Twiluna Fan(clop?)fic. Twi and Luna magically bound to each other. Gryphons massing at the borders. Chrysalis trying to get back into Equestria. Discord being Discord. Canterlot Nobles trying to tear Princess Twi's authority apart. YAY!
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Yay, your alive!! (Celebrations for multiple applications of that phrase!)
I feel ya for the dead comp, and the hassles of work, illness, and bills. Also know what it was like to have carbon cutter characters from my players. (Seriously, had one guy whose characters all looked, performed, and essentially had the same name over multiple sessions till we called him out on it.)
But seriously, it is good to not only see you active here again but THIS story as well!
As always your story never fails to impress... Thank you for continuing this master piece.
Ah good you're not dead.
So, Are Nightlight and his group of veteran scouts going to arrive to find that Appaloosa is in turmoil, and take it upon themselves to solve the problem to repay Celestia for her generosity?
OK,
I just caught up with this story by hammering all 79 chapters in three days. Overall I like it.
The view of SunButt being manipulative and a control freak, fits my personal opinion of her. That being said, Our poor little border guard is screwed in my opinion. As long as he remains useful and controlled, he will stay alive. If either of those two factors change........well, he wouldn't have to worry about that for long. Again I consider Celestia a morally dark sociopath with a very unhealthy obsession with the pony race. Anything what so ever that remotely endangers her ponies is dealt with. Your interpretation is a little different.
I also like the world you built, its well flushed out and you thought outside the box enough to make it interesting. If the FIM Cannon Nazis would shut the hell up, we would have a whole lot more fascinating and enjoyable stories on this site. Much like yours.
Spike. I can't stand what the show and most writers did with Spike. They treat what is clearly an intelligent teenager like a useless child, slave, or a pet. In my opinion, the only reason that he looks like he does, and not like Garble, or Smolder, is because of his stunted upbringing. I bet Celestia had a hand in that. A weak, malnourished dragon with self-esteem issues is oh so controllable. I like your take on Spike, as well as the realistic attitude you gave him, and I hope you let him keep some of that growth. It just fits much better with how he is portrayed than the ridiculous design the artists gave him.
You did very well on this story. Your characters are intelligent and the decisions they make, as well as their reactions are realistic. I have noticed a worrying trend over my years here, that writers are making their main characters dumber and dumber over time. With ridiculous decisions, and unbelievable reactions becoming far too common. I am at a loss to understand why.
I like your work and hope you continue writing, and not just MLP.
The Monk
"Knowledge is power and power corrupts, so study hard and be evil." - Reykan
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
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TwT
I require mooooore