Outside of Ponyville, in an apparently empty field, all was quiet. However, without warning, a muffled buzzing penetrated the silent air, slowly increasing in volume. As it did, a light began to appear out of nowhere, slowly opening to reveal a hole in the middle of the air. The buzzing turned to an unearthly and loud roar, which was abruptly silenced as the hole swiftly shut. In its place were two ponies.
One of them, a dark red pegasus with a brown mane and tail, was stretching his body as though he had just woken up. The other, a light blue unicorn with a green mane and tail, was more focused on looking around at where they had appeared. He sighed.
“Could you have made that thing any louder?” he sarcastically asked the other stallion.
“Hey, it sounds cool!” the pegasus responded defensively.
“We’re supposed to be keeping a low profile, Arrell. I tell you this every time we go somewhere new, but you always end up screwing it up.” The unicorn sighed again. “Where are we?”
Arrell, as the pegasus was evidently called, looked around. “Think we’re near Ponyville. Convenient!” He started walking. “Come on, Yah! There’s fighters to find!”
Stopping briefly to facehoof, Yah-Shee began following his partner towards the nearby town.
In front of them, a small pink unicorn emerged from the forest to their left. She squinted, her eyes adjusting to the sudden increase in light, turning towards the stallions. She blinked, staring blankly at them for a few moments. “...are you two new here? Because I’ve never seen you before...”
The two looked down at the filly, confused. “Uh...new, yeah, we’ll go with that,” Arrell replied hastily.
“Yay! New friends!” She giggled, skipping up to them and holding out a hoof. “I’m Berry Pinch! What are your names?”
Yah extended his hoof to meet hers. “I’m Yah-Shee and he’s Arrell.” He motioned to the pegasus. “It’s nice to meet you.”
“It’s nice to meet you, too!” She tilted her head to the side, looking at them for a moment. “...why are you out here near the Everfree?”
“Just...sightseeing,” the blue stallion answered nervously, shrugging.
Pinchy laughed, shaking her head. “There’s less dangerous places to sightsee at, you two!”
“Well...why are you out here?” Arrell interjected.
“Oh, I just returned from a sparring match with a friend.” She shrugged a bit. “No big deal, really.”
Yah blinked. “A...sparring match? What kind?”
“The kind where you wear harnesses to keep from harming the other too much.” She looked at them, curious. “Why do you ask? Did you wanna try it out?”
Yah and Arrell looked at each other. They hadn’t heard of this type of sparring before, but they had other matters to attend to. “Maybe later,” the unicorn replied.
“Right now, we need to get to Ponyville.” Arrell gestured to the town a short distance away.
The filly grinned, bouncing in place in excitement. “Can I come with you? I’m heading the same way, after all!”
Yah couldn’t help but smile. “Sure.” He began walking again, but at a slower pace so as to make sure the filly could keep up. Arrell began walking as well.
Pinchy squealed in happiness and hurried over to them, walking into town with her two new friends. Yah found himself chuckling at her adorableness, even as Arrell rolled his eyes.
A familiar gray mare sat outside the cafe, waiting for somepony. She turned her gaze to the streets, keeping an eye out for him.
Her quarry appeared down the street, a thoughtful look on his green-furred face. The stallion spotted her and raised a hoof in greeting as he headed toward her.
She nodded in reply, smiling genially. “Good afternoon, Rhino. How has your fifth day here been?” The sophisticated pony waved down a waiter for them.
He smiled and took a seat. "Thankfully quiet. Pinchy hung around a bit this morning, but she's off with her friends now. I'm glad every pony seems to be doing fine after the incident." He frowned momentarily before putting back on a smile.
“Agreed.” She looked at the white mare that approached, surprised. “Hello, there. Did you start working here today?”
The mare blinked, nodding slowly. “I did. How did you know?”
“I come here almost every day. I know the names of all the waiters and waitresses by heart.” Octavia chuckled, shaking her head and turning back to her menu. “I’ll have the ratatouille and a nice Earl Grey.”
The unicorn took this down on a small pad and turned to the stallion, smiling nervously. “And for you, sir?”
He perused the menu before looking back at her. "The garlic alfredo sauce over pasta with milk as a drink, please." The green pony levitated the menu over to her as he continued. "And relax, you're doing great."
She sheepishly nodded, taking their menus and heading into the kitchen.
The sophisticated mare leaned forward, smirking slightly. “Surely the ‘incident’ isn’t what’s bothering you right now. I can see something else is bothering you, Rhino.”
He sighed. "I'm not sure I know specifically what it is... The invasion itself is more like one big nightmare that I'm sure I'll have comfortably suppressed in a day or two, but..." He massaged the bridge of his nose with a hoof. "I'm sure I'll get over it eventually. I'd rather it not ruin my time with friends."
“If you say so.” The unicorn returned with their drinks, putting them on the table and quickly leaving. The sophisticated mare picked up her teacup, sipping it slowly. “To be honest, I almost assumed that Chrysalis’s words got to you.”
Rhino crossed his forelegs as he closed his eyes in thought. His drink floated up and he took a drink before setting it back down, but not letting it go with his magic. "Perhaps it was that, a comment from the first lives I've ever taken telling me I am just like them... I admit while I usually try to see both sides, this one eludes me. I believe I fear that if I understand them, then I will lose the lack of feeling I have for their deaths..."
“That may be true, but understanding your foe is another way to predict what they will do.” She shrugged, sipping at her tea once more. “Surely figuring out whether a pony’s reasons are just won’t make it harder to fight them, right?”
The unicorn stallions scoffed. “Octavia, you fought me yourself. Even up until the very end, I never went as far as I did with the changelings, because I knew through it all, you were my friend. I didn’t want to hurt you. My empathy is not easy to turn off.”
“But they aren’t your friends. Even if you understood their reasons for fighting, you wouldn’t personally know them.” She chuckled, watching as the waitress came with their orders. “Thank you, Miss...?”
“Angelic Grace, but please, call me Angel.” She bowed, carefully pulling her blonde mane out of her face. “Enjoy your meal.”
Rhino breathed in the smell of his food with a smile. “Wonderful. To your statement though... I suppose you’re right, even if it is not so simple for me in practice. What would you suggest?” He sampled the pasta before adding pepper to the whole thing.
“Well, first, I have to know - what did Chrysalis say that made you so conflicted?” She leaned forward, tenting her hooves together.
He took another bite before leaning back as he looks skyward. “Her comment on how we are the same because she too uses her power to protect those she cares about. It’s simply hits so close to home that I essentially have myself mentally blocked from making connections from that statement for fear of her being right.”
“If she truly cared about them, she wouldn’t try taking over a populated area.”
Octavia blinked in confusion, turning towards their waitress. “...I’m sorry?”
Angel froze, blushing brightly. “...um...I mean...” She quickly resumed picking up dirty dishes, trying to pretend she didn’t say anything.
Rhino looked at the waitress as well and motioned for her to continue. “No please, go on, it’s nice to hear another’s opinion.”
The mare gulped, looking at the two of them. With a sigh, she nodded. “...surely there were better ways for them to get a place to live, right? They didn’t have to invade another’s home...”
The stallion nodded. “A very good point, but why would she consider this plan then? It doesn’t make sense.”
Angel bit her lip, thinking about it. “...maybe one of her council - or whatever equivalent she had - influenced her decision. That would be why she thought her cause was just, right?”
“Surely she’d know better than to listen to just one other, right?” Octavia quirked an eyebrow, unconvinced.
“She probably would.” The blonde unicorn sighed, continuing to pick up the dishes. “Unless they were also her lover, or something. Love makes ponies do crazy things.”
Rhino nodded again as he took another bite. “All too true, and possibly more so for a species that lives off it. Perhaps I worried too much about the similarities between us. She chose an aggressive approach that had already failed once before, she failed to learn from her mistakes. Mayhap you are right Octavia, instead of comparing us, I can simply think of her motivations as information. Nice, neutral, non-self-torturing information.”
The sophisticated mare giggled, nodding slightly. “That’s the spirit.” She turned to the road and saw a pink filly, with two stallions behind her. “...who are those ponies with Pinchy?”
The unicorn’s head whipped around at her question. His eyebrow quirked at the new ponies. “I would like to know that as well...”
The filly saw them and smiled, rushing over. “Sensei! Rhino!” She turned and motioned to the two new stallions, smiling brightly. “Meet Yah-Shee and Arrell! They’re here to sightsee!”
Yah and Arrell waved as they approached. “Hello there,” the unicorn greeted.
Octavia chuckled, shaking her head. “You picked some time to come here. We just got through dealing with a changeling invasion.” She sipped her tea, glancing over at the filly. “Pinchy, what did I tell you about staring?”
The filly snapped to attention, tearing her gaze away from the waitress. “Sorry, sensei. Anyways, I found these two while returning from my session with Vinyl!”
The gray mare nodded, sipping her tea as she looked at the stallions. “Certainly new ponies.” She glanced momentarily at their flanks. “...pardon me if I’m being rude, but what do your cutie marks mean?”
“Uh...bit of a long story,” Yah answered nervously. He didn’t want to get into their jobs; it would just lead to more questioning.
Rhino enjoyed his pasta as he looked at the newcomers. He stopped eating for a moment to say something. “You don’t have to say if you don’t want to.”
Octavia, realizing she’d forgotten about her food, started to eat. She made sure she could still hear what was being said, though.
The white unicorn stepped up to the stallions, smiling kindly. “Hello, gentlecolts. May I help you with anything?”
“We’re fine, thank you,” Yah responded.
“As you wish. If you do need anything, don’t hesitate to ask.” She gave a small wink before returning to her duties.
Arrell smirked at Yah and made a quiet tiger-growling noise. He received a deadpanned glare in response.
Pinchy frowned at the blonde mare, eyes narrowed a bit. She blinked, quickly turning away as she remembered her teacher’s words. “So, Yah-Shee, Arrell, would you like to meet some of my other friends?” She smiled brightly, trying to forget about the waitress.
“Sure,” the blue stallion said with a nod. “And you can just call me Yah.”
“Great!” She turned to Octavia, bowing slightly. “See you later, sensei! I’ve got to take these two to Vinyl and Enigma!” She rushed off, smiling brightly at them as they followed her.
The sophisticated mare stared after them in silence. “...I guess they’re harmless enough.”
The green stallion finished his meal. “So it seems, still, I find it odd how quickly she makes friends with random adults she met in the middle of nowhere.”
“I have to agree.” She paused, looking as if she was about to say something before shaking her head. “I sometimes worry about her, but she can handle herself.” She stood up, putting a few bits on the table. “While this has been fun, I don’t know whether or not I can add onto what Miss Angel said.” She glanced around, confused. “...where did she go, anyways?”
He looked around as well. “To get the check maybe?”
“Maybe.” Octavia shrugged, turning to leave. “If there’s anything else you feel like saying, or you just want to chat some more, you know where to find me.”
“Will do!” He waved to her as he slowly finished his drink before saying out loud, “Well... now what?” The sound of flapping wings behind him answered the question.
A gray mare skidded to a stop in front of him. She beamed looking around happily. “I didn’t crash this time! I’m getting better!”
Rhino chuckles as the pegasus celebrates. “Were you aiming for anything?”
“Yep!” She reached into her saddlebag and pulled out a muffin. “This is for you!” She blinked, thinking a bit. “...wait, was it the muffin, or a package?”
He shrugged while smiling teasingly. “It could be both, or it could be neither. Maybe you just wanted to visit a friend.”
She blushed softly, rubbing the back of her neck. “You got me!” She giggled, walking up next to him. “I wanted to thank you. Dinky’s so happy now that she can do magic!”
The stallion waved off the praise. “I only taught her the one spell and gave a little general advice, I’m sure she already knew a bit before I came along. No need to thank me, it was my pleasure... Plus those muffins of yours that I was allowed to eat were ample compensation.”
“I’m glad you liked my muffin!” Some stallions that are passing by laughed at this, causing Ditzy to become confused. “I don’t know why ponies laugh when I say that...”
He shrugged. “I can’t imagine why. They’re delicious and you’re nice, there’s no reason not to try them. They’re probably just being silly.”
The gray pegasus giggled, shrugging a bit. “You’re right. Besides, I don’t normally listen to what other ponies have to say due to...well, you know.” She smiled softly, motioning towards her chest.
He tilted his head. “I... don’t think I know what you mean. I can understand not listening to mean ponies, but I don’t see what they would criticize.”
She shook her head, nudging a necklace out of her fur. “I mean my husband.” She pops open the locket, gazing fondly at the picture inside. “The Doctor - I mean, Time Turner, has always been a little out there. Ponies tend to joke about that, but I’ve long forgotten what they said.” She blinked, looking at the picture, then up at the stallion. “...but, like I said, it doesn’t matter.” She quickly tucked the heart-shaped locket back into her fur.
“Alright then, glad you don’t let it get to you.” He put a small pile of bits on the table and stood up, stretching. “Well, do you want to do something? Or just walk and talk?”
“Actually, I came here to invite you to my little muffin’s birthday party!” She reached back into one of her saddlebags, pulling out a manila-colored envelope. “She turns nine, today!”
He took the envelope, slit it open, and read the card quickly. He chuckled at the design. “Cute. Hmm... I’ll definitely have to get a nice gift for her...”
“Great!” Ditzy giggled, pointing forward. “It’s going to be at Sugarcube Corner, and all her little friends are going to be there!” She blinked, squinting slightly before turning around and pointing once more. “Sorry, wrong direction. Sometimes it’s hard to remember the layout with all the travelling I do.”
“Heh, I’ll be there.”
“Perfect!” She rushed off, calling over her shoulder. “I’ll let Pinkie know to set up for one more!” She crashed headlong into a lamppost but quickly got up, shaking it off as if nothing had happened. “Oops! My bad!” She resumed running, leaving the stallion standing there with the waitress, who had returned to pick up the bill.
The white mare smiled at him, taking the bits graciously. “Thank you for eating at-” She stopped mid-sentence, looking down at the money. “...sir? Y-you kind of...overpaid...t-this is too much, even for a tip...”
Rhino turned around and smiled at her. "No such thing as too big for a tip. It was excellent service and your contribution to the conversation was very enlightening. It's all well deserved."
She looked up at him, then back to the bits, squirming a bit. “...i-if you say so, sir...” She turned and headed over to the kitchen, muttering softly to herself.
He watched as she walked off, muttering once she was out of range. "She was nice, something was off though... I'm sure it was nothing." He turned and walked off to get his gift for the party.
I like this chapter! It's nice to see the main characters interacting without a rap battle to interrupt it! NOT THAT I DONT LIKE THE RAP BATTLES OF COURSE! I really do!
Yeah Chrissy won ! And now she is dead.
Remember folks , winning is bad for your health.
As a side note , I wonder how cool a rap battle between Littlepip and Blackjack would be...
The Death Battle of MLP meets the Epic Rap Battles of History of MLP. This can only end well.
2850856 Please, with Yah-Shee and Arrell rap battles are pointless, it is now A DEATH BATTLE!!!!
2850899 2850931 Oh, the hilarity of the accidental semi-foreshadowing...
what an awesome idea - i might have to make some music for this story lolz
unless you have some music linked already.... naaahh im gonna make some
So I have to ask, what made you decide to stop making this about Rap Battles and more about some hodge podge plot? Seriously this used to be about rap battles, now OCs are dropping in out of nowhere. If you want to do this, I recommend making an entirely new story with your idea in mind and leave this story for its original purpose, ponies and etc. rap battling.
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"What? It's always been about story - just one focused on the rap battles. We just decided to make it more interesting. Besides, it's something for you all while we come up with more rap battles."
I think I've seen that change-I mean unicorn before. (CoughAngelIsAChangelingCough)
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Link please.
2851186 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/24953/death-battle-equestria
I can't wait for the changelings to regroup and get some revenge. After all, now we have seen who the real monsters are.
2851152 What story? There'd be a random problem to bring the two opponents together, a rap battle between the two, and then a victor. There wasn't any story till you brought your OC in way down the line and got him involved with Vinyl Scratch. If you're honestly having a hard time coming up with a story, don't start throwing OCs around like beads at a Mardi Gras parade. Just update when you do have a chapter, start another story if you want so you're not trying to mash one into this one. You have a good thing here, you're only going to drag it into the mud if you continue down this path you're going. This is going to turn from something fun and cool to read into a puzzle with no pieces matching up: unrecognizable.
Featured AGAIN!!! /) good job dude!
Recovering from an attack of shapeshifters is never easy.
Glad to see RLYoshi's still in relatively good health.
And why am I suddenly suspicious about a waitress?
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Thanks.
2851364Do you want your OC in this story too?
He's Yah-Shee and I'm Arrell!
And it's our job to analyze their weapons, armor, and skills to decide who would win an Equestrian Death Battle!
This next arc will be exciting. I can tell. I will be expecting ponies to Rap Battle while they Death Battle! P.S. Rapp Battle and Death Battle are verbs now. Fo realz.
2851738 I doubt it. He just doesn't like change.
2851738 I agree with him, im tired of getting an update for it and it only being nothing but anything but rap battle. I know its hard but make a new story with this stuff
2852654 I take it you want something similar to No Longer an Enigma. Which has been a while since it last updated, but that can be expected with Rarity as company to talk to E, and knowing those two, it can get really weird and complicated.
2851738 No, because of two things. The first is that this story isn't supposed to be about OCs, it's supposed to be about rap battling. Second is because if I actually got an OC of mine into this story it would mean I would have to come up with raps and I can't rap to save my life.
2853363Sheeit, you never know! Give it a try, even if it's only 8 bars.
And yea, it's true that there is an unusual amount of OC's in this story, but think of it this way: Enigma just wants to entertain the readers, just like how ERB wants to entertain it's viewers. However, they too need to take their time when wanting to do a rap battle, and just like how Enigma has a life, you need to be patient or you can find another rapping story. It's like filler in anime, they step off the main story and make another temporary short story to entertain the viewers in order for them to get back on track, man.
Look, I don't like waiting either, but ya need to be patient. Unless, you know, you want any commenters to do a rap battle right here and now.
Slice of Life chapters rock!
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Sompony rang fer a rap battle?
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2853494 My problem isn't with the waiting, it's what he's trying to give us while we're waiting. I understand that there's a life outside of Fimfiction and everyone is entitled to it. What I'm trying to understand is why he's suddenly trying to throw a plot in on top of everything else. I imagine it's hard enough to come up with good raps but to think of a good storyline while trying to come up with good raps? I would understand if he would come up with a new story and say 'hey, while I'm thinking of the next rap battle I decided to make a cool story for you guys to read while I'm working on it'. You follow me?
2855670You're100% right about coming out with good raps, because believe me it's hard.
As for the whole switxh up of the storyline and such, i'll admit that your correct.
2855670 You DO realize that doing that wouldn't help, right? If he made a whole new story for these bonus chapters, it'd only be a hindrance, for many reasons.
1. If he made a whole new story, people would have to favourite that story too, and keep an eye on both stories. That doesn't sound like a problem, but trust me, on the Internet, people bitch about that sort of thing all the time and ask "Why couldn't you just keep them all in one story/on one channel/in one area/whatever?!" So this is cutting down on the hate he'd get.
2. By keeping the non-rap battle chapters in this story, readers actually know what the story canon is. Don't understand? Here's an example. Let's say a new character is introduced in a non-rap battle chapter, which would get published under whatever the new story is. Later on, that character is in a rap battle, which would get published under the rap battle story. People would have no idea who the character is, because they didn't read the other story, because they didn't care for it, because they just wanted the rap battles. (Again, yes, there are people like that.)
3. Last but not least...let me just point something out here. You are complaining about being given free content instead of no content. That is literally what you're doing here. You're complaining because there's extra story arcs being written in between rap battles to keep things interesting. So you're saying you would rather this be a story with nothing but rap battles, with various schedule gaps and hiatuses, instead of being a story with rap battles that are sometimes paused in favour of actual story.
When it comes right down to it, you are asking for less content. If you want that, just stop reading the story, or ignore the non-rap battle chapters. Chapters that have rap battles are identified as such - not in the author's notes; not in the chapter; but in the title. When there's a new chapter, if it doesn't say "Rap Battle # [so-and-so]", if you just want rap battles, just mark that chapter as read and ignore it. Nothing changes for you aside from you have to spend five extra seconds of your time to click something. And considering you're choosing to spend several minutes of your time writing these complaints, I assume you have that time to spare.
And before you say "He can just make the bonus chapters a separate story", let me redirect you back up to points 1 and 2 I made. Those still apply. In the long run, it is more efficient for everybody involved to have the non-rap battle chapters be published under this story and just labelled as not having a rap battle in them. Plain and simple.
2856012 You make a good point but forget one teensy little detail. I'm not saying make a new story for the bonus content I'm saying make a new story entirely with a different plot so there would be no need to try and mash one into this.
It would be true that some people would complain but that would be a minority of viewers. This story was first introduced for one thing: rap battles. And people enjoyed it, people loved it because it was something entirely different. There would be a smidgen of plot for future rap battles but that was few and far between. Now this story has turned from its roots and is branching off in an entirely new direction that may negatively impact how people see this story. I would rather have just straight rap battles and fewer updates rather than more updates and a plot thrown together at the last minute to try and appease a few viewers. This is his story, why should he have to cave into the viewers demands on updating this story? If he has nothing, then he has nothing. He shouldn't have to go out of his way to please people like you.
2856193 I get what you mean, but now that raises a different problem: you're asking him to separate the two ongoing plotlines into entirely different stories. I can understand wanting that, but doing that sort of thing is a lot harder than you'd think, and it would truly be better for everyone in the long run to keep it as it is.
2856217 No, I'm not. What I'm trying to say is make an entirely new story, one that has absolutely nothing to do with this one. No references, no quotes, no guest star appearances, etc. A new story with a new, entirely different, plot. If you have trouble with something then you find a different project to work on until you feel up to returning to the first one.
2856231 ...so you're telling him to make an entirely new story and change the way he writes this one, just because you don't like the way he's writing this one? Okay, no. Sorry, but...no. Just stop.
2856290 No, I am not telling I am asking. I am not ordering I am suggesting. I am not demanding I am encouraging. Here's what I want you to do, and pay attention because you seem to have a bit of trouble paying attention, go back and check my previous posts and tell me how many of them say 'I demand you do what I say because I am obviously important'. From what I'm seeing, that's what you're doing. You want him to do what you want and keep posting chapters that have little to do with the story just so you can have what you want. Before you start pointing fingers and screaming at the top of your lungs, how about making sure you aren't doing the exact same thing?
2856617 Except I never said I wanted that. I have yet to state my opinion on the matter; all I've done is explain what the most logical and efficient way around this would be. For all you know, I agree with you and just don't like the way you're going about suggesting it.
And yes, I misunderstood, and for that I apologize. I took what you were saying as a trollish demand, when it was just a suggestion, and I came off as an asshole trying to explain to you the problems with what you were suggesting.
I don't want this to become a huge argument. The author is a friend of mine, and I was just sticking up for him when I thought he was being hounded. I apologize for my earlier responses, and while I do still stand by what I said about the story being fine as it is, I also see what you were trying to say. I suggest, to avoid cluttering the comments further with an argument, we just say we have our own opinions on the matter and leave it be.
Besides, this IS the author's decision in the end what happens. Bringing an alternative to his attention like you have is the best you can really do; it's like voting for president. You've contributed, now all you can do is wait for the result.
2856652 Damn, you apologized. Wasn't planning on that. I was ready to call you coattail riding jerkoff using him to promote your story through your OCs. When I first saw this story, I was excited. This was something new and different, it was a curveball in the playing field of stories. Now suddenly things change, with OCs coming in and a plot with it, I guess I was just really disappointed to see him start being like all the other authors. I understand writing raps are hard, I can't do any at all, and when I see a professional who can starting to falter I get a bit worried. When I have a problem with something I'm working on, I tend to go do something else till I get the spark back to continue what I was doing before. That's what I was always trying to say, and I guess I apologize as well for being a jackass as well. I have trouble sometimes getting my point across and it juts really frustrates me sometimes to the point of lashing out at people.
2856724 Trust me, I don't ride coattails and I hate people who do. My OCs are in this story because we're friends and we thought it'd be fun. But that isn't really the point here.
Really, we were both kind of in the wrong, but at the same time not. Guess that's what happens when two people try to get their separate points across through just text.
I'm going to stop replying here; you can say something else if you want, and I'll probably read it, but I'm going to move on. Making enemies is something I hate, so I'd prefer if we could leave this as neutral as possible.
2856748 Maybe not enemies but two guys who butt heads together for differing ideals. And honestly compared to most arguments this is the more ideal outcome. We may not have any love for each other, but at least we can learn to tolerate each other and at the end of that's more than anyone could ask for.
'Dear Princess Celestia,
Today I learned . . .'
2856792 *is sitting in the corner, munching popcorn*
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM! That was a totally unexpected ending.
11/13.
-Jolly Roger
So... Rhino's crazy, those two I SWEAR I've seen before, Dinky has a birthday, Chrysalis is dead (and no one seems to care that a life has been taken ) and we still have, what, 4 months to go? Jeez, at least the changelings got a good break.
I can tell this will be... odd. I say you should make preparations for unforeseen consequences. Good and bad.
2850931 Now to find Superman and Goku to make things complete...
2850899 Rap battles are only detrimental to your health if you're a villain ~C.Spirit
Ha 69
at least we know where nymph 69 is hiding out for the time being
YAY im not the only that thought she was a changling
Looks like I got a lot to read, I have been sooooo busy that I haven't been here for almost a year.
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"Good luck with that, dude. Hope you enjoy the story!~"
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I think the answer is so blindly simple....
Also....2861439King Sombra is suppose to be a necromancer who can cast ressurection spells.
And enigmaMystere, keep doing your thing.
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No. No that's terrible. How, why- that's completely out-of-left-field! And this is a story that runs with... left-fielded-ness!
*opens mouth*
Don't patronize me, Soluna.
*closes mouth*
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"...well, thanks, dude. We appreciate that you didn't think we'd set up this fact in an earlier chapter. We did decide on that. And we are currently having minor issues with the story, at the moment. So yeah."
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Mmmm... issues, you say? Anything I, and by I, I of course of mean the Soluna trio over here, can do to help?
Wait-what?
2923385 I just finish reading all the chapters that I missed. I gotta say this was awesome and I can't wait for more. Also I wanted ask something, my friend is making a funny mlp story and he really needs a editor, could you help him out if your not so busy.
2930935 I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT THE BUCK IS GOING ON IS VINLLY A TIME LORD CLER IT ALL UP PLEASE I AM VARY CONFUSED WITH THE ALPHA UNAVRCES AND THIS DARK FORS AND I WAS CONFUSED WHEN IT WHEN TO THE 4 BATEL SO EXPLAN EVRY THIN FROM THAT PONY AN ON BECAUSE I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT IS GOING ON AND THE Q @A'S VARY CONFUSED