Twiluna Fan(clop?)fic. Twi and Luna magically bound to each other. Gryphons massing at the borders. Chrysalis trying to get back into Equestria. Discord being Discord. Canterlot Nobles trying to tear Princess Twi's authority apart. YAY!
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Oh yes, this will be very good.
Well, the Blues are in for some hell when they cross paths with those reinstated soldiers.
Minor typo, "and a pink scare across", should be "Scar".
Also is it Dart or Dash, "Generals, Dart,", Dart here but Dash in the previous chapter.
4794809 Thanks for spotting the errors. Going back I can see a lot of derps in the previous chapters, gonna go and smooth them out.
This is why you don't upload at 2 in the morning ...
Please give me as much feedback as you think I need, guys and gals, tell me what I'm doing wrong, what derps I'm making, etc etc.
And the story has officially evolved! Thank you for updating so fast and for making the story better and deeper as time went on.
4808589 Actually, I intend to have it as a mash-up of multiple oriental cultures, because that way I can offend everyone equally.
Fuck Yeah.
4809833 BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Also
you are missing the word years between three and ag
that is some impressive gripping power.
You can never be too careful when it comes to cooties, Twilight.