, green child."
Anon: "Uh-huh....*scamppers away while throwing fireballs*"
Excellent chapter. A real gut punch, then uplift, of emotions.
Thank god the Equestria Girls story arc is freaking over! Do you realize that it goes from chapter 20 to chapter 29 Its literally nine boring chapters long! The only thing that actually happens in those nine chapters is that he gets knocked out by the lockers. Everything else is him just puttering around the school.
Monk
"if Celestia is the nation’s mother, then Luna is its bitter aunt who hangs around renaissance fairs and World War II reenactments." -Some Dickhead
Gabby gums episode exists Anon (Ponyville Confidential). Pony crusaders are gonna be up to some mischief for sure. Let's hope they don't go as far as their human counterparts.
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Just read the whole chapter. Anon's reaction is as much as I've expected.
Those maids... I- i might be wrong, but i feel like they're based off of Rem and Ram. The only difference is that Natural Talent still has a horn. This has got to be deliberate, right?
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Yep! I was wondering if anyone was gonna sus that out.
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Plus unlike their counterparts they had originally planned on 1 silly story but rarity told them to keep going and with everyone eating it up they got the message it was okay to gossip. When the fallout came they took the whole blame even though it wasn't all their fault considering if children are encouraged to do the wrong thing can we honestly blame them when they do it.
finally can read this chapter great chapter
Can't believe it took me til now to get that the maids are ponified versions of Ram and Rem.
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To be fair, early on, it wasn't as hamfisted, more of a subtle reference.
Man, must've changed the definition of 'curb stomp' while I was asleep.
Didn't know it meant,"Barely winning but still getting disabled, from a fight stacked so far in my favor, it's a miracle I fucked it up so bad"
If that's a 'curb stomp' win, I don't want to know what 'losing' looks like.
Oh gods it's Rem and Ram isn't it
YES. SPARKY SPARKY BOOM PONE
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It's quite alarming how much time she spends healing in comparison to time spent doing.
THIS IS SO SAD
HOW IS THIS SO SAD
THIS MUCH SAD SHOULD BE ILLEGAL
Ok, it got less sad and more funny as it went on. That was great XP