Twiluna Fan(clop?)fic. Twi and Luna magically bound to each other. Gryphons massing at the borders. Chrysalis trying to get back into Equestria. Discord being Discord. Canterlot Nobles trying to tear Princess Twi's authority apart. YAY!
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Sympathy. Resonance. An emotional attachment between ponies, be it familial, intimate or other, I like this mechanic. I came for the romance, but my inner gamer and geek wants to see how that plays out.
I'm definitely keeping an eye on this one, Neckbeard.
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Well, one of the primary 'hooks' of the story is, are you still 'straight' if you fall in-love with somebody of the same gender, despite having no previous sexual desires for the same gender?
Twilight and Luna believe they are straight, that they are not 'Filly-Foolers'. And then the Sympathy just walks into their life and "NOPE NOPE NOPE'S" over their expectations.
So for me, part of the fun of writing this is having two People/Ponies who are caught on the social fence, with what they thought they were, how they are feeling towards each other, and what they fear society will think of them, justified or not.
Throw in Discord, a tipsy Celestia, Canterlot Nobility who're all gunning for Twilight's authority before she can establish herself like Celestia has, Gryphons agitating about a fourth Immortal Princess and threatening outright war over it and assorted shenanigans brewing on the horizon, it's going to be a trip.
Poor Luna, Oh I hope things start going better for little Lulu and Twilight of course.
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I am so in this for the long run! *sits next to packed bags eagerly*
I just read the description and i'm already in. It can just finish with success
I like it. I look forward to seeing what this will eventually become.
For the people giving me thumbs-down, exactly what am I doing that's 'wrong', so I can fix it in future chapters?
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The ones thumbing you down most likely aren't even reading your story. There are some users who just like pressing the thumbs down button it gives them a rush trust me. Also i'd be happy to be a prereader for you i'm very fast!
Huuum, interesting so far. Deserves more attention than what it has gotten so far, that much is sure.
Favorite and upvote!
Dreaded that a weird way to spell welcomed
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Oh.
Yeah, it's not everyone's cup of tea.
Okay, that whole plot recap you do in the middle here? Completely unnecessary, and it just ruins the momentum of the chapter.
Empathy, not sympathy.
Aw yeah, dawg!
These title drops are so subtle you just roll right past them.
I'm so sorry, I couldn't stop myself. I'm still loving the story.
I'm sorry to bring this up again, but if this keeps up I'm starting a drinking game.
It's okay though. I have my own drinking game. Every time I have a story with a long title or mention penguins, peaches, or sloppy horse sex, you take a drink.
I've killed three people so far.
I love this story.
I'm glad I started reading this.
Also, who used a shackle on Luna? As it was implied that one was a long time ago...
Hey is Discord gonna be in this story
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half only HALF COME ON AUTHOR
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Wow Celestia is either a complete bitch/sociopath or criminally short-sighted, it's a serious and humiliating situation directly made worse by her both for her innocent and naive student and her 'beloved' emotionally damaged and temporally displaced younger sister and she can't be arsed to explain things quickly and immediately upon their waking? She couldn't even keep herself from smiling at their torment while 'sincerely' apologizing for causing it, She listened/watched as they went through humiliation and panic as soon as they woke up and just watched and giggled. She only acts humanely once Luna (rightfully) accuses her of banishing them, then she immediately brings out artifacts Luna plainly has personal and painful experience to 'help' them during their exile upon which Luna panics again (also perfectly reasonably since she plainly has personally been the victim of those exact artifacts), and Luna backs down instantly and apologizes for "jumping to (entirely reasonable) conclusions" both times. I fully expect Celestia knows more about this whole Sympathy thing than she is telling and is just exiling them together in a attempt to pair them off, despite the fact that she should know damn well that they both (believe at the very least) are straight (maybe I would accept that from Cadance since she presumably has secret insight into people's love-lives and possibly sexuality, but Celestia is just meddling for shits and giggles as far as I can tell.)
Edit; it also occurs to me that this is a fairly non-urgent problem anyways, the effects only happen when their horns touch so sending them off and not letting them come back until they figure it out is completely unnecessary, this could be worked out during a holiday or anytime at all really, they just have to not touch horns until then, this further supports my theory the Celestia is just doing all this to ship them together, despite their sexualities being very much opposed to that.
Also the government is supposed to be a bloody diarchy (triarchy? Quadarchy?), Luna is plainly subordinate and has no real authority or trust except what her sister allows her.
Chapter 3 - I aaam Liiiiking thiiis!!!!!!
I'm calling it the cube thingy and shackles are gonna come back to haunt them.
Also is no one going to question where the missing letters went?
PTSD's a bitch