The Sun Horse found me at the verge of death, and through rudimentary communication offered to save me. I should have read the fine print. Now I'm bitter, small, and possess an underdeveloped frontal lobe. Why does she want me to learn 'friendship'?
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I hope when the truth comes out she chews them out something fierce. The cmcs and the rainbooms need to be chewed out for their behavior.
Nice chapter.
Nice
Now to see if the CMC are smart enough in this story to know when to get out before the ship sinks
I wonder if Anonymous ever wished she was able to swear at people over the microphone to an entire school back when she was Nemo.
It does seem like Anon-A-Miss is a lot more malicious and mean spirited than it was in the comic. It also doesn't help that by this point the culprits wouldn't be confessing out of a sense of guilt but rather because they were about to be caught.
The students actually, physically assaulting each other is a big escalation that should result in suspension or expulsion from the school.
If it weren't for things in Canterlot High usually being brushed under the rug to hide the existence of magic, I would say that it's likely that people would be considering filing lawsuits and criminal charges.
That ending is fu**ing gold.
Now that's how you end a chapter.
great chapter
I really hope the trio gets truly traumatised. The comic didn't do the punishment justice even though they are doing community work. This sound be grounds for expulsion or at least a black mark in their school record.
Anon's announcement is not enough to get them to surrender themselves. It all depends if the account goes silent and they go into hiding or they up it's ante because they are panicking.
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The trio do deserve to be chewed out over this, but the punishment should be in proportion. They are just dumb kids after all, and might not have realized things were getting outright violent.
The Mane Five do deserve a disappointed look and guilt trip over what they did.
The student body needs to be held accountable for their actions, especially the ones who did resort to violence. The assault might even prompt the threat of police intervention, and doing something to prevent that sort of thing from happening again.
This should be a wake-up call to teachers as well, and we might want to see some of those 'call everyone into the auditorium for a lecture' things to cover suicide prevention, cyber-bullying, etc.
Yes, Anon. Humans are fair game. Proceed with the plan of burning Lightning into Dust.
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Maybe at first they couldn't see how bad it was but they could see how upset everyone was and how ugly things were getting after they got going but they chose not think about anyone besides themselves. They are old enough to understand empathy and make smart decisions.
I imagine that last sentence was made with her fingers slowly curled around the microphone like Rambo and using a gravely batmare voice. “… Your mother’s a 304… I’m comin’ for you!”
(Well... I hope Lightning Dust suffers horribly. As well as "Anon-A-Miss"... I always get an immense sense of satisfaction out of the punishment of the guilty parties in these things. And both Applejack and Rainbow Dash ALSO deserve some punishment. A LOT of punishment. Dang it Anon-A-Miss storylines get my blood burning...)
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Supposedly nonbinary/gender fluid, but I really don't know how that's supposed to work exactly.
That was a good chapter with a hilarious ending. Now we just need to see if the culprit comes out or if they just keep making trouble.
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Pay em to act like a guy? Then their a guy. Pay them to act like a girl? Then their a girl. I don't know if they never cared to begin with, but I think they said it was what they had to do to survive that cemented it.
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That makes sense
Thanks for chapter
God I love that ending!
Hm. While things are going well for the investigation, I'm seeing a lot of dominoes line up in the background for another looming issue. Namely, I think something is trying to influence Anon into filling the Emerald-shaped hole in the world. Either some magic force or Real Emerald's ghost or something else. We've had foreign-yet-familiar memories invade while running, an emotional breakdown over a song about loss, and now I fear that a significant blow to the head has rattled Anoymous enough to let this influencing force kick it up a notch (notably from the confusion over their name and the sudden outfit change. Name me a movie where a character suddenly decides to slick back their hair and there's not some mind shenanigans going on)
On a larger scale I also predict that the original human Emerald Flicker might have been genuinely trans and that lead to her death, either through self harm or an assault gone too far. That would certainly shake up a community enough that no one even wants to talk about it. It's a tragic and dark revelation, but would line up with the breadcrumbs I'm seeing.
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I have my own worry. That when Emerald Flicker's mom arrives at the school, Anon will see her and think she's the spitting image of what Nemo's mother looked like when she was alive, minus the green skin.
The school seems awfully lackadaisical about this matter, given that a minor was a victim of assault and was left with a concussion. At the bare minimum, you would expect them to make sure a member of the faculty escorted her everywhere after that to ensure it couldn't happen again.
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That would certainly make that meeting traumatizing for the both them.
That would also bring up some worrying implications.
inb4 that was rainbow dash who punched anon
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Considering the past 20+ chapters, they'll probably get a minor punishment as Anon gets tormented a little further, Anon will start to have a massive call out rant and then end it prematurely after three sentences, and then it'll go back to the status quo of everyone being an oblivious douche to Anon as they're forced to be treated like a toddler for the next century.
I straight up can't tell if this author just thinks writing people to be this terrible is normal or if they're actively trying to make everyone insufferable. I assume they just don't see anything wrong with everyone being this terrible since Anon still hasn't acknowledged Human Celestia and Luna just letting a student get suicide baited, Pony Celestia shoving them in a crate, their bodyguards sandbagging so hard they got abducted by someone they knew was coming to abduct them, or any of the other moments of everyone acting so demented they'd make Cartman from South Park telling them to take some meds.
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One the human Celestia and Luna aren't miracle workers. Dealing with the fallout from everyone that is hurt because of this plus their usual duties they can't keep an eye on everyone. The ponies could be a little nicer to the guy considering he she used to be an adult and have shown that they are pretty brave.
The closing sentence, gold
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They aren't keeping an eye on anyone. They have no clue who is causing this, have punished nobody for repeated assaults, vandalized property, and suicide baiting, and aren't even collecting security footage anyone because someone covered up the camera and nobody's even bothered to clean it up. I remember back in High School students started vandalizing the boys bathroom for fun and the principal immediately started sitting in a folding chair in the hallway while doing his paperwork just to see who was going in or out of there until people realized they couldn't get away with it anymore and stopped. My school was objectively one of the lowest rated in my entire country (maybe even state). My suspension of disbelief for how bad Principal Celestia is at her job draws a line at "takes assault less seriously than my lazy principal took a paper towel dispenser getting broken three times in a row".
Poster in hallway getting torn up? Understandable. Desk getting graffiti'd ? Kind of hard to pull off if the teacher gives even the smallest amount of fucks, but still doable. Security camera getting covered up? Yeah, no school would let that fly for longer than a minute (both security and the secretary for the principal have full access to a live feed of it and would notice instantly). Student locker getting the everloving shit beat out of it while also graffiti'd? Not only would that make any sane principal and janitorial staff go on a bender but they'd instantly sniff out who could've done it by going "ok, who wasn't in class from X to Y amount of time" by looking at sign-off sheets or just asking around.
This story's going so far into "everyone is an awful scumbag and nobody cares" territory that it's starting to feel like a parody.
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True they don't know the source but they have to deal with every student in the school who causes trouble and not just anon a miss. They are probably trying to get it shut down but red tape is making it harder for that to happen.
Love the end.
Well, at least did not say "Your mom is a bitch"
Also, wonder how the rune experiments are going to go
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I agree with you. Like, what the hell, heroes? When I punched a bully so hard he got concussion and I had my finger broken, the school raised so much fuss about it, and we both were chewed on so hard by the principal you'd think we were a gum.
And here, the duo's jus like 'ignore it and it will go away'.
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Ha! It happens to all of us. I just had to comment on it since it literally made me burst out laughing when I read it. I can just picture principal Luna trying to bloodlessly overthrow the Canterlot government as the EqG version of her nightmare moon attempt at deposing Celestia and Anon somehow being okay with that.
Never read the original comic, since I wasn't really into the eqg stuff or the comics in general. That said, having the culprits spoiled in the comments is slightly annoying. Guess I shouldn't have read them all.
That said, great chapter. The ineptitude of the staff that people have pointed out is very real, here, but I'm honestly not that surprised. Seems like something that might happen to fit the story in a kids-media-based fiction/spinoff/AU. It didn't detract from my own enjoyment of the story.
I've enjoyed reading this a lot more than I thought I would. I initially put it off because I don't like "Anonymous" stories, but there're precious few propper anon-filly stories, and even fewer that have genuine reasons for the various character quirks and the name. I'm also really liking the whole mystery with Emerald. But I have to ask, if harmony was responsible for the potential merging of the two, why would it then say that her death was none of Nemo/Anon's business? Seems mighty irresponsible to me. (<--For context, readers, this refers to a "dream" sequence from a few chapters ago involving a certain other green filly. If you know what I mean, it's safe to read. If not, feel free to skip until you're caught up. There was no need for this disclaimer other than to warn the terminally curious (like myself) what might be spoiled upon reveal.)
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Preach
At this point Chrysalis, as in the half deranged hangry version, would make a better authority figure than half of everyone in this story with an ounce of it.
Twilight: getting a concussion doesn't grant you more memories! That's not how this works!
That last line though. 😂
Awww I love that! Flicker! So cute!