Twiluna Fan(clop?)fic. Twi and Luna magically bound to each other. Gryphons massing at the borders. Chrysalis trying to get back into Equestria. Discord being Discord. Canterlot Nobles trying to tear Princess Twi's authority apart. YAY!
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Man While i love this story it's very hard to follow at times.
there so many threats and atacks from different angles, not sure how this story will go.
I worry about Sunset's friends in the human world and what the Sirens have been up to, and there the element of Generosity which has become corrupt.
Personaly i think the higher powers shoudl come in cursh the element and reforge a new one if possible.
At least do that.
They got enough on thier plate and wodner if Sunset can warn them and plead for help in saving her friends.
Last i really really really REALLY hope...... Sunset can get together with Sci Twi.
Big shipper for that pair!
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Couple of refreshers for readers because THIS THING HAS BEEN GOING ON FOR THREE YEARS.
Seriously, brain, what the heck?
1) The Powers can't actually 'come down' to the level of reality the cast occupies, because the Powers are literally Time, Space, Heat, Cold, Life, Death etc. They'd wipe creation out if they brought their full focus down to that layer of reality, they're just too advanced and cosmically 'big' to do it. Which leads to the next point...
2) The Powers elevate specific mortals who embody concepts that are necessary for the 'Plan' to progress, but again, reaching down to the 'material' layer of reality is an issue for them. Elevating a mortal to an Immortal helps with that, giving the Powers a sort-of translator system/automated assistant in regards to the specific issue the Immortal is created/elevated to deal with. But there's still a helluva lot of problems that makes the exact orders given to the Immortals a little ... fuzzy.
3) The Equestria Girls-reality is having issues right now. Don't forget the temporal dissonance between the two realities means that for Sunset, it's only been three or four weeks here in Equestria while under the effects of the Succuponi possession/mind-fuck. For EQ-World? It's been months.
And yes, that will come back to bite everybody in the plot.
4) All the enemies, threats and sub-plots all tie into each other at some point in history and the overall plot I'm going with. That said, not everything is going to be resolved by the end of Sympathy ... probably half of it at best, before we head into the next Arc.
The element of Magic calling Luna a bitch, that made the rest of my YEAR, thank you good sir, I needed that... also, that's actually an amazing concept- the Element's are sentient, so why can't/haven't they spoken, very intriguing...
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Magic did point out it was 'bending' the rules slightly to talk to Twilight, since they were under orders to not 'speak' to any Bearer who was not also an Immortal, especially since the Elements are given their powers, and mandates, by the Powers themselves.
And rather than reply piece-meal to half a dozen different PMs, Rarity and the Elements will be one of the sub-plots resolved before we go on to the next Arc. I am not leaving her in limbo forever.
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OOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOO!!on EG!!
now I'm really worried for them!!
i hope you will continue the next chapter with the luna and twilight stuff . .
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Yeah, I will be.
What I'm going to do is tease apart the story into two or even three different stories as we end Sympathy and head to into Harmony. Twilight and Luna handling their relationship as things with Canterlot, the Shadow Court, the Changelings, Griffons and the other Element Bearers heat up, their adventures on a global scale will be the 'main' story.
Dappled Light and Scout, along with Rarity's story and the shenanigans of Night Light, Twilight Velvet and Thunderwing with their team of aging assholes will be its own story, but I am intending to interweave the two stories where it makes sense. I could probably divide the 'secondary' story up into multiple different stories, really, which will probably work for me a lot better because I can do a few chapters for each sub-plot and when I hit some writer's block, move on to somebody's else's 'facet' in the overall arc and try to jimmy my brain over the hump.
I STARTED LAUGHING MANIACALLY UGH!!! THE FACT THAT IT SPEAKS SO PROPER AND POLITELY THEN IT JUST SPITS OUT "BITCH"! AN ALL POWERFUL BEING JUST FREAKING CURSED OUT OF ABSOLUTELY NOT WHERE!
The endings always mange to make me feel depressed...