Twiluna Fan(clop?)fic. Twi and Luna magically bound to each other. Gryphons massing at the borders. Chrysalis trying to get back into Equestria. Discord being Discord. Canterlot Nobles trying to tear Princess Twi's authority apart. YAY!
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Huh, didn't expect that!
Good chapter! I want to see what happens with Filthy Rich though... Cliffhanger as usual.
does not sound good
Why is 'cheating' in quotation marks?
Ah, finally. I was somewhat afraid the story had forgotten that Twilight and Luna were more or less the primary characters.
7334849 Forever cliffhangers! But yeah, let's just say I have a couple of twists, some amusing, some sad, for the next chapter.
7335076 Because shape-changing Changelings, that's why.
7335439 Some of the best stories I ever read had whole arcs where the main characters weren't even mentioned once, we got to see the world through the eyes of the antagonists, or even just the background characters, so when the story went back to the main characters, I had a greater grasp of the world around them, how the other people saw them and how their actions shaped the world and were shaped by the world in turn.
7334866 Believe me, the plot is only going to twist from here on out, and I'm not talking about alicorns' twerking ...
7336060 i have only one thing to say about this,
also cmc spear maiden...... i be lieing if i said i was not worry and scared
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Twists are all well and good but will there still be alicorns twerking?
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I'm just gonna find some Gurren Lagann now. I feel sick. WAY TO GO.
Chromatic queen Tiamat and platinum King Bahamut yay dnd knowledge
Hate to break it to you, but the sex in this chapter just doesn't make any physical sense. Male bits don't have the ability to fold like a pretzel, especially on quadrupeds with sheaths!
I'd suggest rewriting this to be somewhat more realistic...