i wanna shine brighter than the sun in the sky.
Rainbow Dash, your average girl living in Canterlot, kept making strange things happen randomly without knowing. One day, on her eleventh birthday, she gets an owl telling her that actually she is a witch and needs to go study in Hogwarts, a school for the witches and wizards.
This story is majorly about her first year there.
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Your story seems extremely similar to this one: https://www.wattpad.com/story/140175676-mlp-in-hogwarts
Is that a coincidence?
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Partly. That story is my inspiration for this one. But if you continue reading, then you will find out it is totally different. The beginning might be similar, but Rainbow's past and her school life is different.
9174811
Also, my friend would like to ask you what your plans for your story are. Do you have a Wattpad account?
9176928
Yes. SeleneMizutani1.
9177751
Okay, thank you!
Your going abit to fast whit this story, ther is to little of the awe and wonderment that permiated the first books.
But otherwhys it is a good stoory set up.
9208664
Thanks. I'll try to do better.
And we have our Mallfoy whit crew.
Also it is dangerus to make charakters direktly to charakters of the original story as this put ciertan expatations on them.
Applejack is a good pick to be relaited to Harry personalety whys. But many will be looking for other traits as well.
I am allso uncirtan about no muggles on 93/4. Anyone know?
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I don't know. But the plot will be very different form the original later on.
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WHATA HELL IS RAINBOW DOING IN SLYTERIN?!?!?!
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IDK.
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You are the athure! How can you not know!
Wat?
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9240649
I thought it worked well...
Rainbow really did Well. No doubt she will gain respect from her follow Slytherin.
explaining Dash's wand to Princess Twilight if she ever shows up might be awkward. that or she will be super excited to see if her hairs are good ingredients for wands.
an insult exchanged for an insult. dirty filthy, common blood vs. ignorant, stupid, know nothing. which is truly worse?
this is so inaccurate. i suppose you changed it to fit your story. only explanation. there has never been loyalty in Slytherin. backstabbing isn't just common, it is the national sport of Slytherin. loyalty is Hufflepuff.
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rainbow wouldn't have taken that. she would have stood her ground. also, im pretty sure muggles ARE allowed on the platform. otherwise, they wouldn't try keeping it secret with notice me not spells when people pass thru it.
points btw, for doing it your way. first i've seen it done this way.
9245085
She was distraught from experiences of her past, so every time this happens, memories come back to her and she isn't able to retaliate.
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Let us hope she’ll fight trough the first year.
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She will, she has strength of character, unlike me in real life. I'm like a porcelain doll, no personality and fragile.
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If I were a mudblood and live in Slytherin, I would ignore the bullies and keep up with my studies with my head held high.
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But traumatic events never heal...
9247867
Yes, you’re right.
That's it! I'm going to cast the killing curse on those Three Girls!
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Don't! Rainbow needs obstacles to overcome them, and that's what makes a story good, right?
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Okay, I will calm down.
LIFE ISN’T BUCKING FAIR, YA ASSHOLE!
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Yeah. I know that from personal experience. I was bullied for no apparent reason I could see. It's wreaking havoc on my mental state. I'm like always saying,"I wanna die." But, my friends always pull me back. I wish sometimes they won't do that.
Hey, Sunset, Lightning, Gilda. I have something to tell you Avada Kedavra, Avada Kedavra, Avada Kedavra
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...I don't know. I rather point the wand at myself and say,"Avada Kedarva."
I thought it would be a Pegasus, but, an Alicorn works nicely too.
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It's an Alicorn because Rainbow had powerful magic and strong personalities, matching both pegasus and unicorn, that's why it's an Alicorn.
Sometimes I wish that Sunset would just give it a rest....but then again, it is Sunset we're talking about here.
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Yeah. People never change
Dear Sunset,
Please eat your own words, and take your own advice. You’re insulting the first person to do a SONIC MOTHERBUCKING RAINBOOM!!!!!
Suck some wands,
Efadd
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Don't insult others, even though when they deserve it. I did that and was bullied more in repayment.
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Allright. I’ll revise
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Better, Even bullies don't like being insulted like that.
Heh... Zootopia reference and a half. I sang it under my breath
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I kinda ranted at Sunny the first time. Some time and a revision was probably a good idea from the beginning.
Story is moving along at a pretty fast pace.
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Really> It's only like the third or fourth day of school!
Good song...
/5
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Which one?