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Johng117


I like Kaiju, Ponies, and Anime. If you're interested, you can find my illustrations for my stories here: http://johng117.deviantart.com/

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Beings of renowned strength and power are made when man sought to harness the power of gods for themselves. However, these beings can not be controlled. In his hubris, man has created a hated enemy. Only one has the power to restore order in a world falling into chaos. He is no longer alone. This is his story.

(This is a crossover and humanized fanfic of Godzilla and MLP FIM. Cover art is done by me! A special thanks to ThePMB-Brony and Moongaze14 for helping me correct grammar errors and proof reading this fic.)

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I like it! Gonna need to get used to the humanization of the ponies, but I'm loving this!

Nice work on this chapter keep up the great work here

I loved this chapter. It's nice to see that Gojira is starting to open up to other people...and that he's human enough to recognize how attractive AJ is.

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I'm guessing Yasu is mothra's trasmutation
but anyway,things are about to get real when the other mutants come

Nice to see that Mothra, Anguirus, and Rodan have joined the party. It's also cute to see that Teilight and possibly Flyttershy are starting to get a crush on Takeshi-kun. The only bad thing is that Gojira didn't have a chance to punch Gilda back for being a bitch. Anyway, thanks for this amazing, lengthy chapter. I hope the next one comes soon.

5249547 thank you for the read, the fave, and the watch! I enjoy writing this and I wanted to try something a little different with godzilla/mlp crossovers. And yes, it is unfortunate that our hero didnt get to go for another round. But, he'll have bigger fights than bullies.

Swearing included, no F or S bombs.)

But... You said there wasn't any swearing in this story! Will the Kaiju be humanized in this story?

5249786 the kaiju ARE humanized. Gojira Takeshi junior (godzilla jr.), Mosura Yasu (mothra), Angirasu Riku (anguirus), and Rodan Shou (rodan). I just refer to their names in japanese for this story. Also, I do not recall ever saying that there wouldn't be swearing. I said swearing was included, just not the S or F curse words.

I'm getting a X-Men sort of vibe with the transmutants.

I also love how you handled the touchy subject of racial prejudice. It really does reflect on how the media would vilifie a certain race. I'm glad you didn't "suger-coat it", You give us a reason why this prejudice exists, and you showed us how harmful it is to the people (or mutants) of that nationality.

All & all I'm looking forward to what happens next. Keep up the good work.

5250231 thank you for reading! I did take inspiration from a lot of things such as the incredible hulk, x-men, etc. to create this story. Plus, real life examples do help. I look forward to hearing yours and other readers' thoughts in future chapters. (You'll see soon why hulk helped created this story.)

5276548 good news is that I'm nearly ready to publish the next chapter. I just need to review it and have it looked at by a trusted friend before I'm comfortable with it.

5277912 I apologize, I accidentally hit the publish button while I was editing. I unpublished it because its still not ready. It won't happen again and I'm almost done.

Location: classified, twelve years ago...

POV: Gojira Senior

Because Junior and Senior need to identified as different or it causes you to re-read to understand!
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Keep them coming, it's good!

those.........fucking.........MONSTER'S!!!!!!

5283975 sorry. I'll fix that. Thanks:twilightsmile:

Moar is required.

Being liked is grossly overrated.

Isn't that a line from Shrek the Musical? (Which a high school near me preformed, which is how I know it exists.)

"This calls for desperate measures, Pinkie Pie style!" said Pinkie, her face filled with determination. She then took off in the other direction.
"God help us," said Junior to himself.

Good, he's learning fast.

5298213 :twilightblush: yeah you caught me. I just really liked that lyric and thought it would fit Godzilla.

5298206 coming soon. I just want to see if I'm satisfied with the next chapter first

5298395
Okay to both comments one and two,in Twilight Sparkle lavender!

Nice to see this chapter uploaded.

5302312 I was very eager to get it up!

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each chapter update has an exciting aura in it

5302453 Does it? You flatter me :twilightblush:

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Gojira x Twilight is a good shipping to this story and I'm liking it, shame I can't like the story 5 times

5302710 Thanks a lot! I was afraid that people wouldn't buy it. Anyway, if you could share this story with others, I'll count that as you giving me six likes. :twilightsmile:

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5302460
oh it does, I'm liking how junior is interacting in the story which gives it this exciting aura in how he handles things his way
and, I like how you write his personality as a punk to others but sweet friend to those who knew him well, that's also why this story has a great mix in comedy and romance along with twice the action.
keep up the good work with the new chapters:pinkiehappy:

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5302731
I'll see what I'll can do

5302736 Thank you. It's good to know that I'm doing something right with him as a human since we can't get a full look at his character due to him being an animal in the Godzilla universe. We know that he is intelligent and has emotions, but we rarely see him express pleasure or happiness. Its mostly rage and sadness. Having him as a human for this fic for me I think can be almost as effective at seeing how this character lives as something that humans seek to destroy other then as a 300 foot beast.
I believe the Godzilla species tend to be more peaceful unless they are provoked. Allies/friends he treats much differently compared to strangers.

Sorry that I wasn't there to proof-read, but I still enjoyed what I read.

P.S. Judging by the descriptions I think that this transmutant is either Battra or Male Muto.

5305387 It's cool. Next chapter is almost done. I'm gonna have this story looked over by someone for grammar and then I'll send the corrections to you to double check.

It's great to see this chapter and the story advance. BTW, are you getting help from another editor? I think it's great as it looks more polished than before. Hope to see the next chapter soon.

5339818 Yeah. I have you, and ThePMB-Brony looking the story over. I also get someone else's oppinion on the chapter and see how he responds to it. I then send it to you for corrections and I send the corrections to ThePMB-Brony to see if I could correct some of the dialogue, then I look over the fic one last time before uploading!

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I still get that exciting aura when reading this story:pinkiesmile:

5339830 This isn't about your previous answer to the said person, I'm just asking a question myself.
When the mysterious voice (which we now know as Battra) told Junior was dying for lack of radiation in his system what happened to that? I'm mean he was all upset in the last chapter because of both his bodily reaction and keeping his secret form Twilight and the gang. So I ask again What happened to him Dying from his lack of radiation? I can't assume he got it because both the ending chapter and this chapter didn't establish that gain the radiation source he need to keep himself alive. This seem Like an vary important plot point.

That lead to other questions. How is he going to gain radiation when he need it? I mean since Celestia raise the sun, she must know must about radiation since the sun is store full of radiation or is it a different kind of radiation Junior or Takashi needs? He can't keep going around place without two things.

1. A vary good cover up story for his in and out disappearance. People will be questioning where he's going unless he come out and tell the truth he need to convinced the other to story that vary likely will not let his new friends know what he's up to or in need of worrying about him. Even more so to make himself less suspicious.
2. A Way to find a quick way to a source of radiation he and the other mutation need to consumed. I can likely see that they other too might need to same energy source if not himself. He can't always be trick if is life is always on the line, if consuming radiation keep him living. Thus he need his own supplied or reliable way to get the energy he and other like him may need of it.

What I'm saying is I hope your will explain or answer these questions in maybe the next chapter in your story.

5340462 I'll do my best to address those questions

5349685 Thank You my good sir, that all I ask you try your best.

Glad to see this chapter. It's my favorite so far.

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