Twiluna Fan(clop?)fic. Twi and Luna magically bound to each other. Gryphons massing at the borders. Chrysalis trying to get back into Equestria. Discord being Discord. Canterlot Nobles trying to tear Princess Twi's authority apart. YAY!
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That was evil x.x
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Well, yes, it is me after all...
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Enthusiastic cackling ensues.
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i hate clop, especially futa and foalcon . . and i still read your story <.<
You've got several spelling mistakes that any spellcheck should catch, plus you used 'Sunbeam' instead of 'Dawn Ray' at least once.
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Autocorrect is kicking my ass with stuff like turning Dawn Ray into Sunbeam, because I am having to try and reroute the chapters through an android smartphone (I prefer to call them dumbphones for how ass-backwards they seem to be) but as soon as the landlines are fixed and I have a functional level of internet again, I'll be going over this chapter with a fine toothed comb to fix stuff like that.
Oh god, after all AJ's been through, it'll be a kick seeing her try to get a normal relationship going with Soarin'. Of course, her discovering he truly is interested in a "dirty ol’ farm mare" will probably be a gut buster on its own.
And fuuuuuuu**, what was Granny Smith like in her younger years?!
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Granny, you just won everything.
Yeah, I think you can see the mistake.
Alright, I’m finally caught up again. I love when Granny Smith is portrayed as just the filthiest old broad. Reminds me of my Great Aunt. Damn she had a mouth on her.
So, yeah, I said I finally caught up. There was a point there in the thirties or forties where the plots were getting so numerous and convoluted that I kept bogging down when I tried to do a read through. It was getting to the point that Chekhov had enough munitions to field a small army. But damn if it hasn’t started really paying off. The Russian playwright’s regiment has entered the fray and it looks like ammunition stores are running low (though I know you have a couple more stories planned, so I’m sure they can expect resupply at some point).
In other words I’m really super digging how the story’s going and looking forward to more.
... Celestia I've never love you more, but Luna is still my lord and saviour, sorry ;-;.
TwT that has dirtied my soul, I'm not ok right now. Why did you mess up our sweet old lady? *sad faces*
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STOP please
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Cackles even harder!